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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

Ya well I got bored me and my friend were listening to random songs then we listened to "Because of you" by Ne-Yo and Kelly Clarkson so theres going to be a bit of each in the story ya then this story came in mind so here it goes yes I'm planning on continuing this since vacation is coming up in a few days I well be continuing this and oh ya umm I'm just writing as i go on so i have exactly no clue whats gonna happen so hehe. AND one last thing i made my friend read it who made it sound so dramatic i learned never to let her read it ever again ya at times its dramatic ***COUGH***don't mind***COUGH***

Because Of You

I looked out the window remembering all the sorrow all the hurt life has giving I watched the rain fall the thunder scream. It didn't make no difference no more. I stood and watched as catastrophe struck the trees moving in all directions from the howling wind. It was a night of death just like that night where nothing matter anymore. I closed my eyes and everything came back to me the loneliness, the betrayal, the hurt, the rejection. I felt helpless in front of my fate all I wanted was a death, a death which would leave me all alone. No watching people be happy no being hurt as all my rights and happiness were stolen away.

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Like I said it is going to be dramatic lol ill put up a part today it is gonna be with Angad and Kripa no doy hehe so ya theres the intro leave comments and no this time I'm not gonna use that no comment no part excuse well because I know this is gonna come out to be one boring story lol the real reason I don't continue is because I'm lazy. And ya don't mind all the mistakes please I didn't look through it at the end.

xxMillyxx

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1.The Beginning-pg2
2.The Horrible Start-pg2
3.Ashamed-pg3
4.Watch like a...
5.Kiss on the-
6.Hate all in the-

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey milly sounds cool, im positive i didnt make it sound that dramatic 😆 so it must be someone else. but great start and nice title. looking forward to it!!

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: erier101
hey milly sounds cool, im positive i didnt make it sound that dramatic 😆 so it must be someone else. but great start and nice title. looking forward to it!!

oh yes its dramatic the damn girl read it aloud in her damn dramatic uhh what word ya ways lol it was so embarrassing ya thx

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey milly... great intro...do continue...am in psp right now so cant rite much

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Sakshi

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Posted: 18 years ago

😛 It sounds very interesting..cant wait to read more

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shraddha

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Posted: 18 years ago

sounda great continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

1. The Beginning

I walked in the park on the cold winter day in New York. I passed all different sorts of stores from close to food, looking at the gowns with the gowns that might cost more what i could afford. I walked admiring everything wishing I could buy all this. I sat on a bench drinking coffee I got. Watching the kids play in the snow. I watched them throw snow balls everywhere and at everyone. Everyone have a happy day in the dark gloomy day, the day was just like my life dark and gloomy with no one around except me and myself.

I watched this little girl around 4-5 years old max approach me. Her hair were in a pony with a pink winter cap on her over sized pink jacket were on tight keeping her from getting even a bit cold. The end of he jeans were in her boots even in them the jeans were still getting wet in the snow. She waddled up to me and sat next to me picking up the sketch book next to me she looked at me and then at the book as if asking permission to look in. I nodded my head smiling as if saying yes. She opened it and looked into the book turning from one page to the other admiring the drawings. There were all sorts of things in it, sketches of kids playing at the park going in all different directions, snow fall on New York buildings a picture of a girl patting a puppy, and etc.

"These are pretty." She said in a low whisper. "Are you an artist"

"Ya you could say that" I said smiling at her.

"Oh. Whats your name." she said looking up at me smiling back. "My names Brigid"

"Nice name. My name is Kripa." She looked up at me "Krrr...rri...ba?" She said trying to pronounce my name right "Kri-pa" I told her "Kripa!" she said happily excited that she pronounced my name right. "Yes" I told her.

"Will you be my friend...I mean your so nice to my, no one likes me not even at school everyone says I'm ugly and to short. You even said my name is nice" She said happily with a touch of hurt.

"Of course, and who said your ugly and short" I said picking her up and putting her on my lap. "Your very pretty and your completely normal for your age and yes your name is very nice."

"Brigid...Brigid...Brigid its time to go home come on" someone called i guessed it was her mother. "Brigid here you are its time to go home lets go." she said as she picked her up off of me

"Mommy this is my new friend her name is Kripa. Shes an artist and shes very nice." I looked up at her mother she just gave me a warm smile and said hello and they have to leave since its getting late. I smiled and watched them leave. It was 9 by the time i got up and started to walk home.

It was dark, foggy and very cold. I snuggled into my coat and held it tighter. I watched an ambulance pass right by me into the fog. I walked unknowing what was about to come ahead of me. I got home in fifteen minutes and in front of my apartment was the ambulance that passed by me and a crowd of people next to it. I noticed a woman being held onto the stretcher I could see who it was but i felt my heart beat rise. I ran and saw the last person on earth I had left. Someone in a police uniform came up to after seeing the tears rushed down my eyes. "Excuse me, but do you know who this woman is. We got a call from the neighbor who lived in the apartment next to her she said she heard a scream coming from in the other apartment and when she went and looked she saw this woman lying on the floor. She called the ambulance and we have come to late. She had a heart attack due to a shock and well she passed away." I listened to everything he said and slowly everything sank in "She's...She's...my mother." I fell on my knees and cried. My mother was the only person left that i could count on who loved me and now she left I have no one left. I mean what can an 18 year old go alone with no job or shelter. "Umm...I'm sorry. But do you have any other relative whom you may stay with maybe your father..."

