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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am sad...
So I wrote sad stuff...</3
No PM's...
Just agony...
This is my fav song...

WHen YoU'R GOne!!


He was breathing hard.., words failed him...seeing her in the exact same situation accurately 2 months back...
this time again with her luggage,,..
during these two moths randhir was convinced about her denial to reciprocate his feelings...

There was no use fighting...

He had given up...
Maybe THAT was his fate...
Maybe he never deserved a woman's love...
''so good luck farzi...!" He tried to sound as satirical as possible...

''hmm'' she was totally lost...'

'you are definitely NOT going to call me in your marriage ceremony!?" He failed again...sounding broken...

she kept staring him as if she was trying to imprint his face in her memory...for the last time?..

''mam chale!?"... She saw him gulp,,,,his face reflected desperation...

'Stop me! Say it once?? ' she begged...

''let me help you with your luggage for the last time...''

His words betrayed his expressions...''thank you , MCP'' he turned back...

he knew he wouldn't be able to handle the sight...

He heard the car go...he heard sanyukta leave..

he felt his life drain away...

''RANDHIR...'' He immediately turned back to see her running towards him...

she hugged him tight...clutching his shirt tightly...

she felt him caressing her back...and with that she leaned up to kiss him for the very last time...to imprint the feel of his lips against her...his arms around her...

''if this is our last time...I might as well have no regrets..."she whispered...,sanyukta released herself from his embrace and went towards the car...not looking back , once...

But her gesture made randhir HOPE once again...for now..

# when you are going ...I count the steps that you take...do you see how much I need you right now ...
when you'r gone ... the pieces of heart are missing you...
-AvRil LaVignE
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DamselinDistres thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nobody likes sad stuff!
SAD! xP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was sad but written beautifully
Poor SanDhir😭
plz keep writing



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

That was sad but written beautifully

Poor SanDhir😭
plz keep writing




You are so sweet geet!
Thank you🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are going to continue this right??
Pretty please!!! I don't like sad endings!!!😔

Anyways,it was beautiful!!
And you are an amazing writer!! :D
Love
Kaetki
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DamselinDistres

Nobody likes sad stuff!

SAD! xP


No! I love sad stuff! :P
But your writings are so lively and fun to read!
Everything has its own charm! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DreamyReader



You are going to continue this right??

Pretty please!!! I don't like sad endings!!!😔

Anyways,it was beautiful!!
And you are an amazing writer!! :D
Love
Kaetki


Aww kaetki...
Bdw...I never told you,..I like your name a lot! xD

Uhmmm I wasnt actually planning to continue this!
But I will if I get ideas! xD

Thank you soo much yaar!<3
That's so sweet of you :* :")

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra


No! I love sad stuff! :P
But your writings are so lively and fun to read!
Everything has its own charm! :)


First of all...congratulations for becoming a Goldie ! xD
My CPJG😆

Secondly, I personally hate sad endings...god knows what probed me to write this piece of sadness :O

Thank you :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sad but awsum...!!!! luvd it..!!!😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was sad but was beautiful!
Moi liked it!
The way you wrote Randhir and his thoughts were amazing!
Nowadays, we get to see him like this!
He fails to show his arrogance and attitude!
I think you should write more such stuff!
Love ya,
CPJG :P

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