Sandhir OS ~||DECODING THE IMBROGLIO||~

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Heya people! This is my first ever fiction out here and I'm not very good at this..So, please bear with me! xD


I would like to dedicate this to my 3 writer sis'


Preetu(DamselinDistres) :- The first candidate to go through the mental torcher🤣 Her works and her vocab! Truly incredible! *_* Love you and your works preetu! <3


Iffu(winchesters) :- My first friend on IF and a complete sweetheart! All her works are completely marvellous! I adore you and your works Iffu! Love ya! :*


Vani(-Ms.Rocker-) :- I bumped into her FF someday and we became friends in a completely wierd res-race! I am glad to have a friend like you Vaani! And last but not the least...YMF! One of the best FFs around here! Love ya loads! <3


Ok now...Here goes my OS!


~~


Randhir woke up with a heavy head. . He was getting blurred flashes of the previous night. The only thing which he could remember were the three words "I love you". He held his head and sat on his bed, confused.


"Oh shit!!!", he yelled as he remembered what he had done the previous night.

--FLASHBACK--

"I trust you Randhir", saying this Sanyukta falls from the table and Randhir catches her in his arms.

"Kaha tha na, I trust you?" Sanyukta asks in her intoxicated state.

"I love you, I love you Sanyukta!", Randhir confesses looking at her twinkling beautiful eyes.

Sanyukta was unable to understand.

"Kya kaha tumne? Mazak kar rahe ho na? Utaro mujhe neeche", Sanyukta said innocently.

"Nahi me mazak nahi kar raha Sanyukta", Randhir told her sweetly placing her down.

"Haye kitne acche se jhoot bolte ho MCP" she said pulling his cheeks

"Me bol raha hu na me jhoot nahi bol raha", he said cutely removing her hands off his cheeks

"Haaw tum mujhse pyaar karte ho?", Sanyukta asked seriously.

She was about to lose his balance when

"Haan kitni baar bolu" Randhir said holding her in place.

"Chodo mujhe!", Sanyukta exclaimed giving a slight slap on his face in her drunk state.

"Me tumhe bas apna dost maanti hu ..aur kuch nahi. Tum ye khayal apne dimag se Whossh! Gayab kardo"

She frees herself from Randhir's clutches and goes from there, leaving Randhir alone.

--END OF FLASHBACK--

He had actually confessed his love to Sanyukta! He couldn't believe what he had done!

"Ohh shit!! Mene yeh kya kar dia??Mene use jaake I love you bol dia?! How can I be so stupid??", he thought as he was pacing all over the room.


"Pata nai uske dimag me kya chal raha hoga?Wo toh bas shayad mujhe dost maanti hai!!Arghh!",he said starting his date with his punching bag.


He was restless and din't know what to do. But he had to find out if Sanyukta remembered anything. So, he decided to talk to her about the previous night and messaged her to meet him in the canteen at 10. She replied to him with an 'Okay'.

~In the canteen~

Randhir was waiting for Sanyukta.


"Yeh ladki kabhi time par aa hi nai sakti. Aaj ke din bhi ise late aana tha?", he said banging his hand on the table desperately waiting for her.


Just then Sanyukta entered n sat beside him.


"Toh bolo, kyaa batt karna chahte the.", Sanyukta asked with a grouchy face.

Randhir was just continuously staring at her, tensed.


"Lagta hai ise sab yaad hai! Mujhse theekse baat bhi nahi kar rhi hai...Use sachme sab yaad hai toh?", he thought.


"Bolo na Randhir!", she said snapping him out of his thought process.

"Haan..wo...me..." He felt out of words. He had made up his mind to talk to her.But how would he ask her? He had never given a thought to it!


"Randhir!!", she yelled "Mujhe class ke liye late ho raha hai!! Jaldi bolo jo bolna hai warna me jaa rahi hu!".


"Nai..ruko..Wo Sanyukta...kal raat..." he tried to express what he wanted to say.


"Mujhe pata hai tum kiski baat kar rahe ho! Kal raat jo hua usi ke baare me na? Mujhe sab yaad hai", Sanyukta said.


"Oh shitt!! Matlab ise sachme sab yaad hai?", Randhir thought.


"Humare drinks Vidushi ne spike ki thi" Sanyukta continued

"Wo hume dream team project continue karne se rokna chahti thi isiliye usne spike kar di thi drinks. Aaj subah sir me itna dard ho raha tha uske wajah se! M not gonna spare this Vidushi" she exclaimed angrily.