"My father...my father left my mom when I was 4 all i know is he lives in London with my brother and his wife." I choked out. "Oh I'm sorry" is all I heard from him as soon as he turned away.

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Ok ya i know it was short i wrote it in 30 minutes please comment thank you

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago

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jiya imdad

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Posted: 18 years ago

Oh! the beginning was great. Poor Kripa what's she gonna do now
I wonder how's angad's entry gonna be 😳

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Sakshi

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Posted: 18 years ago

wow itz really good...i realy enjoyed reading it...it really seems different from all the other ff i have read 👏

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Milly

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Posted: 18 years ago

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2. The Horrible Start

The next thing i know i was sitting on a plane going to London. Leaving New York leaving my childhood leaving everything behind. I sat between two other people on my left was what looked like a businessman reading a playboy magazine(couldn't think of anything lol) I rolled my eyes and then looked at the girl sitting next to me. She sat silently reading a book, I took out my diary opening out a few pictures. There were pictures of a lady and a man standing together happily, another was of a boy, girl, and their parents, and one more of a boy and girl standing next to each other with a goofy smile on.

I stared at the pictures running my fingers over them. Remembering all the good times I had with my parents and my older brother. Life got not have gone bad everything was perfect, we were a perfect family and everything ended after my father left with my brother. They lived their luxurious life in London leaving me and my mother there alone with no money. Life was horrible but still we survived. I thought back to my wonderful life before everything happened.

Flashback:

There was a baby girl around 18 months waddling around screaming, laughing and being chased by a 5 year old boy. They ran from under the table to under the sofa, everywhere her little feet could take her. She was crawling on the floor after she tripped with the little boy on her tail. he picked her up and they both laughed as she tickled her to the ground. "Kripa, Josh. Smile!" Said a woman holding a camera with a man standing behind her his arms wrapped around her. Both kids turned laughing and they played as their mother Janvi Sharma and father Vivek Sharma took pictures of them while holding each other. There was love everywhere and everything was absolutely perfect.

2 years later

There was a girl and boy sitting on the couch looking back covering themselves making sure their parents don't see them. Watching them fight with tears coming out of their eyes. Listening them to scream and curse at each other everything seemed so different from how life was 2 years ago. No one was happy no more everything was surrounded by the hate the screaming the beatings. They watched their dad raise his hand and slap their mom hard making her fall on the ground. It was raining outside as the little held on to her brother and cried do to the thunder and even louder their parents hatred. Everything ended when Vivek their dad came up to them and asked both of us who would we rather stay with the woman we call mother or him. Josh was stuck there being dragged into the middle. Little Kripa not knowing anything walked to her mommy and raised her arms as her mother picked her up tears of rage and hurt ran down her eyes. Kripa clung onto her mother not risking to let go. Josh was forced to go with his father as he took him away leaving Kripa and her mother Janvi there crying they're hearts out as everything was destroyed. They're family had separated and everything was gone with it.

Present:

I closed my eyes keeping the tears from falling out. Everything was gone and life wasn't going to be the same when she reached London. Soon the plane landed I came out walking around with my luggage looking to see if anyone was around. I called up before coming it was to Josh he wasn't there but i leaved a message. I'm sure he must of come I mean I'm his baby sister why wouldn't he come to take me. I walked around for almost an hour I sat on a bench outside. When suddenly a car stopped in front of me. I looked up and saw a Black Mercedes in front of me a guy came out. I got up as he started walking to me. He had on his rich clothes while I stood in a pair of my destroyed jeans and a sweat shirt that was a bit big but it didn't matter. "Kripa Sharma?" he asked. "Y...yes" I stuttered ugh I felt like killing my self for the stutter. "I'm Angad, Josh's friend he's a bit busy so he couldn't make it." He looked into my eyes for a second. His faced told me exactly that he could tell how hurt I was feeling. "Ya well I'll drop you off at Vivek uncles place, so if you don't mind getting into the car." He said a bit annoyed about nothing. I walked to his car rolling my eyes as how anyone would spent money on such an expensive car for no reason ya maybe to look good in it but it really doesn't matter what you drive in. I walked in leaving Angad shocked how this a girl rolled his eyes at his car while any other girl would die to sit in it.

He got in and drove off. I sat looking out the window and looking out at the pretty site. We past a few landmarks and other big places in London. In about 20 minutes we reached "SHARMA MANSION" it was big I looked up at the house which looked more like a palace it was beautiful. I walked up to the door and looked around the front yard which was all green with a fountain in the middle the large black gates surrounded the house. Angad rang he door bell and a lady almost about her mothers age stood in front of her. "Hi Aunty." Angad said as he hugged her. The lady seemed nice and respectful. She stood in a white to faded blue sari with blue and white embroidery. She looked so young yet gorgeous. She had a warm smiled and looked at me "So Kripa this Josh's mom, Vivek uncles wife and my lovely Aunty, Manisha Sharma." I looked at her and my heart shattered as I heard he say he was the woman my dad left my mother for.

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Hehe well Angads entry wasn't so special but I'll put up another part later maybe if i have time this part took me 3 hours to right lol i kept starting all over anyways do comment I'm sure its long enough

xxxMillyxxx

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago

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