Sandhir FF: Unsaid Feelings Chapter 4 updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Sadda Haq fans I really felt like writing an FF and then a story popped up on my mind. I just want people to know that this story is real and I'm going to tell it in 3rd person. It's about my family my first cousins. It's a cute story that started of with hatred an then turned into love.

Character Sketch

Randhir Singh Shekhawat

A very handsome and dashing. Comes from a middle class family. Loves his cousins and family a lot. He is very short tempered but very generous. Eldest in the family

Sanyukta Aggarwal

Cute and beautiful looking bubbly girl. Eldest in the family so she is very responsible. She is super concentrated and focused in life. Very lively!

Vivaan Singh Shekhawat

Cousin of Randhir eldest in their family. Very cool girls die to be with him. He was always the centre of attention. Very chilled out and extremely smart!

Annaya Aggarwal

Younger sister of Sanyukta very pretty but very short tempered but really sweet. She is very fond of kids and locks to be around them.

Other characters will be introduced as the story goes along! But these are the main 4 the story
revolves around!!!!

<font size="5">For PMS PLEASE BUDDY ME!!!!!!!!</font>


Hey guys this my New Parsh FF dont forget to check it out and comment


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index:

Prologue : Scroll down
Chapter 1: Scroll down
Teaser : pg 2
Chapter 2A: pg 3
Extended Character Sketch: pg 4
Chapter 2B: pg 5
Chapter 2C: pg 5
Tease:pg 9
Chapter 3: pg 9
Chapter 4: pg 12
Edited by ArshaParsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue
Just to let all readers know this story takes place in Michigan

Common guys lets go for a 2 day vacation in the mountains it's just a 6 hour drive guys common it will be so much fun!!!! Said Randhir

Guys I had such a tiring day at work and I can't drive please!! Complained Sanyukta

Sanyu please, I'll drive common we haven't gone in vacation for so long replied Annanya

I agree with you Annanya said Vivaan

Oh please tu to rehna de jab Dekho tab Annanya ki side leta hai so just leave it! Said Sanyukta

Just the. Her phone rang she excused herself and went to pick up the call!

Kya yaar isne to full plan flop kardiya complained Krishh !!!! Mujhe hi aise behen kyu mile ??

Yeh rehna de Randhir do something said his smaller brother Aarav

You guys pretend that you all have to go to somewhere leaveone by one pretending you have to go somewhere go home pack ur stuff and Ananya you pack Sanyukta's and Aarav you pack mine please! I will make the excuse of dropping her home and we will got to River Side met you at the turning of Fosterhill at 9 p be ready everyone! Aur haan please koi gadbad mat karna !!

Sab se pehle Vivaan tum Jana aur Mahima ki pick up karna aur plan bata de na!!! Stated Randhir

Are yaar vo to kuch gadbad Kardegi please yaar use nahi said Vivaan

Teri behen Jo hai taunted Aarav

So does he succeed ?? Or will they need a new excuse????
Keep reading to find out!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

Randhir, as long as I think you missed the exit to my house, shouldn't you be taking the next one!!

N-N-N-N-ooo Sanyu its the next to next exit!! said Randhir nervously You are tired na that's why you are imagining things!! He knew he can't lie very well specially to his Sanyu!

RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT!!!! You are lying to me, I will kill you!!!😡

Sanyukta tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko ha! Jab dekho tab kam kam kam kuch aur to kar hi nahi sakti! Chup chap bethi raho 6 ghante tak ya me karo tume chup, uske bad hum log River Side Camp pohochenge!! yelled Randhir

Sanyukta was shocked, she new he was short tempered but she had never seen this side of him!

They met the others half an hour later at Fosterhill. They knew Randhir had freaked out on Sanyu because according to the plan it would keep her from shouting and it would help their plan!!

They loaded their luggage onto the huge trailer and stepped inside. They were very happy with the interior of the trailer.

It was a 4 bedroom trailer with 2 bathrooms and a huge living room.

Sanyukta and Annaya took one room it was beautiful decorated with a Queen sized bed. It was decorated with drapes and vases. They were very satisfied. But something kept ticking her, she knew she was guilty for freaking out on Randhir!!

Randhir and Vivaan took a room for himself he had a very classic style room with sober furniture and a twin size bed. He was very happy because he knew Sanyu would be tensed and she would come to him to convince him, but he had already planned something!

Krish and Aarav took another bedroom which had a Italian finish with 2 bean bags a huge double bed and a computer table.

Mahima took the last room which was a cute and comfortable room with a single bed and a nice little den.

Everyone settled into their rooms. Sanyukta was lying on the bed thinking of ways to convince Randhir when Annaya's phone rang.

It flashed Vivaan calling

A: Haan bol!
V: Come out to the front foyer! I need to tell you something about Randhir's plan!!!!
A: Haan I'm coming 5 mins!

In the foyer

Haan Vivaan bolo! said Annanya
Look I know the plan is very effiecent after all "The Randhir Singh Shekhawat " made it but there is one problem how do we keep Sanyukta away from Randhir? stated Vivaan
I will do one thing, I will make sure she can't call anyone and I will make sure she doesn't exit the room. I will make her feel really guilty that she yelled at Randhir!!

Just then Vivaan's phone rang, he picked it up!

Yes Veronica,

THE RED IS ANNAYA THINKING

who's Veronica

Don't worry we will go out for lunch when I come back day after tomorrow

ohh to Veronica ko lunch pe le jaa sakte hai per apni girlfriend ko nahi?

Ok talk to you later, bye

Vivaan turned around to enjoy a few romantic moments but Annanya was gone

Precap: Hey guys let's go for a hike man it will be so much fun!!!!!! It is 3pm it will be 8pm by the time we reach we will see the sunset at the peak and camp out that night!!

Please guys leave your comments below they really help!
Criticsm is more welcome than anything!
Please just write a one line comment but please comment!!!
Prishi😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
sorry late ho gayi *hold my ears* pout voh bhi cute wala 😆
its amazing prishi
starting is awesomeee
i want to know what will happen in future
next part soon
and thanks for pm me
love
bori
Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh dear thanx a lot for the pm
Read it and I really loved it a lot
Update soon k,I'll be waiting
Lots of love
Pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you Pari di
I hope they aren't boring
I will see on updating because I'm not getting any
response from anyone
Bye
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry i just read it now... Its really nice!! Seems interesting! Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2 Teaser

Randhir please forgive me please just forget that please?????
Sanyu pleaded
Sanyukta just please get out!
...
SANYUKTA AGGARWAL just get out of my sight Randhir yelled at the top of his lungs
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Annanya cut the call for the 16th time in 8 mins
What the hell is wrong with her why isn't she picking up my calls ????
...
As the sun lazily drowned into the valley Randhir picked his Sanyu bridal style and carried her to the valley peak
...
Sanyukta Aggarwal, Will You Marry Me?????


That's it guys I will try and update for Tuesday
Please comment!!!
Prishi

Edited by ArshaParsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i must say, its vry nice cocept. And the flow was damn good...plz continue soon...

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