Destiny Prevails :: A Mahabarata FF ( updated ch 3 on Pg 5 )

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Hi Guys,
This is my new story, It's set in today's world.

Genere :: Supernatuaral fantasy fiction.

The Story Plot ::

There is a secret hidden in deep bowels of earth, safe from the mankind. It is believed that it was buried by Lord Krishna moments before his death. But before burying it he had passed on its secret to three people whom he believed & trusted the most, those three were together known as The Trestle. If the secret comes out it could create havoc & destruction on earth. It was the trestle's responsibility to keep the secret safe from mankind & also to nurture it & pass to the next worthy generation so that the secret doesn't die out. It has to be kept safe till Lord Krishna comes down on earth as Kalki in the age of kali.


It's 21st century & the secret is now in danger of being exposed, now it's upto The Trestle to safeguard the secret with the help of the Heptacle from reaching it in the hands of The Triad, the evil ones.

PS :: This is a work of pure fiction. No intentions of hurting anybody's feeling.
Move down for Index & character sketch.
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Chapter Name Page number

Character Sketch

The Heptacle Page 1

The Triad Page 1

The Lone Warrior Page 1

The Beginning Page 3

And It Starts Page 4

Interlude Page 5

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Dharma :: He is the eldest, the most calm & composed, caring, the decision maker of the lot. Fiancee of Yagya.

Power :: Manipulation through mind, could move things by just looking at it.



Vrikodar Bheem :: The second of the lot, he is wild in nature but protective of his loved ones.

Power :: Unnaturally inhumane strength, could crush big mountains in a matter of minutes.



Arjun/Paartha :: The third of the lot, has great focus & commitment, protective & tend to be possessive of his loved ones, sometimes.

Power :: could create shields through his hands & minds.



Nakul :: The fourth of the lot, twin of Sahadev, Narcissist, knows how to make people laugh in difficult situation, blind follower of his eldest brother. Protected by his brothers.

Power :: could duplicate himself.


Sahadev :: The fifth & the last of the lot, twin of Nakul, the silent one among the five, he is on the intellectual side. Like his twin follows his eldest brother.

Power :: could read minds


Yagya :: Twin of Dhrishtadyumn. She is the heart of the pentacle, is protected by them. She is fiery in nature. Stands up for what is right. Fiancee of Dharma.

Power :: Can control Fire & manipulate it.


Dhrishtadyumn :: The twin of Yagya. Protective of his sister. Tend to be stupid sometimes.

Power :: Has the power of Earth.




Bhadra (Balarama) :: Eldest of the trestle. Mentor to them & Heptacle. Guides them in the right path.



Achala :: The second in the trestle, highly intelligent. Best Friend of Paartha. Loves to play flute. Twin of Subhadra.

Power :: Controls the wind & can manipulate it.


Subharda :: Also known as Maya. The bubbly twin sister of Achala & is overly protected by her brothers ( Achala & Bhadra ). Friend of Yagya. Harbors a huge crush on Paartha.

Power :: Could control water & can manipulate it.

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Duryodhan :: He is the eldest of his brothers, after the secret. He wants to gain immense power & rule over the world.

Power :: Inhumane strength just like Bheem.





Dusshasan :: He hasn't a mind of his own, blindly follows his elder brother.

Power :: Can run fast as in lightning speed.





Shakuni :: The master mind behind Duryodhan. His only aim is to fulfill Duryodhan's wish of ruling over the world.

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Karna :: He is a lone warrior, always brooding & craves for affection & recognition. He sides with Duryodhan knowing it is wrong but out of courtesy, but still is the Lone of the lot.

Power :: can become invisible.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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looks interesting..
waiting for story to start! 😳
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Nice concept! Waiting for the story!
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Wow !! Such A Thing Is My Childhood Fantasy !!! Thank You So Much For Writing This !!! Please Update Soon !!
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It looks interesting.
Waiting for the story.
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Sounds cool awaited for the story

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