SwaRon SS:Valentine Love (Part 6 Updated)

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Thanks for pm

Wow , ...speechless...wonderful ...i reading ur write up, feeling it's all happen infront of me .

amazing confession , lovely swaron

wow , surprize Shantanu Maheshwari ...great

but ending 😭 why jaldi ... i want to read more...

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Wow... that confession was really grand... just as you promised...

I am sure your valentine love is going to stay in my heart forever...

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Hey Dude,

It was amazing update..Seriously i liked the idea of confession..That was unique n apt for the required scene..It was such a grand confession,loved the way u had described each n every stuffs so beautifully that it was like a real picture of SwaRon confession..Mirror wala idea was unique and the dialouge delivery was perfect..Bottom line,This one update was hillarious..And at last,loved the way u revealed rebacca's surprise..Shantannu maheshwari here..and the reaction of both girls was literally funny..So totally it was amazing work by u chitra..I enjoyed and surly gonna miss this

Thanx for ur all PM and i hope u will keep writing ahead

Sorry for my misunderstanding as i got confused coz of other ff..Sorry😆

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Hayyyeee...killer tha...

Last part isse better ho hi nai sakta...swaron confession rocked...

It was so cute...the mirror...the candles... The crackers... Awww

And the surprise was a real shocker...i was wondering what could it be...but ye toh bohot zabardast niklaa...

Awesome work...

Keep writing more...

Thanks for the pm😊

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Bhumi06

@Bhumi06

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Hey Chitra...the confession was pure bliss 😳
Superb work dear!!!
Jhakaas surprise...issey jyaada unpredictable kuch nai ho sakta tha...lols 😆
Enjoyed it to the core.
Love
Bhumika

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@Slayerkajal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

The confession was awesome...
Dialoges , surroundings , everything was perfect...
And surprise..shantanu maheshwari...wow yaar..idea kaha se aaya...
Loved it truely...
Write more...

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Wow Amazing part do continue soon

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harini

@Idealistic

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Woah 😃.!!!!!!

u have written dat u r nt a writer but look at ur words and phrases used ...my my my ...i wld b short of words to appreciate ur talent ...let be the emotion..portrayal for characters ..continuation of story ...i wld again repeat the word "Commendable" because u justify it 🤗