MG~ FF~The Jinx - UPDATED Pt 10 / Pg 137 / 19th Sep ................. - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
wht happened dat made maan changed sooo much...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.






Part - 4




Part - 5






This was not d first time that he was eating d food prepared by her ,, she cooked for yrs in KM when she was living there all praised her , but he never ,, at that time he rarely took dinner with all ,, gen he spent eve with his friends nd ate outside OR in his bedroom ,, d Jr Khurana was a grown up boy nd had his own life style.

Both wr eating quietly but a sudden sharp voice broke d silence of d home ,, their hands stopped at their pace ,, Geet left d spoon nd run inside d room worried .. OMG!!!! No .

Maan looked at her confused ,, d voice shocked him too nd his eyes followed Geet who vanished from there in a blink ,, he was looking at that direction where Geet went ,,that was a room , d bful curtain was down on d door nd d continuous sound was coming behind that ,, Geet's pacifying lovable words wr coming from there along with a baby cry ... Baby !!!

Maan was hell confused with all this , nothing was coming in his mind , he was staring at that side with open mouth ,, few min passed in that haze ,, Geet was busy inside d room to calm d yelping baby ,, who was quiet now but Geet's soothing words wr floating in d air ,, then she came out from d room having a baby in her arms ,, Maan was gaping at them ,, Geet sat in her chair having d baby on her lap ,, she was still busy in baby ,, Maan hardly uttered .

Maan: Geet ,,, ye baby !!!

Geet registered his words nd looked at him with a fake smile nd noded her head .

Geet: yeah , meet my baby , my son .. Manu.

Maan : ur baby ? he's ur baby ?

Geet: maine shayad wahi kaha hei ,, my baby .

Maan was still in confusion ,, his eyes wr roaming at Geet nd baby turn by turn nd now d baby was also looking at him ,, he was still sobbing clutching Geet's dupatta in his fist .. Manu ,, no doubt he was a very cute baby with lil brown curly hair , fair nd bright black eyes ,, d kid looked back to Geet nd she smiled at him.

Geet: say hello to him baby,, he's Maan uncle , u saw him in pics .

Manu: h e l l o nd extended his small hand for a shake with a sniff.

Maan took that soft hand in his lovingly nd said hello in return with a smile.

Maan: what's ur name baby ?

Manu: I m manu ( he replied slowly in his American accent )

Maan: sweet name , why wr u crying ?

Manu: I fell down ,, mommy , ( he sobbed again remembering his fall nd hurt placing his small hand on his head)

Geet: Oh ,, baby , it's fine now ,, ( she rubbed d place nd kissed there ) ,, u wanna eat something ?

He didn't reply nd looked at Maan ,, Geet tried to sit him on other chair but he denied nd clung to her more ,, Geet made him sit properly in d lap .

Geet: OK , fine ,, now my baby ate his meal ,, Mr Khurana plzz have urs ,, i'm sorry for disturbance .

Maan: no it's OK ,, i'm all most done ,, his eyes wr fixed on kid .

Geet fed baby nd had her too ,, kiddu was quiet now nd when he was done Geet made him sit on d other chair saying .. i'm bringing ur sweet dish , sit quietly.

He sat nd looking at Maan nd then gave a sweet smile ,, Maan smiled in return nd was surprised that d kid was quiet normal in d presence of a stranger ,, Geet came with d sweet dish nd placed on d table ,, she served in bowls nd gave Maan nd then to kid whose face lit seeing d yummy choco mousse in front of him .

Manu: ye e e,, cho co moos ,, mommy fol me ?

Geet: yeah baby , for u nd uncle ,, come ,have ,, plzz Mr Khurana have urs.

She sat on chair nd fed d kid who was over joyed seeing his fav dish ,, Maan too liked d mousse ,, after all that was his fav too ,, after d delicious dinner Geet got up nd placed all things back in kitchen nd crockery in dishwasher to clean them ,, Maan nd d kid was still sitting there in dining area nd watching her ,, Geet too was giving looks to d kid now nd then nd telling him to sit carefully while placing d thinks at their places ,, with in 10 min she was back nd lift d kid in her arms who wrapped small arms around her neck .

Geet: aaeye wahan baithy hei ,, aapko late to nahi ho raha ? coffee kuch der ruk ker letey hein.

Maan: No , i'm fine .

All came in sitting area nd settled in d sofa ,, Geet settled d kid on d sofa saying ,, sit here baby , i'm bringing ur toys .

Manu: no mommy ,, cal ( car)

Geet: fine , car.

She went in nd kiddu looked at Maan nd passed d smile ,, now Maan cdn't stop himself , he got up nd sat near d kid with a smile ,, he touched his head nd asked.

Maan: is it paining u ?

Manu nodded in a yes with a sad face nd touched his head again ,, he replied slowly.

Manu: that flool hit me heal .( he gestured with his hand towards d room )

Maan: aww,, dirty floor , we'll hit that back ,, OK .

Manu: mommy hit .

Maan: OK , mommy 'll hit .( he loved his quiet replies in cute tone ,, he knew that d kid was born here , living with Mexican family so got d American accent even now Geet's accent was like that )

Geet came back with his small mettle car nd handed that to him .

Manu came down from sofa nd sat on carpet , started to run that car by hand voicing .. zooommm,,,,zooommm ,,, he got busy in his play ,, Geet settled on d single sofa with a smile ,, Maan looked at her curious ,, he was dying to ask her about d kid.


Precap ------ Geet requested Maan ... ..



Part - 6




😊 next update on sat...


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
is the baby maans n geets 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
mist ko miss karrahi hoon..
is it nearing end
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🤗 Hi valli dear..
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Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 Hi valli dear..

how r u
when will u update tm
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

how r u
when will u update tm


😆 today both , which u want 1st..?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow you going to update..
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