"She didn't talk about the I love you...does that mean she doesn't remember anything?", Randhir thought


"Aur kya yaad hai tumhe..", he tried to ask her but in vain.


"Baadme Randhir, ab mujhe bahot der ho rahi hai class ke liye" sshe excused herself leaving Randhir puzzled.

~In Randhir's room~

Randhir was pacing all around. He still wasn't clear whether Sanyukta remembered it or not. He was getting even more restless with each passing minute. He just wanted to know! Just then he got a message. It was from Sanyukta!


"Meet me at the FITE grounds now" it read.


Randhir got really happy as finally he would get answers to all his questions! But at the same time he was nervous.


"What if she asks about the confession? What will I tell her?"


But he just had to get the answers anyhow, so he paced towards the grounds.

~At the F.I.T.E grounds~

Sanyukta was alredy waiting there for Randhir. Soon, Randhir reached there.


"Toh tum kya puchna chahte the", Sanyukta asked.


Randhir was feeling awkward. But still he just decided to ask her

"Wo kal raat jo hua..."


"Haan Randhir...mujhe yaad hai!" Sanyukta interfered

"Kal jo hua wo nahi hona chahiye tha Randhir..." she said feeling a lil awkward.


"Matlab? Tumhe sab yaad hai?", Randhir exclaimed.


"Haa..wo...kal...M so sorry Randhir!" Sanyukta said


"Kya?", Randhir was shocked!

"Why was she tellin sorry to him?", he thought.


"Ab meri galti hai toh sorry bhi me hi bolungi na Randhir..."


"Tumhari galti?"..Now Randhir was really eager to know what she was talking about.


"Mene tumhe wo kal...chata mara tha na...",Sanyukta said as her tone lowered...


"Oh shit... Matlab ise sab yaad hai..par ye uss baat ke liye sorry kyu bol rahi hai?", he thought, surprised.


"Tumhe yaad hai tumne kis liye mujhe chata mara..?", Randhir tried to ask.

"Nahi...wo mujhe..yaad nai...but m really sorry Randhir...jo bhi hua ho mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha", Sanyukta explained.


Randhir sighed. She did not remember anything. He was relieved. He had really been tensed the whole day. He couldn't imagine what would have hapenned if Sanyukta remembered what really had happened the previous night. Though he never expressed it, Sanyukta was a very important part of his life and he couldn't have afforded to lose it. Though he din't show it..he was really contended from within.


Sanyukta's voice snapped him out of his internal thouht process

"Tum mujhe maaf toh kar doge na, Randhir..?" she asked.


Randhir smirked "Itni aasaani se maaf nai karunga. Meet me in the lab tomorrow at 9."


Saying this he left, leaving Sanyukta bewildered.

"Ye MCP kabhi nahi sudhrega", she said with a slight smile on her face.

~In Sanyukta's room~

"Tumne use sach kyu nahi bataya Sanyukta?", Kaustuki asked Sanyukta, confused.

--FLASHBACK-- "The morning after the drunk confession"

Sanyukta's head was continuously paining.

"Arrghh, ye Vidushi ko me nahi chodne wali. Usi k wajah se ye sab ho raha hai", Sanyukta told Kaustuki angrily.

While saying this, suddenly, she shreiked!

"Oh shit!!Ye kya ho gaya?? Randhir...oh no! This cant happen!"

Kaustuki tried to calm Sanyukta down.

"Kya hua Sanyu? Tum aise chillayi kyu? Kya hua kal raat?" Kaustuki tried to ask

"Kal raat.. Kaustu...U won't believe this!..Kal raat..Randhir.."

"Randhir ne kya?.." Kaustuki asked eagerly waiting for her to reply.

"Randhir ne mujhe I LOVE YOU bola!! How could he possibly say that?!"

"Kya??? Randhir?? N I love you??!! Omg!! Ye kaise possible hai?!", Kaustuki was shocked beyond her belief.

"Wahi toh! Bada dushman bana firta hai college me! I never expected ki Randhir mujhse pyaar karega?!"

"par ye sab kab kaise?", Kaustuki tried to ask but in vain

"Mujhe nahi pata kaustu! Mujhe sirf itna yaad hai..."

N she began narrating the incident.

---END OF FLASHBACK---

"Me wahi karne wali thi Kaustu! Subah jab uska message aaya tha mene soch liya tha ki me use confront karungi" Sanyukta explained.


"Toh fir kuch bataya kyu nahi tune?"


