IPKKND New FF: The Redemption - Chapter 5 : Concern - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Just saw your FF today. Enjoyed reading the same. 👏Waiting for your next update. Shyam is real menacing. Like Shyam said, he has seen the weak side of Arnav. Now worried, what evil intentions are brewing in his mind. 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
omg feeling bad for khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Interesting update.
i don't want a hate marrige or mu b/w arnav and khushi. But ff name is redemption.
so who's redemption will it be? Arnav, khushi or maybe shyam????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Now what will happen? ???? Will arnav trust khushi...?? Update soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Amazing one
Loved it
Shyam is a psycho and in a dire need of treatment...
Arnav is so helpless in frony of him.
Hopefully arnav decides to confront khushi too
Well written
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
This track!! I had loved this track. And though the FF uptil now, has gpne along whatever we have already seen, I enjoyed reading it. It was kind of more intense and I am eager to read ahead.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous
loved it
Arnav is roaring like a lion
Wondering what will be his reaction ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Super start.👏
Arnav misunderstanding Khushi over the Shyam fiasco.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awesome update!
I love the way you describe the emotions!
Update soon!
You have just gained another stalker for this FF 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter Four : News


Anjali could not have been happier. Even though she had gotten into a minor accident earlier, the rest of the day was turning out to be one of the best days of her life.


She had a loving family, a devoted husband, and a wonderful brother. A wonderful brother who was about to give her a bhabhi, she thought with a giddy smile.


She had seen the determination in his eyes, knew that her words about not putting off telling someone that you care about them had affected him, and if she knew her brother at all, which she knew better than she did herself, he had gone straight to Khushi once he left her room.


Yes, she was getting two bhabhis tonight, and...


She looked down at her stomach and placed a reverent hand on it.


She was also going to be getting a mini Rajkumar or Rajkumari very soon.


Yes, she couldn't be happier.


-----


Arnav marched into his sister's room. After talking to Shyam, he knew that the only way to keep his sister safe was to keep her as far away from that bas***d as possible, and the only way he could do that, the only way his sister would let him do that, was if he told her the truth.


"Di, we need to talk," he said, as he took a seat next to her.


She had been staring into space when he entered her room, with an absent, but joyful, smile on her face and his heart broke at the thought of what he was about to put her through.


"Chotey," she said, turning toward him with a bright, hopeful smile that dimmed when she saw his face. "Oh."


"We need to talk," he said firmly. It was difficult enough to deliver the news, and he didn't want to add-on to the agony by dragging it out.


"Is everything okay, Chotey?" she asked, getting up from the bed, despite his protests. "Did Khu..."


Blood rushed through her head and she swooned, and would have hit the floor if Arnav hadn't caught her.


"Di!" he exclaimed, worried panic evident in his voice. "Di! Are you all right? Hari Prakash! Get a doctor, dammit!"


She placed a hand on his shoulder when he assisted her to the bed, a gesture meant to calm him.


"A doctor's not needed, Chotey," she said with a happy smile.


"Di. Don't you dare deny a check up. You just swooned right in front of me," Arnav said, his tone suggesting that she better not argue with him.


But she wouldn't Anjali Raizada Jha if she didn't disobey his brother's orders.


"A doctor is not needed, Chotey, because it is perfectly normal for a woman to feel faint when she is expecting," she said, giggling at his shocked face.


"You are going to be a mama, Chotey."

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"His body tensed as his gut was struck with a frozen bullet of shock. He couldn't breathe."
- Sydney Knight, Alex


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AN : I cannot PM for updates because I am a newbie. But if you want an notification when I update, please scrap or PM me your email ID, and I will drop you an email. Thanks for the lovely comments.
Edited by Alchimiste - 11 years ago

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