Ashlok FF: Raabta... Do you believe in love? Chap 5 Pg78 - Page 64

Originally posted by: .Natasha.

Thank u Zehra🤗

I'm gonna let the chaps answer ur queries😆

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Unres..

Awesome chapter Nats! 👏 I love how you are slowly and steadily revealing the relationship Ashlok shared with their partners.

I am not surprised with Karan's good-natured attitude as you had already hinted that he wasn't one of those mean husbands but still I hadn't expected Karan and Astha to share such a warm and friendly relationship. Even if a couple is once best friends, one would suppose the bitterness to seep into the relationship after their separation. Therefore, I loved ur portrayal of this unique form of relationship.

Karan calling Astha pumpkin and her calling him paws was too cute.. 😆😳

Feel sorry for Astha. She seems so lonely. At least Shlok has his family with him unlike Astha

I found these lines very intriguing.

Her past did not haunt her, but it pained her. She stopped believing in relationships, love and anything that had affinity with it.

Wonder what could have happened with her to make her stop believing in relationships. If Karan wasn't the problem in their marriage then was it Astha's family as u have hinted a few times before? I have a feeling Astha's family is the reason behind her melancholy

And wow Shlok and Swati's love story was too cute but heartbreaking at the same time. What an adorable and much-in-love couple they were.. 😔

Also loved Shlok's dream part...very mysterious. Interesting that Swati too wants Shlok to let her go and move on in his life with Astha. I just found this part really touching and how u showed it through is dream. And the end where he sees Astha crying just added to the mystery...very interesting note to end it on. Now I can't wait to read the next part and see where his dream will lead him to. Also nervously waiting for the bubble to burst. Update soon this time!

Love ya 🤗

Originally posted by: .Natasha.

I swear I replied yeh kya ho raha hai? In fact this one is my fav comment... I'm sorry baby...

I'll let my updates answer the questions, I don't wanna give away things, I'm a big mouth😆

I knw Shlok Swati love story is cute n heart breaking, par ki karaan?

Comment ke liye shukran ji!😃

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

Nice