"Randhir ki aakhon me darr dekhke!...the fear of losing someone close! He always has lost evryone he loves. Uske mom, dad ne tak uska saath nahi diya. I have seen the fear of losing me in his eyes. I don't want him to feel he has lost me, I don't want to add up to his sorrows. Haa me shocked thi iss confession se par pyaar bolkar nahi hota na? Bas ho jata hai. Me shayad usse kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakti, par ek friend ki haisiyat se i want to free him off this wall he has created around himself. I know mujhe sab kuch clear kardena chahiye n use andhere me nai rakhna chahiye par me use dukhi nai karna chahti. I'll tell him everything once I succeed in breaking this wall. Maybe he'll be in a better situation to understand my point of view then."


Kaustuki was shocked and proud seeing Sanyukta's maturity.

"Tum kabse itni mature ho gayi Sanyu? Iss Sanyu ko toh me jaanti hi nahi thi", Kaustuki joked.


"Haa haa udale mazak!" Sanyukta told.

Sanyukta had started to understand Randhir, she had started to feel what Randhir was going through.


Was this the start of something new? Was Sanyukta starting to develop feelings for Randhir?


~~


Finally it' done!

Thanku so much for bearing with me!

A special thanks to Rii(anyania).MT(ShefaliMalhotra) and Hana(DoubleH) for encouraging me to write this OS!Love you all <3

And a special thanks to Bhargavi(Bhargavi97) for helping me with the OS!Love ya :*

Please do leave your comments! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES!
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UNRES!

*runs to res first*
*sees your OS*
*runs faster*
*stops and comments*
*sits and grasps for breath*
*reads after a while*
*pats your back after reading it*
*turns and sees people glaring at me*
*looks right*
*looks left*
*looks up*
*looks down*
*notices I am first*
*gives a winning smirk to everyone*
I am first! Yayyy!
Let me dance first! Tere first work pe mai first aayi hu dance toh banta hai! xD
Aur chinta mat kar! Tere har work par mai hi first aaungi!
Bs tu meko har baar bata dena! Corruption at its best! ^_<
Firstly I would like to thank Hana and Rii for pestering you to post it!
Main toh waise bhi pad leti 🤣 lekin ab sab pad paayenge ye!
It is simply amazing Rosh! Meko tere hidden talent ke bare main pata hi nahi tha!
Teko to ab mai pester kar kar ke pareshan kar dungi! *smiles evily*
The idea was SO real! I wanted to read something like this only!
So, reading this was like a dream come true! xD
I loved how you showcased Sanyukta's maturity! This is the Sanyukta I wanted to read!
If I had written something on it! The basic idea would have been same!
We are soul sisters you know! 🤣 Par shayad mai tere jitna accha ni likh paati! X(

"Haye kitne acche se jhoot bolte ho MCP" she said pulling his cheeks"
^^^^This line is SO cute! I wish I could pull Randhir's cheek right now! *day dreams*
Bechaara Randhir kitna darr gaya tha!
Lekin jab Sanyukta ne kaha use thappad wali baat yaad thi par aur kuch nahi aur Randhir maan gaya!
Toh I was rolling on my bed!
Aur Sanyukta ko jhut bolna bhi nahi aata! Koi bhi samajh sakta hai ki usko sab yaad hai! Bimbo!
Usse bada pagal hai Randhir! Sirf padhai mai rank No. 1 hai! šŸ˜†
Sanyukta ne apne thappad ke liye sorry maangi!
Jabki ki koi aur hota toh Randhir ko uske confession ke liye !
Upar se jab who waapis apne MCP mode mai aaya toh she understood him and didn't snapped back!
And moreover she respected his feelings! Aaj pehli baar meko Sanyu pe proud hua!

I know mujhe sab kuch clear kardena chahiye n use andhere me nai rakhna chahiye par me use dukhi nai karna chahti. I'll tell him everything once I succeed in breaking this wall. Maybe he'll be in a better situation to understand my point of view then.
^^^These lines mane! You nailed it! This was amazing! You deserve a hug for this! *hugs you tightly*
Sanyukta had started to understand Randhir, she had started to feel what Randhir was going through.

^^She saw through his eyes! Bimbo! Nahi samajh paayi ki she loves him!
And jab tune aisi ending di hai aur itna dhaasu OS toh ise SS mai convert kar!

Love ya loads,
Your MT ^_^
P.S. That was long. About 500+ words.More than Vaani's and Rii's *pats my back*
This ain't as good as your comment. But I tried my level best.

Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res

unres..

Moi second...

Hip hip hurray! Hip hip hurray!

