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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello!!!😃 Hope u all r fine!!!😃 M glad that At least u opened this post!!!😃

Anyways, Its a small Fan-fic based on Adi!!! Hope u like it!😃

(By the way, its just a small one & there will b no continuation)😃

Hope u enjoy it!😃😳

Sonia:- Bhaiya, wt r u dreaming of?

Aditya:- Sonia, i m not dreaming! I m looking at that painting! Its so cute!

Sonia:- Oh!!! Yeah its really Very cute!!! Bhaiya u knw the story of Radha & Krishna is so cute!! U knw they r lovers?

Aditya:- yes i know!!! I m thinking of writing a book on them!! Its just so beautiful!! Just look at them carefully & u will see a really cute Krishna who is so innocent & loves helping others! I really like the way he plays his flute! (Bansri) The sound of that flute is so clear & so pure that u forget every sorrow u have in life!

Sonia:- Bhaiya ur so write!! I totally agree wid u!! But bhiya y r so so so so deep in ur thoughts? Is something wrong? But say wat, I still didnt like Krishna! Y did he marry Rukmini when he loved Radha so much?

Aditya:- Krishna had 16108 wives in total!!! He was a total Flirt!!! He married Rukmini, not coz he loved her but there was a story behind it & that is y he married her! But say what, Krishna & Radhia jodi is made in heaven!!! I m definitely going to write a book onto this 2 lovers! There is so much trust, care, love, feel, pain! I m sure people wwill love it!

Sonia:- Bhaiya i will help u in this!!! But v shud write a book based on this story but v shud change the names! Instead of Krishna v cud write Dev & instead of Radha v can write Kaajal! Coz even Dev & Kaajal r 2 lovers!

Sonia:- I m so sorry bhaiya! I shudn't have said kaajal's name! Sorry!

Aditya:-Soniya! I m not upset! I m glad that i sacrifised my love! & Also it was one sided love! Anyways, I dont love kaajal anymore coz she is my bhabhi!!! Dev is my brother so obviously Kaajal is my bhabhi!!! Its a sin, if i fall in love wid my bhabhi!!! Soniya, ur so right!!! V will invent a new book based on the story of Krishna & Radha but v will use kaajal & Dev's name!!! The book's name will be At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet.

Sonia:- Bhaiya ur my best brother! I love u so much!!! I hope everyone gets a brother like u!!! Bhaiya, as for ur Radha, u deserve a Sita! If Dev bro is Krishna then ur Ram!!! wow!!! Krishna & Radha + Ram & Sita!!!

Take Care

Anoli

xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I love your FFs Anoli they are so well written and superB. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Adi fans??? woh to yahaan aate mein namak ke barabar bhi nahin. but i hope if Adi unites DK, then everybody will appreciate him. kisi shaair ne kya khoob kaha hai, 'aadat ki baat aur hai, dil ka bura nahin'. he is nice and he can be much nicer in the coming episodes.

waise i like your posts. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well done anoli. i must say its really well written, great dialogues and great essence of love. how well have you linked radhe-kishen with dev-kaajjal. beautiful 👏

you deserve a standing ovation. 👏

well done girl. well done!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well done Anoli...
tht was very well wriiten...ur dialogues wer mind-blowing...SUPERBB!!!!!!!! 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I have said this earlier....let me repeat again...
I have always enjoyed reading your comments, they are fun and more nuetral than most of us.......must be a Libran..... 😛
But I did not know you were so artistic as well.....so very beautiful, the fan-fiction was really nice. Enjoyed your little snippets, very sweet.
And I loved the comparison.......
Sante, Nupur
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😃

Take Care

Anoli

xxx

Edited by Anoli - 18 years ago
KKAA thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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weldone anoli superb FF io love it 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: superstar89

I love your FFs Anoli they are so well written and superB. 👏

Thank u Ellina for ur kind sweet words!!!🤗

Cheers!😳

Take Care

Anoli

xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruwaniplk

jus fab anoli👏👏👏

Cheers!😳

Take Care

Anoli

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