ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 7 - COMPLETED - Page 97

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Wat d f**k 🤬 if u dnt like a story dnt cmnt atleast dnt say such nasty cmnts u jerk

Originally posted by: addictedx53

Its strange that Khushi is 27, lived in London, was with NK for more than 8 years, cracks gutter jokes sometimes - has never been kissed before, & is so innocent that Arnav has to progress so cautiously not to upset the pace...he's loving it though. Is there something else in this story which makes this credible?

Wow nw completed thread 7...
M coming out of words

first of all hats off to u... For writing such wndrfully...
I am a sweet addicted prsn... Bt in front of ur ff... The sweet seems to be less sweeter than this ff.
Superb solid...

I am falling more and more with evry chappy...
Their romance is just outstanding and marvellously writtn...

Their intimate moments ... Awww.. Like goosebumbs erupted with their intimacu..
This id just the magic of ur writing...

Khushi's boldness is appreciative..
Arnav changing sides bt still maintaining himself to be the same is just fantastic..

I like the eay hw arnav care physically,emotional,economically for her... Kassh real mei koi aise ho??

I think its smething superb classi...
Deir game ... Drinkd wooow


bechare khushi...

Arnav relly made her feel spl... Just the way u potrayed it ...
Its great the way u write looks a lot efforts been puttn by u to giv us the bst update..

Thats the reason its superb and superbsolid by evry coming updae.

Arnav asking her to discuss her chums ... Wow means he want to be her side by all means nt just to gt physical pleasure bt genuine care.. And true love... This evn will help khushi to gt more opn to arnav..



Superb classical outstanding tremendous superb solid fantastic lovely beutiful story...
I really lovibg ur work and falling for it with coming updates..

Hiii i just completed 33 chapters of TDOTD n its been
Amazing frm ch:1 to ch:33 u did a hreat job i was going
To read further but i couldnt stop my self to mention
Some words for dis amazing work!!!!!! I truly feel the
Emotions,,love ,, care,, passion,,, fight,, n much more
Like u wrote it itsss the best ff of mi list now so smooth n
Sooo loving nowww nowww im going to read more
Plzzz keep writing n buddy me plzzz

Full bang on...romantic update... Still drooling... The milky smooch that khushi gives to Arnav to help his burns...awww do cute!!!...n their real kiss...n finally their confession to each other...n those romantic pics of sarun...were like cherry on the cake!!!! Simply fantabulous!!!!! Great writing deepti!!!!