MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35

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uma

@umamaaneet

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Mahi dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

what was that ???????????? 😡

seriously mahi atleast for fate i dint think these type of ending dear😲 😭

me really crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

ur right every story cant have a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!

then what is the use of fighting for justice of maan' mother death mahi...when maaneet are also going to her(heaven) 😭

please any chances of changing this in epilogue dear...? 😕 i hope u do something...just a guess...

finally its ur wish what u gonna write in epilogue ...!!!!!!!!!

waiting for epilogue...

love

uma 🤗

PS.i think u did this as the title name is fate of the unfortunate

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Hawww how can u do dis...feeling sad for musky...
but happy dat still dey r together...
thanx for writing such a lovely story...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

sad update!!!!! i thought they will have happily ever after with their baby but alas! they don't

but u write it all really well

well done dear

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achu66

@achu66

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Loved the update...
Emotional and sad ending...
Poor muski she lost her ma and papa
Epilogue de do naaa

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

maaneet kissing lovely veer told her give punishment maan

geet want any time he happy and smile maan put one condition give to tonic shy geet all see adi and pinky romancing veer teasing her court scene scared

but mahi your decision correct all stories most ending happy

but this one ending suitable for story name

maaneet suffering each other many problems finally all are one day but death is separtetly but fate maaneet together died same time this's is pure soul ,love lovely update

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

wonderful update, this is our so called society if they both died what happen to musky dear, she is a papa is angel don't do that with her

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

hi mahimaan ..

what an end😡😡 mar diya maneet ko ..

it was so painful ...

not fair for readers like me who always want happy maneet ...

update was really sad ..

dev had to be punished byt with him maneet also lost their lives ..

but chalo koi na ..at least both died together ..

they will happy in paradise ..

some love stories bound to have tragic end ..this happen with maneet ..

iss duniya mein hum mile ya na mile ..

dur iss bedard duniya kahin aur chale ..

chalo mere humsafar wahan chale ..

jahan humara koi dushman na ho ..

bas hum ho aur humara pyaar abaad rahe ...

thanks for lovely story ...

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

cant belive this story hv this typ of ending
i m little disappoint😔
but as a writer u hv all the liberty
so hv no issues😉😃😆😊
nice story i liked it👏👏