Shivi *glares *

Tankii *smirks *

Your first os ...

Mane!!! I was dying to read it and when it is infront of me, I am not in the state to unres cuz I am in sandhirland ..

Coming to the update ..

Haye, it was so cute .!!!!

Drunken confession !!! topic is interesting with lots of questions roaming ion my head???

Their trust stole my heart ... itna trust karte hai yaar dono .. wow!!!

He confessed it !!! haila!!! He said I LOVE YOU!!!

*moi dead *

*takes rebirth and comments further *

Sanyuktra is finding it difficult o believe what he actually said . Impossible

And she slapped him.. nahi!!!!

And yet again his date with his punching bag starts again ...

Randhir iswishing that she doesn't remembers anything from the previus night and I wish the opposite ..

And first she gives an imcomplete answer leaving behind a desperate Randhir to find out the answer and she doesn't remembers it according to Randhir

But we know that she very clearly remembers it and

*does a happy dance *

And see Sanyukta is so caring...

She lied to him so that she doesn't get hurt due to her answer because for her, he is only a friend ..

She saw fear in his eyes ..

Arey!! Sanyukta.. yeh to dekho that how could you read his eyes???

And starting of a mutual understanding has led them to ...?????

YOU ENDED!!!

What is this???

After this beautiful piece of writing, I thought that we will get a happy ending and you ended it abruptly ..not fair.. but I liked the way you ended...

You asked all those questions to us which I wanted to ask you???

Now their future is getting on my nerves...

What will happen now???

Well, I forgot to mention that I cannot believe that this is your first attempt mane!!

Its so good...

I was totally lost in the story ..

Their understanding had a depth which I liked so much ...

It didn't seem like you are writing for the first time ..

You wrote like an totally engrossed writer..

Each word had its own story to tell ..it had depth which I liked so much..

So my last question...WHEN ARE WE GETTING ANOTHER ONE FROM YOU????

Edited by anyania - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES!
Mai third. x(
Shivvu and Gajju, tum dono ko mai chodungi nahi. x( *glares*
UNRES!

Roshu, forget you knew anyone named Gajju and Shivvu! I AM GOING TO KILL THEM!
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Vani(-Ms.Rocker-) :- I bumped into her FF someday and we became friends in a completely wierd res-race! I am glad to have a friend like you Vaani! And last but not the least...YMF! One of the best FFs around here! Love ya loads! <3

Roshu! Really? :) I am flattered. x)
I love you. :*
I am so thankful to the res-race! I got a friend like you because of that. :* Actually we need to thank Hana banana! She was the one who started the res-race. She's the indirect reason for us becoming friends! ^_^ THANKYOU NANA! <3

Okay, cut my crap now, coming to the OS,

Roshuuu, this was beautiful, extremely beautiful! I so loved it.
The title was beautiful. :) I love it <3

Drunk Randhir and Sanyukta are a treat to watch! :D
"Haye kitne acche se jhoot bolte ho MCP" she said pulling his cheeks.
This line literally made me blush you know. xP I so wish I was in Sanyukta's place! 😭 Chodo! I really don't know why but I felt this line so cuteee! <3

OH GOD! Bichara Randhir, he was so tensed whether she will remember anything. :( Obviously now, he wouldn't like to lose a friend like her. When he confessed I thought it would be a happy ending. Then he asked Sanyukta to meet him! I was like, "YAY!" 🤣

But instead of that she apologised to him and went away. I was like, "Yeh Roshu karna kya chahti hai?" 🤣 Then she asked him to meet him at the FITE grounds, then I was like abb kya hoga. After reading their conversation, I was like, "What the hell? Isko sab kuch yaad hai par I love you yaad nahi hai kya!? Nautanki Sanyukta!" 🤣

Randhir was so elated after knowing that she doesn't remember anything. :) That was cute! Then after reading the conversation in Sanyukta's room about it, I was like, "OMG! Kya idea hai!" x) Sanyukta acted so mature. :* She went to confront him but then backed out after seeing the fear in his eyes. :* She could see through them. That was really sweet. :)

This OS didn't have a happy ending, neither it had a sad one. It was perfectly penned down. You stopped it at the perfect place. :) This OS was a perfect mixture of love and friendship Roshu!

Please please keep writing. Don't worry, mai pester karti rahungi. 🤣
#Loveyou! <3

- Vanii ^_^

P.S. Sorry, tumhare scrapbook ki vaat laga di humne! 🤣
P.P.S. Kuch zyaada hi lamba ho gaya na? I know. 🤣
Edited by -Ms.Rocker- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
Unres.

