Ecstasy - IshRa Drabble

Author' note:

Ecstasy

As our fingers entwine

I make you mine

And give myself over to you

I taste the sound of your sweet laughter

Lick the graceful line of your neck

Kiss the tears clinging to your lashes

And find desire in the hunger of your mouth

My skin weeps with the marks profound

Your teeth and nails raked on my body

As I lose myself in the wet crevice

Of your fiery altar

I feel atoned from every sin

As we lay later

With thundering heartbeats, breathless and spent

You melt in my arms and go to bed

But I lay awake watching over you

Thinking every hunger I ever had

Has now been nourished

My mind, body, heart and soul

All of me at last - fed

I find my calling and purpose

Lost in your divinity

I have been put on this earth

To bring you joy, love and ecstasy.

Wow...you kind of just penned down something really beautiful with so little words

beautifully penned...
superb..
seriously i already write on your comment box that m not much in this show but now sometime i watch... but just to read your work i nbeed to come in this forum..
if you have a index do scrap me it will be helpful and if you send pms do add me.. its a request..
lots of love...
fraser...

Wow Beautiful Anni👏

haayyeee anni, I can't give any adjective for what you have written ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
My eyes could not roll, just opened and just kept starring at your words , i feel this motivation is coming from swabbing 😛 i can be wrong though because am so much waiting for this scene to come up 🤣

Your teeth and nails raked on my body

As I lose myself in the wet crevice

Of your fiery alter

this is jaw dropping part ☺️ finally released all tension that occurred since long time ☺️ am just dead 🤢🤢🤢

Omg

Res

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whatever happened to those dislaimers ??? 😆 I am glad I am working from home today, so no one has to see the colour spreading on my cheeks 😳

Only one word i can give this piece of yours Aani... SENSUOUS

although its a drabble, you've managed to make it so visual and descriptive. and that is so hard to do when you dont want to write with a lot of words👏


"How blest am I in this discovering thee!
To enter in these bonds is to be free;
Then where my hand is set, my seal shall be.
Full nakedness! All joys are due to thee,
As souls unbodied, bodies unclothed must be" - John Donne

it was awesome...u have penned down beautifully😳

Aani this is incredibly beautiful. I know it really should appeal to the KK girl in me but honestly after the initial few words I was just mesmerised, the beauty of it and the way you conveyed such an intimate moment between them, that I wasn't even thinking KK thoughts. Wow- simply beautiful.