Posted: 11 years ago
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THE PAIN OF LOVE-PYAAR KA DARD HAI

Aastha is a simple and bubbly girl who wants everything around her to be happy. She is soo simple and intelligent tooo. She is the apple of eye to her father Avdhoot. Aastha is in the corner of her room. She is laying her head between her legs. her mind is sinking into the past,the memories which is only left nowww. She don't know why but the sadness, grievness in her heart is irreplaceable. Even she hate herself she don't wanna live but she have to live for the sake of her pure love. Her pure love that cant be destroyable forever. Her pure love will live till her last breathe. Day after tomorrow its shloks birthday. His name is adding more and more fuel to her sadness.


Her love is no more. Her love not there for her. The lost she has faced had left a hole in her heart that cant be re filled. She feels like her heart stopped beating. Of course her heart stopped beating before 2 months. She has no words to describe her present situation. A fake smile appeared in her face. Shlok...he is a dream charming prince of every girl but she didn't deserve him. She didn't have enough luck to be with him forever...


She have lost her love before 2 months. It will not come back . Aastha cant belive that Shlok had left her alone forever in this world forever...aastha burst into tears but shr don't wanna trumpet her grief. Her eyes seems to be red scoz of her continuous crying. she feels herself like a body without life. She feels the pain in every inch of her heart. she don't want to live as her world is already death. Aastha poured her feelings through tears but the sadness, pain and tears seems to be non stopping.


She wants days to move faster. She finally managed herself to go to washroom and comes to the down stairs for her dinner. Anjali is already arranging the table. Every one r there. Varad kaka, Sojal vahini, Joyti tai, Siddarth , kavya, Anaya tooo except her SHLOK. She feels like he is infront of her. She feels like he is smiling at her. But those are dreams that cant be true. Aastha feels deep pain in her heart. Shlok cant leave me alone. He have promised me that he will be with forever. Shlok plz come back.


She whispers but he cant hear as he is tooo far away from herr. Aastha feels like some heavy materials over her chest pushing her heart. The deep pain is still there it will be there forever her last breathe. Anjali senses some thing wrong in aastha and tries to pacify her. Anjali know that aastha is thinking about shlok her son, her love, her happiness but its avail to bring him back.


Aastha gives a fake smile to Anjali but Anjali can witness the sadness behind her smile she can witness tears in those hazel brown eyes. Anjali makes aastha eat by her hand hiding her own pain. Every one r silent. Kavya comes to aastha and says "chachhi chachhi I want to ask u something plz answer me no one is answering to my question" aastha caress kavyas face and asks "no beta chachhi will answer. Tell me what was it?"she pretends to smile but she cant as her heart is refusing.


Kavya asks "chachhi chachha kahan hai? Why he is not coming home? Is he is angry ?". after hearing those words from kavya sojal scolds her and asks her to eat food silently. Aastha cant control her tears anymore. She ran to her room and hugs shloks photo and cries. She turns and find shlok staring at her. Aastha ran to him and hugs him very tightly. Shlok says " aastha why r u crying? Ohh madam stop crying my babay will feel sad he na". aastha caress her womb and feels their child shlok and hers child she finds no more shlok. Its her own imagination.She wipes her tears and says "shlok I will keep our son happy forever as he is the symbol of our love". She hugs shloks shirt and fast fallen into the valley of sleep.


Shlok is there looking and admiring his wifey from the sky as a star. He will be with her forever...








sorry guys i know its a tragdy

but i thought of writing it

credit goes to neelum dreashti

she is the one asks me to write an Os

guys i am waiting for ur precious comment

u know writers need apreciation for their

hard work i am also waiting 4 d comment

plz guys if u r a silent reader plz comment

those comments r precious to meee

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u soo much for ur love
thanks alot 4 showering ur love to meee🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashlok

thank u soo much for ur love
thanks alot 4 showering ur love to meee🤗


u r worth it buddy🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very lovely OS...
though a tragic one but still it's lovely..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Emotionally and Touching OS dear...
Astha is missing shlok a lot...
She will leave her life for her kid...
So beautifully written...
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nice update
shlok dead 😭 poor sakshi left all alone but then there is her and shlok's unborn child
who will fullfill her life
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...I got really emotional...I cried...
I hope it is a story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww😭😭😭

I feel so bad for Aastha and her baby..
Innocent Kavya's question..😭

Really touching OS yaar Aishu...
I really liked it..You did a wonderful job👏👏👏👏👏👏

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