Wow, its really good. I love it.
I wonder why you didn't start writing long back. But i hope now that you've started, you won't stop.
I am in sandhir land now after reading your OS. I hope something like this happens in the show as well.šŸ˜†

Love
Sush
Edited by Sush94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Dear
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely
written dearā­ļø

Love it to the core...ā¤ļø
Ur an amazing, lovely writer dearšŸ‘ā­ļøšŸ˜³
Love ur work😳
keep it upšŸ‘šŸ¼
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya Rolu <3
*sees your scrap*
*opens it*
*reads the first line*
*shocked*
*happy*

Yaaayyy...!!!! I am so happy that I can be a part of your first writing even though just by commenting. Damn I am so happy we are getting NEW and MARVELOUS writer day by day.



Love you re Rolu :*
You made me cry by your such a fabulous writing. Aww just come and hug me yaar...


Now to the OS
Awww that flashback is in my fav colour. Damn so goood...
You have such a great imagination, creativity, vocabulary and writing. Damn I am so in Love with it. Dude I never knew you could write such an AMAZIIINNNGGG Work...!!!

What a CUTE Flashback!!!
How sweet is it to see Randhir getting scared of loosing his Sanyukta..!!

Haha it must be such a FUN to see The Great RSS getting scared Lol

You depict everything so well yaar...

Sanyu is so good at scaring hell out of RD. They are made for each other for sure ā¤ļø


I Loved the way Sanyu showed so much of Maturity...
She is truly one of a kind.
And the writer writing it too... <3

Enough of my bak bak now.


Love You Rolu...
Do write more...
Mwah :*
Edited by sandhirlover15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES
Unres

Oh sheeet. I'm very very late T_T
Dont hit me. Plis.
*runs away*
*remembers that I have to unres*
*wears a helmet and comes back*

Ok. Coming to your first ever OS,
It. was. beautiful! *_*
I shore loved it ā¤ļø And wat were u saying? That ur OS aint good? -_-
Next time you say something like that na, some heavy benanas are seriously gonna hit your head >.>
The whole confession thing was so good :')
It should've been something like this in the actual serial :/
I'd shorely love to write more, but I have tons of stuff to unres right now, so I have to wind up. Sorry. [You know about my hectic schedule na?] T_T
You should defo write more xD
Love,
Hana ^_^



Edited by DoubleH - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey dear... such a beautiful one... really amazing... pls keep writing such beautiful ones...

thank u so much for pm... loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Rosh meri jaan, your first OS??šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
M sooo happy..
Mane, first OS and this long?šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Tusi chhaa gaye ji..
Main thore time me unres karungi, Jaise hi time milta h..
M feeling really sleepy right now..🄱
But m really very proud of you girl.. Love you.ā¤ļøšŸ¤—
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O freak, meko abhi yaad aya..šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
I'm not "ACTUALLY" late in reading my Rosh's work..
But no, I didn't let my head hung in shame..šŸ˜Ž
I read it long back..
I just forgot to comment coz I was lazy that day..šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
But laziness can b forgiven, right??šŸ˜Ž
After all, laziness is the mother of all bad habits,
But ultimately she is a MOTHER and we should respect her🤣🤣

Mai kya bol ri hu kya nahi, meko khud kuch samajh nhi a rha.
Neend me insaan aise hi adbadata hai jaise main behki behki baatein likh ri hu..šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

FOREVER DRUNK MEME. .. yeeehehees!



Meko sona hai...🄱🄱



Vaise bahut masht likha re tune..
Patakha nikli tu toh
Chuparustam ladkišŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Teko kya nhi ata..
Video editing, photo editing, writing..šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Sab kuch itte achche se...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Insaan hai ki kya hai tu🤣🤣

Concept itta sahi tha, SanDhir know everything but dono muh band kr k baithe h..🤣🤣

I envy you..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Keep writing and rocking and rollying and pollying and doing everything the best and to the max...
Love ya mhai rosh...
yours OBEDIENTLY🤣🤣🤣🤣

___________________ (jo naam dena chaho)🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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P.S. Sorry for unressing so late.😭😭
But moi kya karu, it's been a month.. Moi roz sirf 5-6 hours soti h..
Mon-Sat subah se shaam tk college..
Then sunday bhi subah subah tuitions.
I feel so exhausted ki himmat hi ni hoti😭😭
Shoyee.. Kaan pakad ke... <(-_-)>

Plz forgive ur antennae shishta😭😭
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago

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