OS: Of Pains and Pleasures./Continuation- Part2P9 - Page 10

I am reading this one shot a year and seven months after you posted it and I can't help but sigh... I so wanted to see something like this in the show.

Arnav Khushi, their pregnancy, her labour, his support, their never ending nok jhok, their undying love and their little bundle of pink joy...

Thanks for writing this. Giving me something the show failed to.

PS- When i asked you to suggest a one shot written by you, you should have directed me to this one.

PPS- I could imagine the hospital, labour room, the doctors, the nurses... very vivid description 👏

PPS- What is your dp now?!

*wails at the top of her voice* We wanted a Zoya and we were given an Aarav! 😭

The way you described the nursery... it looked we are talking about the princess of the Raizada household...

Arnav has dual insecurities. One as a husband. He believes he got lucky with Khushi. He isn't good enough for her. Second as a father. He long since stopped considering his father as one. The actions of his father shook the dominoes of Arnav's existence, letting them drop one after the other till he became ASS, a man who isn't sure of his own tender and fatherly emotions.

But Arnav has Khushi. Khushi has Arnav. Between wanting the others' attention and some strange looking jaleibis fried in the middle of the night unki zindagi khushi khushi beet jayegi 😊

PS- Both the parts of this story wonderfully justify the title 👏

Awesome!!

I am in love with Zoya and her oh so tiny nose! 😆

oh god 1.7 yrs since the OS has been posted nd m reading it now...wen we dnt even have the show wd us...it would have been a great feeling to read it den...coz it would have felt real...becoz at that point of time we were all xpecting dis...sumday...now its seems just a beautiful dream...

i m tired of designating the same word to ur stories...nd i know u are tired as well reading the same word again nd agin...but dats how ur stories are beautiful...dis was nt a subject dat i read abt first time...bt yet it felt different...arnav is a man who needs assurance again nd again...dat khushi is his...even after claiming her mind body nd soul...he needs assurance dat he could as well live a happy life...he could as well live a life...nd dere she is assuring him every time he needs it...

baby raizada is something dat i will always crave for in the show...i wanted it to happen in the show...i still want it...i will nt go in the details of it...coz i know il get emotional...IPK makes me emotional..


PS: u wrote the chef arnav scene much much be4 it happened in the show...did the show get inspired from u>???

Originally posted by: arsf

oh god 1.7 yrs since the OS has been posted nd m reading it now...wen we dnt even have the show wd us...it would have been a great feeling to read it den...coz it would have felt real...becoz at that point of time we were all xpecting dis...sumday...now its seems just a beautiful dream...

i m tired of designating the same word to ur stories...nd i know u are tired as well reading the same word again nd agin...but dats how ur stories are beautiful...dis was nt a subject dat i read abt first time...bt yet it felt different...arnav is a man who needs assurance again nd again...dat khushi is his...even after claiming her mind body nd soul...he needs assurance dat he could as well live a happy life...he could as well live a life...nd dere she is assuring him every time he needs it...

baby raizada is something dat i will always crave for in the show...i wanted it to happen in the show...i still want it...i will nt go in the details of it...coz i know il get emotional...IPK makes me emotional..


PS: u wrote the chef arnav scene much much be4 it happened in the show...did the show get inspired from u>???

SO cute OS. Lovely. 😃

Superb!

Loved d os.
Beautiful, amazing and awesome.