Originally posted by: infernofyre
I finally got hold of my laptop.
This means I can comment.
God.
You have no freakin idea how thankful I am to you and the gods above and below that you told me about his fic!
I wanted to comment yesterday but I had to be with family and I finished reading the last part today.
So, I'll begin my actual review.
You had me hooked from the prologue. Randhir's pain was palpable. I could almost feel them like they were my own.
His hurt. His anger.
Beautifully depicted in words that echo in your head. I still can't get over the brilliance of a particular chapter
(The master stroke chapter was a masterpiece!!)
And to add to it...
You made a big mistake.
i'm serious.
YOU JUST DO NOT WRITE SUCH AMAZING STUFF ABOUT RANDHIR AND...
YOU GOT ME HOOKED AGAIN WHEN YOU INTRODUCED mysterious girl.
Class.
Sass.
Excatly the kind of female character that I love to read.
I am still rereading masterstroke chapter and I thought you should know that you are doing a hell of an awesome job.
Loving it!
Ash
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