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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks for the late comment...

thanks for the pm...

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Rupali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sorry for the late reply; I only got time to read it now.

So is that the end of the series or just of the story?

Fabulous ending btw. It was so emotional and gut wrenching. I never knew that the secret that Rohan eas hiding would be so painful. And I'm so glad to see Asad and Zoya finally growing closer. Look forward to your next story!

Rupali

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tehzeeb101

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Absolutely LOVE reading your stories! "All the Right Moves" gave me chills!! I cannot wait for "The Ghost in the Machine". UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!(:

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Lavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Hey Paly,

When are you starting Ghost In A Machine? Cant wait to read that one!

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samara5

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey Paly...when are u gonna update the next story??? Waiting eagerly...

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: tehzeeb101
Absolutely LOVE reading your stories! "All the Right Moves" gave me chills!! I cannot wait for "The Ghost in the Machine". UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!(:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have moved on to my original story now. I'll send out a PM when I start posting it.

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: volatile
Hey Paly,

When are you starting Ghost In A Machine? Cant wait to read that one!

I'm not working on QH stories anymore. I've decided to write my original story next.

QH - the story I followed and enjoyed - ended for me when Asad slept with Tanveer. I haven't watched it since. I know the characters died and the story changed to new characters. I don't feel the desire to write for the show anymore.

I'll begin posting my new story once I return from India at the end of September. I'll send out a PM. I hope you'll like my original story, too. You'll see a lot of my Zoya, Asad and Ayaan (from my series, not from the show!) in Aasha, Tarek and Shaan.

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: samara5
Hey Paly...when are u gonna update the next story??? Waiting eagerly...

The next story is my original story based in Chandigarh about a NRI boy and a local girl. I won't start posting it until I return from India and the UAE. I expect to start posting in October. I'll send out a PM when I do.

I hope you'll enjoy the next story!

Paly

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Lavina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: PalyGirl

I'm not working on QH stories anymore. I've decided to write my original story next.


QH - the story I followed and enjoyed - ended for me when Asad slept with Tanveer. I haven't watched it since. I know the characters died and the story changed to new characters. I don't feel the desire to write for the show anymore.


I'll begin posting my new story once I return from India at the end of September. I'll send out a PM. I hope you'll like my original story, too. You'll see a lot of my Zoya, Asad and Ayaan (from my series, not from the show!) in Aasha, Tarek and Shaan.

Aww...such a pity!! I was looking forward to meeting Mr. Faroouqui!! The relationship AsYa shared in your stories was so much more intense than the one in the show and I really enjoyed that.

Will definitely read your new work when you send me the pm. But if you have the time, I hope you change your mind abt Ghost in the Machine! Pls, pls try to write that one as well!