ArShi SS : Fanaa *Pre-Independence Love Story* Pt 1 Updted

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ArShi SS : FANAA


Character Sketch

Arnav Singh Raizada - 25 yrs old Indian. An extremist who is interested in armed fight rather than ahimsa while dealing with the British people. Follow the path of Bhagat Singh in freedom struggle. Done his education from England because of his family's emotional blackmail. Turned to an extremist after returning back.

Khushi Edwin - 21 yrs old British girl. Brought up in England. Came to india with her father as her got transfer to here. Bubbly & talkative. Don't know hindi at all. Will reveal about her name later.

Mr.William Edwin - khushi's father British citizen. British Collector of the State. Strict & like to dominate others.

Mrs.William Edwin - Khushi's step mother British Citizen. Don't loves khushi & Indians too. Party & status freak.

Anjali - 28 yrs old Indian. Arnav's elder sister. In love with arnav's friend ranveer. Loving & sweet person.

Ranveer- 30 yrs old Indian. Arnav's friend & anjali's lover.

Shyam- he is in arnav's extremist group. Not a good person & hates arnav.

Ranvijay- assists shyam. Afraid of arnav.

Vir - arnav's best buddy. Hates women.

Aravind Raizada - arnav & anjali's father. Strict. Wants arnav to join in his business.

Ratna Raizada - Loving & caring mother of anjali & arnav.

Hope that you will like the story.

Do ask me if you have any doubt.

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INDEX
CHARACTER SKETCH : PAGE 1
PART 1: PAGE 1
PART 2 :
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PART 3 : PAGE
PART 4 : PAGE
PART 5 : PAGE
PART 6 : PAGE
PART 7 :PAGE
PART 8 :
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PART 9 : PAGE
PART 10 : PAGE

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FANAA

12 May 1945

"hey, leave me alone...I said leave me alone" a lady aged 21 struggled in the arms of two men.

"shut up... your people have been ruling our life for ages. Now at least, we should rule over you." Shyam said in hindi which the girl doesn't understand.

"I didn't done anything wrong to you. Please leave me." she cried while struggling in his hand.

They dragged her to an half build building.

Both of them pushed the girl on the floor.

"shyam, we should enjoy this night" ranvijay said to his friend.

"help...help me please...is there anyone here?" she shouted for help.

Shyam & ranvijay was nearing the girl but stopped hearing a voice.

"shyam...ranvijay...what are you doing?" a man in his late 20's asked them. She saw a girl standing near the wall crying in fear.

"who is this?" he asked

"our enemy" shyam replied

"I asked who is she?" the man asked them again.

"don't know"

"for both of your knowledge show you power on man...not on women & children. I will not allow this here. I am taking here back to her home" the man said & moved near her.

"im sorry for their behavior. Come I will leave you at in your house?" arnav said to her.

"no you cant take her, we found her for our purpose." Shyam tried to grab her hand but arnav hold his hand & strangled shyam's neck.

"you don't dare, try again" arnav said in anger

Seeing an angry arnav, ranvijay pulled shyam from there & moved from there.

Arnav looked at her & said

"come...they are gone"

Her sleeves are torn, so he offered her his cotton coat.

"thank you" khushi said to arnav. She know that he is not going to hurt her. she don't understand what they had talked as she don't know hindi. But she understand that he indeed saved her from the clutches of those nasty men. She reached in India yesterday from her home country England. Her father is the British Collector of the state. So she was roaming the city & lost the way. That's how shyam & ranvijay took advantages of her helplessness. But arnav saved her from them.

Khushi walked followed him giving directions. Both of them walked silently. Finally they reached her house.

so she is the collector's daughter' arnav thought

"hmm...don't roam here & there in night"

Khushi was going to thank him, but her walked away from her without giving her a chance to talk.

"how rude but a good man" khushi muttered about arnav.

Went inside her house thinking about arnav...

COMMENT PLEASE.

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Edited by joe4joe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jst awesm! Cntinue sn plz! Waiting
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Good start.. love the concept.. do continue soon.. best wishes and happy writing 😃


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Pre-Independence love story interesting continue soon
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superb update
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plz continue soon
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