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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: dsr11

agree to everything, crazygul.
@bold isn't that the saddest part?!

agree with u crazy gal...Vishu

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dsr11

@dsr11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: srilotus

my husband is the most irritating one...first ,he speaks so less...secondly ,he used to taunt me wen i watch IPKKNDEBP AND bdsah...toh kya main sirf NEWS dekhun??/
My only bf is my elder sister❤️ i love her more than my own life(tw)...but even she doent like IPKKNDEBP...SO I SHARE MY THOUGHTS WITH U...

just because he doesn't watch your shows, he is the most irritating one?! not fair, lotus!😛

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potomac

@potomac

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Dogan
Iam married buddy...what made u think otherwise...

GOSH!!!..another wrong calculation😲

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Swathiya

@Sathia007

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

DEEPA - you are making too many wrong calculation!!!

However, REKHA - you are trying your best to change CVS. GREAT - carry on Dear.

But you have to provide contructive ideas of the story line also - because , they do not know where to start and where to end.

MY observation so far- their story writer has got a big problem for selection of side story line - how to continue and where to stop. They are having problem to study a herd of the viewers also.

NO BASHING / JUST a few Suggestions from a real well- wisher fan.

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dsr11

@dsr11

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Sathia007
DEEPA - you are making too many wrong calculation!!!

However, REKHA - you are trying your best to change CVS. GREAT - carry on Dear.

But you have to provide contructive ideas of the story line also - because , they do not know where to start and where to end.

MY observation so far- their story writer has got a big problem for selection of side story line - how to continue and where to stop. They are having problem to study a herd of the viewers also.

NO BASHING / JUST a few Suggestions from a real well- wisher fan.

hey swathya,

unfortunately, i'm not that good at creating stories😕, but i can just tell them what's working for me and what's not. i want half the episode on ashlok scenes and the rest on other scenes. they also should show only one of jyo-sid and so-va-ma stories in an episode as much as possible. both the stories in an episode will be too much.

coming to the side stories, niranjan-anjali story is obviously very important to the ashlok story. that cannot be ignored, but too much of baba-bachcha scenes and saas-bahu scenes just spoil it for me. because i'm watching the show for ashlok romance and not for baba-bachcha or saas-bahu pyaar. i don't mind a few minutes of niranjan challenging or manipulating the other three - shlok, anjali and aastha. though the actors are excellent, too much of niranjan and anjali weighs down the episode for me, because their relationship itself has so much of negative intensity.

varad's triangle is something i find interesting because kavya is involved. their story is realistic and is different from the run of the mill stories because of how all these three characters are sketched. none of them are completely black and one can empathize with all three off them. also they are not constantly plotting against each other and there is no too much negativity surrounding it. it is less intense and easy on the nerves in contrast with the niranjan-anjali story.

jyo-sid story could have been so beautiful if only sid helped jyothi become independent first and then married her. jyothi's story could have been an inspirational one, but now her story has become the boring saas-bahu drama. i won't miss them if their story is ignored.

the thing i miss a lot on the show since the beginning is the lack of proper comic characters. jaya and renuka have the opposite effect on me. this show deals with a serious issue and it can become too heavy at times. though ashlok silly fights are fun to watch, there is a need for comic characters. i don't know why they didn't use shlok's skinny assistant, suresh, and aastha's plump friend, gauri, for that purpose. they would make a cute funny couple.

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priya

@Priya_ShrAvi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Sathia007
DEEPA - you are making too many wrong calculation!!!
However, REKHA - you are trying your best to change CVS. GREAT - carry on Dear.

But you have to provide contructive ideas of the story line also - because , they do not know where to start and where to end.

MY observation so far- their story writer has got a big problem for selection of side story line - how to continue and where to stop. They are having problem to study a herd of the viewers also.

NO BASHING / JUST a few Suggestions from a real well- wisher fan.

Hmm...as far as I kno... Our CVS are way too good in forming story line or characters...
And they very well maintain the flavour of a particular character...until they deal with or focus on the character...
They were always worst in unwrapping the back story...be it...niranjan abusive behavior, shloks ex gf story...and anji parents story...dont kno y...they always come up with least possible solution n less sensible endings 😕...and the biggest draw back is...LACK OF CONTINUATION IN STORY LINE...AND INCONSISTENCY OF CHARACTERS...
In short CVS don't rely on tying loose ends n they'll throw the script papers as soon as they finish shooting a scene 🥱

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dsr11

@dsr11

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: priya_avi

Hmm...as far as I kno... Our CVS are way too good in forming story line or characters...
And they very well maintain the flavour of a particular character...until they deal with or focus on the character...
They were always worst in unwrapping the back story...be it...niranjan abusive behavior, shloks ex gf story...and anji parents story...dont kno y...they always come up with least possible solution n less sensible endings 😕...and the biggest draw back is...LACK OF CONTINUATION IN STORY LINE...AND INCONSISTENCY OF CHARACTERS...
In short CVS don't rely on tying loose ends n they'll throw the script papers as soon as they finish shooting a scene 🥱

you are right about back stories, priya. they always botched them up.

they created great characters but i think they start a track without proper planning and when its not working, instead of fixing it, they rush it and spoil it beyond repair.

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