T2: Adhuri Kahani (Part 60 & epilogue: page 94) 16/8

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Man! oh! Man!

I am well past the "Zaid is only doing his duty" excuse and really beginning to dislike him. A lot of cops would look long hard at the murder victims profile and let things slide. Why the hey is Zaid so worried about bringing to justice a slayer of rapists & the likes?😡 He should be happy his city is being laundered without him raising a single finger.

Quite a roiling in the lives of these four. 😭

Loved it! Update soon!😳

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Awesome update...

Sha thought of Pooja Aunty...🤣🤣🤣

LOL...Sha dont want to go for puja...😆😆😆

Z-N came at Sameer's house...

They searched Sha's house & found the things of Arjun...

Sameer-Roshni-Aisha told them the truth...

But trio tried to avoid telling about Arjun instead they tried to save Sha...😃😃😃

Z-N dont want to believe but they dont have any other choice...

Z-N found Shaina's number from Arjun phone...

I wonder How vll Arjun react when he vll found his things missing...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

The friends couldn't hide it any longer after seeing the evidences with ACP Zaid.Zaid and Naina are also as confused as the others were few days ago.
Hope that they try to understand the situation and act according to it.
Shaleen is unknown to all of it.
Zaid even reached to Shaina, but she's missing.Where did she go?
Hope she's fine..
Great update.
Liked it.
Thanks for the PM.

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prachi

@prachi90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Awsmupdate
as u already said dat it's adhuri kahani...har update adhuri kahani hi hiti h ismein 😊
Masa shaaa aur sam ko pooja k liye lejane wali thi...bt all dis happn
srry can't reply on last update...bt aftr redng dat I cs thinkg k Arjun ne zaid ko challamge krkw bhot bdi glti krsi h...aur zaid ko ab shaaa k ghr se sare profs mil jayege nd cell bhi jisse wo shaina se baat krta tha..
Nd in dis updte u pendown all dis
Poor shaaa...fellng vry vry vry bad sad for him...koi glti nhi h still.he hv to suffer
Rosh sam Aisha all r vry upset...one thing d way u show bond of dese 4 nd efforts vch all r dng to save shaaa...really luvd it
waise vd ur kind permission can I give some punches to.zaid nd naina...is case ko chodkr koi aur case nhi h... 😡
ab to shaina tk bhi pahunchgye ye dono...
Well I lyk character of zaid...honest officer.
Bt iitna bhi hinest nhi hona chaiye tha ise...hehe
on a serious note ek request h...shaaa ko prob mein dalna..itna pyara charactrr h nd innoccent ...baki I knw u h already pland d story 😊
Update soon

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Just Superb
awesome update
and thanx for pm...

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 36

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

woohoo!! me first!! yippee!!

Awesome update di

👏

loved it

Fantastic!!

Shaina left her hostel..par kahan gayi he wo??😕

Zaid is confused what to do next!

AIsha n rosh worried.. Sam n Maasa too..

Sha was enjoying to the core..

Dr. Khan planning to start the treatment n he talked to Zaid

Sha is pained due to Arjun's voice

finally marriage.. everything was smooth..

sha was upset as rosh avoiding him.. she handled the situation nicely!👏

she took a promise from sha..

maasa was broken.. n sha heard it all

n the next moment..it was Arjun.. Zaid n his team also came..

sha..Arjun held sam .. rosh gave him sedatives..

dr. khan came.. loved his question👏

what will Zaid do now?

waiting to know it

do continu soon

thankx for pm

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Unres

Woo hooo... full on dhamakedar update 😊

Poor Shaina ... I just hope Karan helps her on time 😳

The toast part was sooo touching 👏👏 ... loved it 😊

What the hell is Zaid up to ... ek baar boli huyi baat samajh mein nahi aati kya 😡😡😡

Why does he have to poke before marriage ceremony gets over

Now I really feel like killing this guy 🤢 ... he is not even letting a doctor treat Sha ... even when he knows that Shaleen is not well

The Arjun-Shaleen conflict part was lovely ... Arjun trying to take complete control over Shaleen, but Shaleen is still resisting him 😳

Poor guy ... couldn't even enjoy baraat because of headache that Arjun gave him

So finally Shadi done ... phew 😳 ... the most awaited moment 😛

Awww... lover boy Shaleen hurt to see Roshni avoiding him 😆😆

Eeshhh... ye kya hua ... the moment when Roshni hugged Shaleen bringing him back from Arjun reminded me of the song:

Lag ja gale k phir ye haseen raat ho na ho... shayad fir is janam mein mulakat ho na ho 😭

The conversation between Roshni-Shaleen meant a lot ... it had so many hidden emotions 😊

And everything toppled in a moment ... Shaleen and Arjun both got to know about Shaina ... and this finally triggered Arjun 🤢

And to make matters worse, Zaid and Naina came there 🤢

Arjun trying to choke Sam and still Sam pleading to Zaid not to shoot Arjun was the saddest and most touching moment 😭

Just like Sha, I too felt pathetic

And Arjun tried to hurt Sha ... trying to commit suicide 😲😲... but for the first time Zaid did something sensible by saving Sha 😛

Poor guy

Finally Dr Khan is here ... I hope he makes Zaid understand the gravity of the situation 😳

BTW... I watched Bhoolbhulaiya just before reading this update and could actually visualise personality changes in Sha 😉

Now waiting for Shaina's mission 😊

Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

kill me girl!!! it was a breathtaking chapter!!

starting with Shaina... she left with Karab right...and also wiped her trail well. but I really hope ke woh jaldhi mile...coz only she can testify for Arjun.
sha...felt really bad for our boy...bechara... Arjun was taking a toll on him... but iss bahane Roshni se confession vi mil gayee... however, i loved the way you penned down his misery... well actually i loved the painful happy days... sam,rosh,Aisha, masa, each and everyone was forced to smile...itnnaa torture!!! kyun meri jaan!!!
Zaid...usko kya kahoon...uska haalat bilkul uss bacche jaise hua.. jiski samne chocolate icecream hain...but mumma ne khane se man kia hain...Arjun mil gaya...phir vihaat nehi laga sakta...hihi... yahan sabse jyada frustrates maybe yehi hain...aur aab new edition...dr.khan... tusi grt ho 10G-GM!!!

arre haan...loved the way Arjun took over... i was really waiting for that moment...aur jab aaya... it was simply amazing...

do continue... & thanks for PM.

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#410

kill me girl!!! it was a breathtaking chapter!!

starting with Shaina... she left with Karan right...and also wiped her trail well. but I really hope ke woh jaldhi mile...coz only she can testify for Arjun.
sha...felt really bad for our boy...bechara... Arjun was taking a toll on him... but iss bahane Roshni se confession vi mil gayee... however, i loved the way you penned down his misery... well actually i loved the painful happy days... sam,rosh,Aisha, masa, each and everyone was forced to smile...itnnaa torture!!! kyun meri jaan!!!
Zaid...usko kya kahoon...uska haalat bilkul uss bacche jaise hua.. jiski samne chocolate icecream hain...but mumma ne khane se man kia hain...Arjun mil gaya...phir vihaat nehi laga sakta...hihi... yahan sabse jyada frustrates maybe yehi hain...aur aab new edition...dr.khan... tusi grt ho 10G-GM!!!

arre haan...loved the way Arjun took over... i was really waiting for that moment...aur jab aaya... it was simply amazing...

do continue... & thanks for PM.