Tanhai ak EPILOGUE p53

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys...

as you all know rite now i am writing Pyaar, kya hulchul hai! well i have decided on writing another....so here goes nothing, i hope you like it...

Introductions:

The Khannas:

Dilip Khanna: a successful businessman…but unfortunately isn't able to give enough time to his kids..

Naina Khanna: a loving mother…and her first priority are her kids..

Kartik Khanna: 25 years old…and is very sweet…helps dad with the business.

Angad Khanna: 23 years old, loves to sing…is waiting for the love of his life but until then he flirts around….

Aaliya Khanna: 21 years old, very sweet…loves her family a lot…

The Sharmas:

Suryaban Sharma: loving father…successful businessman…friend of dilip

Gayatri Sharma: loving mother….and loves suryaban a lot…

Kanan Sharma: is married off to nishant saxena..isnt really important

Kripa Sharma: 22...used to be very bubbly, happy but do to an accident she changed forever….

The Boses:

Damini Bose: loving mother…

Prithivi Bose: 22...very sweet…flirty and loves his sister a lot

Mishti Bose: 21...is in love with karthik…and loves her family a lot…

The Agrewal's:

Josh Agrewal - 22..angad's best friend…flirty…loves aaliya

Sujal Agrewal - 22...you will find out more about him later….

Other Characters:

Nishant Saxena: kripa's jiju, married to kanan..very sweet

Payal Saxena: nishant and kanan's four year old daughter...

Chapter 1:

You see a girl in a white salwaar kameez crying in a corner of her room. A tear fell down her eyes as she once again thought of her past, that past that once gave her happiness, but today it only left her with tears. Just a few moments before she would have been married off to the love of her life but now she was only left waiting at the doorstep to see him, come and take her away. But no, destiny had something else in store for her.

TWO YEARS LATER:

Gayatri: Suryaban, please kuch karo, main apni bachi ko aisa aur nahin dekh sakti, doh saal ho chukhe hai…who isihe sadme se baare kab ayegi…Suryaban: who ayegi wapas…kuch nahin ho gah osihe….kuch bhi nahin…Gayatri: Suryaban…please…do something…main apni bachi koh kohna nahin chaate…Suryaban just hugs her…and tries to console her…but someone else needed all the love and support…we see her once again and this time as a stone…who forgot how to live….

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You see her eyes red from tears, her lips dry, her ears dying to hear her name from the love of her life, her hair wrapped up in a bun, you see her entire face…her eyes dreadful and the look on her face as if she were being laid in a coffin….

Gayatri and Surya come upstairs into her room and looked at her with hope and tears in their eyes…Gayatri finally spoke and said….kripa….kripa bheta…..

hope you all like it😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh princess this is really a sad one...my expirience says sujal is her past and angad is her angel

i loves the line as if she was laid in cofin

good job princess.keep up the good work and remember i m always there for u...no matter what is the situation

love u more than u

Asever😉

Amneet😳

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Intro Sukhi sounds interesting

I wonder what happened to Kripa
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Originally posted by: amneet89

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oh princess this is really a sad one..i agree....my expirience says sujal is her past and angad is her angel lets just say u know me very well...

i loves the line as if she was laid in cofini love it too...when i was writing this in my book just now it popped into my head...

good job princess why thank you di....keep up the good work and remember i m always there for u. i know and thats why you get so worried for me easily.....no matter what is the situation i know and im always there for you too...

love u more than u love ya too..😳

Asever😉

Amneet😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Intro Sukhi sounds interesting thanx anam di..glad u are bearing with me...😆

I wonder what happened to Kripa me too...😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

sounds interesting thanx a buncie😳




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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sounds interesting. It seems really sad though the first part. But its really good so far. Cant wait for u to continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow nice start continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing start
sounds really intresting cant wait 2 read who was the love of kripa
cant wait 4 the next part
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PART 2:

Gayatri: Kripa…mujhse baat karo main tumhari ma hoon, dekho…yeh papa hai…betha kuch toh bholo
Suryaban puts a hand on his wife's shoulder and kneels down…and says kripa…please bheta baat karo, hum tumhe khona nahin chaate…kripa please…dekho main tumhare liye kya lekhar aaya hoon…GUITAR…jo tum mujhse maang rahiye thi…Gayatri breaks down in tears and runs from there…suryaban goes after her..leaving krip alone, with a tear coming down her cheek…"I love you sujal" she says and slides down the wall.

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FLASHBACK:
Kripa: Sujal mujhe who choodiyaan chaaiye
Sujal: ha.ha, loh tumhe pasand hai, yeh humari shaadi waale din tum phe bhote khoobserat laghe ghi
Kripa: kyon..ab nahin lagte
Sujal: ha…leking osihe din zyada acha laghe ghe kyonki hum ek ho jaayenge
Kripa: Sujal..I love you..
Sujal: I love you too, kripa, I love you too
END OF FLASHBACK:

Kripa: Sujal tum mujhe kyon chor kar chale gaye..kyon wapas ah jaho sujal..wapas ah jao

[( SCENE CHANGES)]

Doctors are all over the place…the patients heartbeat is rising…
Doctor 1: nurse, grab the mask, hurry…
Doctor 2: Doctor…hurry up we have to save him, he was so close to being able to live…
Doctor 1: oh no, his breathing is sinking…bheta wake up…utho my child..oh no he is
sinking…DOCTOR….

WHO IS THE PERSON THAT'S IN THE HOSPITAL…IS IT ANGAD….OR SOMEONE ELSE?
KEEP READING TO FIND OUT…




Edited by tweetylicious - 18 years ago

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