Arhi SS: Broken - Prologue 10/21

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Happy Diwali!!!


Prologue:



The wind sliced the air, whipping Khushi's hair around her face.

"Don't think, just do it", said the melodic voice next to her.

Gathering up her courage and tampering down the bundle of nerves that floated within her, Khushi squinted down, a long way down, watching the blue waves toss against the cement piers.

"I don't know...", her voice trailed off.

Khushi turned to look into the familiar grey eyes that shone with mischief and wonder.

"I will if you will".

How many times had Khushi heard those words, moaning in protest Khushi rolled her eyes, "So not fair".

Laughter rang out as Khushi felt her hand being clasped tightly.

"It's what all good friendships are based on"

A small smile penetrated against the frown on Khushi's face, "You know that's blackmail".

"One..."

Once again Khushi's eyes connected with hazel, "Two..."

Khushi tried to reason as she felt her feet move forward, "You know your nuts".

"Three!"

A loud gasp left Khushi's lips as she jumped off the cliff, the feeling of floating as light as a feather ingulfed her, right before the piercing cold water swallowed her up, pushing her into a dark void of nothingness.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah! Welcome back. A New story. Looking forward to it. 😊

Interesting Prologue!!!

A Very Happy Diwali !!!!
Edited by inamajar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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looking forward to your new story
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Haila yeh kya hai... 😲




OMG what was that?! Is she jumping for a thrill or is something up...


Very intruguing start... can't wait to see what you have in store for us!


Welcome back my dear and Happy Diwali!
Edited by Chokri_ASR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome back Nidhi🤗, another awesome story and title says it all , can't wait to read more
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So excited for the ss

Waiting eagerly for the future updates

Update soon
Edited by IDatIF - 11 years ago
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Excited for upcoming chapters :D
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Yay!!!!!! You are back!

Eagerly waiting for another amazing ride with this story😃
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This surely reminded me of the Jab Me Met scene!! :D :)
Intriguing start!! :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😲
Mujhe batana zaroori nahi samjha (ASR Style)


Will be back...🤗

EDIT 2:

Nidhi,

I read the prologue and it's intriguing but I have no clue what to say and where you are going to take us with this. But with you being the WRITER I will be readyto jump off the cliff without you saying ONE, TWO and THREE... because with your stories I will float as light as feather.


Bring it on and I am so excited for this story by you.


Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago

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