EVKAV (Veeba) FF- Hum Heaye Sabse Bade Khiladiyan part 3

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This is an FF on EKVAV, but is more focused towards Veeba ofcourse, because I love them, it is kinda based on the current track.

EKVAV (Veeba) FF - Hum Haye Sabse Bade Khiladiyan

Prologue

It had been two months since a game is being played, a game which everyone is a part, but only a few know that the game exists and even fewer know the ultimate truth and they were the sabse bade khiladis. This isn't any football, cricket or basketball match where the players had to play fairly, no this was a game of life and death where only foul plays and crooked ways are allowed.

Chaiji was sitting in the courtyard tears were following down from her eyes as she hugged a picture close to her heart, she wiped her tears and stares at the picture in her hand, it was Veeba's, she ran her hand on the picture.
Chaiji: Why did you both leave us and go, it was my time not yours to leave this world. They loved each other so much that after one death the other followed behind.

Ranvi was sitting in his room, without any expressions, he remembered whatever happened in these two months, how their life took a 360 degree turn, how his most important thing was snatched from him his Veera, he hated himself now, he wished he had listened to Veera and accepted Baldev for her, maybe if he had done that the situation might have been different today.

Gunjan looked at Ranvi, sitting on the bed a tear dropped from her eyes, she hated seeing Ranvi like that and somewhere she was to blame, she had promised to support veeba in their love, but backed off when they most needed her.

Balwant was sitting on the couch, he picked up Baldev's photo from the side table wishing he had once told his son how much he loved him, once he would have believed his son.

Bansuri was in her house she was upset, extremely upset, first a month ago her beloved son died, whom she loved dearly. She was already shattered at his death but slowly began to bond with the girl whom her son loved, but than even she was snatched away, it had been eight days since she had gone. She remembered after Baldev's death how much Veera was shattered, she hadn't drank a drop water for two days. It was when she saw this she began understanding why her son was mad after this angel, the answer was simple because this angel was mad after him.

Teaser for Part 1 - Everyone gathered at SS house, as they wanted to have a small prayer for veeba and Veeba entry during puja, everyone shocked.


I hope you all will like this story, tell me your thoughts on the prologue.

Part 1 -Page 2
Part 2 -Page 4
Part3 -Page 6
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really really super...!!!! 👏
Waiting eagerly for next part.. 😉 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its so good. .. can't wait for the next
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Originally posted by: slan

Really really super...!!!! 👏
Waiting eagerly for next part.. 😉 😉


I am glad you like it.
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

its so good. .. can't wait for the next


Thanx, I will try my best to update fast.
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Originally posted by: vinu24

Interesting, continue soon


Thanks, I'll try
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Thank you everyone for you feedback. Just a small thing, in this part and the others you will find subheadings like past, present and flashback, since the story is about two months after that will be present, flashback will be when someone is remembering something, this will be in either past or present and past will be what happened before you will understand more properly after reading few updates.


Part 1

Past
The football match ended in draw, no one was happy about that because people wanted Baldev or Rajveer one of them to win, so it was a great disappointment. Veera knew that even her Baldev was disappointed so she had to talk to him, unfortunately she wasn't able to go during the day but managed to sneak out during the night and climbed Baldev's room window, she reached the top when what she saw made her feel jealous and hurt. A stranger girl was there she was running behind her Baldev trying to cheer him up, she had to be the one in her place, yet she was over here, not being able to do anything, no no she cannot give up, who is this girl infront of her she might not know, but one thing she knows, he is her Baldev only hers, like she is only his. As soon as Simran went out of the room she entered.
Baldev: Know you remembered about me.
Veera: I tried coming earlier but I couldn't .
Baldev: You have time for everyone, except me.
Veera: As if you were missing me alot.
Baldev: Yes, I didn't miss you.
Veera(in tears): Ya, of course you won't, with that witch around you, why would you.
Baldev: What witch.
Veera: The same one who was in this room five minutes ago.
Baldev: Oh she is mom's..., (in anger) why should I tell you, who are you to me.
Veera: I am your bhootni, your kamli, your sherni.
Baldev: You didn't realize this during the whole day.
Veera(crying): Baldev trust me, I tried, I truly did.
Baldev: Veera, please don't cry, you have no idea how much your tears hurts me.
Veera: Then why did you make me cry.
Baldev: but even you made me cry.
Veera: So my sher even cries. I didn't know that.
Baldev: Even I didn't know that, before I fell in love with you I never knew I would be able to fall in love.
The both hug each other, whispering an I love you.
Veera: Baldev but you didn't answer my question, who was that girl.
Baldev: She was Simran, beeji old friend's daughter, she and beeji's friend is going to be with us for a few days.
Veera: I don't care, she is whose daughter, or who is whose friend, all that I know is that am the only girl who has a right to enter your room late at night.
Baldev: Jealous
Veera: Why would I be.
Baldev: You were teasing me about rajveer, tandoori Baldev, what are you tandoori Veera.
Veera (blushing): It is my right to get jealous, because your mine.
Baldev: Then trust me that I will always love you.
Veera: Promise, I will always trust you.
Veeba hug

Present
Chaiji: Ratan I was thinking it would be nice to have a small puja in the house for Veera and Baldev.
Ratan: Whatever, you feel right.
Nihal: Ratanji, I am going to the polyhouse side, the work has been stopped for sometime now, Veera and Baldev had did a lot of hardwork in that, I would not want that to go to waste.
Ratan: Ji, Nihalji.
Chaiji: Ratan why didn't you apply sindoor in your partition. You are not Sampoorn widow, but Nihal's wife now, don't you remember, how much Veera and Baldev fought for your happiness, with Ranvi.
Ratan: Chaiji, but Ranvi is still upset about the wedding.
Chaiji: Ratan puttar, it is not about the wedding, so many things happened in two months, life has turned upside down.
Ratan:(ignoring the conversation about her and Nihal) Chaiji, I will get everything ready for the puja and call everyone.
Ratan left from their and went to her room, she sat on the bed remembering the day, veeba got her married to Nihal, she remembered how the girl she hated since a baby, was ready to go against the whole world for her, how this boy who was supposed to be her daughter's boyfriend was ready to go against her son, knowing that this would have led to their separation.

Evening, after puja,
Bansuri: Ratan, it was nice of you to arrange this puja,thank you.
Ratan: What is their to thank me in this.
Bansuri: No, Ratan this thank you is for supporting Veera and Baldev's love.
Ratan and Bansuri hug each other.
Gunjan: Papaji won't you forgive me even today. I know I made a mistake...but...
Balwant: Mistake, because of your this mistake, my son went to his death bed being blamed for something he had never done.
Bansuri: Your son,in his whole life you never remembered that, I know gunjan was at fault but more than that you were.
Chaiji: Not only Balwant we all were.
??????: None of you were.
Everyone turned behind to see where the voice came from, it was then they got the shock of their lives, as they saw veeba infront of them, both of their names escaped from everyone's lips, they asked each other to confirm if the other saw what they are seeing.

Precap: Story behind Baldev's death


Tell me if you like it or hate it.
Edited by janvi0513 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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If i assume. Baldev and veera r playing some game. Interesting!
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m so excited to know the story... pls update soon
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Definitely like.

this is really good. Want to know why they had to fake their deaths.

Update soon

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