Welcome to the Birthday party of Kiranwa a.k.a SKiran[TY note on Pg 5] - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Kaddu you sure yeh tune likkha hai?
Its beautiful Kaddu ji. Laga hi nehi ki tune likkha hai πŸ˜†

I loved each and every word of it. Such a beautiful birthday gift. Kiran di is very lucky.

Happy birthday once again Kiran Di πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
i was wondering ho kya raha hai yaha ki sab wapas idhaar... aake i am like 😲 😲 😲... what the... Lolwa... yeh tu ne kaise likha... tu itni intelligent kab ban gayi...😈 😈 😈 fabulous OS paagal ladki...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Superbb os lolwa
I didn't know that you write too
It was so nice
You had written beautiful and portrayed ArHi's feelings very well
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh My LOLWA 😳😳😳 What a writing! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

This reminded me of something! The first ever time I saw you 'serious' and 'emotional'
Oh! That night was horrible πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I beg you, don't ever be serious and emotional πŸ˜› And you are always 'Romantic' πŸ˜† So no need to mention it! πŸ˜›


"Wearing a purple frock, she was sitting on stairs . Her arms encircling her knees . A golden wrist watch looking more elegant around her wrist . Her eyes shimmering , her hair held in a lose pony tail , a bright smile adoring her already beautiful face"

You have described your SK 😳

"Her smile ,he thought . Arnav swayed his thumb over his phone display picture .No matter how much stressed and tired he was, whenever he looked at her smiling face all his fatigue would vanish . The same reason for which he had her picture as his phone screen display . Khushi , his love - his smiley that is how he addressed her"

LOLWA?? Excuse me! The person who wrote this what are you doing through LOLWA's account? πŸ˜• Where is she? πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

''your smile is infectious khushi '' arnav said , still lost in her picture"

Hayeee!!!!!! So is yours LOLWA *People I am not a Lesbian* πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



Who is this brinjal?? This smile is also infectious πŸ˜‰

"Tomorrow was khushi s birthday and he was struck in his never ending business deals and meetings"

I was sure that Arnav would go missing on her birthday πŸ˜‰ Arey Wao! I am so intelligent πŸ˜†

"He had never hated his work like he was doing at the moment. Every year , he was the first one to wish khushi .But this year, as it was her first birthday after their marriage , he wanted to make her birthday the most special and the most memorable one"

When I read this, I was sure! You aren't LOLWA it's some bhoot that is writing. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

He had made all the preparations for her surprise birthday party , he had done everything himself, which in his knowledge khushi loved and was sure that his smiley would be very happy seeing all the surprises that he had planned



"Every thing was going smooth and perfect until he had to leave for an urgent meeting in Itlay . H e would have refused to go if it were not that important . There had been some legal issues in AR branch in Itlay and his presence was required there"

I am 🀣 you know why! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Hahahahahaha... I was saying 'We are mad' πŸ˜›

"He thought of taking khushi along with him but khushi' s visa issues did not let him."


Anyhow writers try to spoil some honeymoon time for ArShi πŸ˜† BTW, this is from Kolaveri, right? πŸ˜‰

"He was angry . He was frustrated and upset because of the sudden changes in plan"

I am tired, busy, mad and frustrated' who told me this? 😈

"The hours he had spent in thinking and preparing for her birthday seemed futile now . He wanted to wish khushi , and to be with her on her special day . He winded up all his work in just one day , attending back to back meetings so that he may return to khushi on time . All the time during his journey back to India there was only one thing on his mind - khushi . He was getting restless with each passing second"

Oh! Just now I got it! So, he was inside the flight and seeing his smiley's pic πŸ˜‰ Lol...I am the sane duffer. Just now I got the whole plot πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


"Khushi looked at her golden wrist watch again , the same watch which he had gifted her last year on her birthday . She remembered how lovingly he had tied it on her wrist "

Hayeee!!!!! LOLWA, have I ever told you how beautifully you make a scene romantic? πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

"But where was he ? Is this also his plan to come last and surprise me ? but does he not know i wanted him to wish me first ? where are you arnav ji ? when will you reach ?"

On the way Smiley Khushi πŸ˜‰ No worries


"She was now steadily looking her watch , when a friend of hers gifted her a bouquet. Her face lit up as she saw the flowers which reminded her of him again .She was trying hard to not spill tears when the blowing winds announced her , his presence around . She looked around only to see arnav standing there"


Rabbaaa Veee ooo Rabbbaaa Veee!!!



" He exactly knew how she was feeling and what she was thinking . He moved closer to her that is when she turned to his direction and he saw what he wanted a bright happy face of his smiley . Her smile was indeed infectious .Phoolo Ne Chaman Se Tujhako, Hai Salaam Bhejaa...Phoolo Ne Chaman Se Tujhako, Hai Salaam Bhejaa Taaro Ne Gagan Se Tujhako Ye Paiyaam Bhejaa
, he sang as looking into her eyes making her eyes go wide with surprise . Duaa Hai ...
Khudaa Kare.. Ai Shokh Tujhako he continued now moving towards her in slow steps . ..Chaand Ki Umar Lag JaayeAaye To Qayaamat Aaye Tu Jiye Hazaaron Saal, Yeh Meri Hai Aarazu he sang again now standing very close to her . Khushi was grinning with excitement and happiness . She threw her arms around him hugging him tight . She knew he would come no matter what . He held embraced her and then cupping her face kissing one cheek said Happy Birthday To You KHUSHI repeating the action on her other cheek he said again Happy Birthday smiley"


Aweee!!!!!!!!!! This whole thing was so cute and sweet! 😳
😳 Oye, LOLWA how did you come up with this concept? Your writing is really good! 😳 Will you take me as your student? πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I would like to learn your skills! Specially the humour wala! πŸ˜† I Lack it! BTW, Hats off LOLWA! Your first OS without any crackly words of yours πŸ˜†

AWESOME, JUST LIKE YOU!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
HAPPY BIRTHDAY KIRANWA! LUCKY ENOUGH TO GET AN OS FROM LOLWA πŸ˜‰











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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome, superb OS Lolwa ⭐️ πŸ‘
I loved it, its beautiful and touching..thankyou πŸ€—

Will be back with a detailed comment πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AALUSLOLWA


BAR BAR YE DIN AYE




SK ! for you 😳 I wish each and every day of your life be filled with a lot of happiness immense pleasure and loads and loads of fun . May you get everything you wish for ( ameen ) You truly are one of the most honest and genuine friend I have on this forum . This song '' bar bar ye din aye '' is one of my favourites and every line of this song i dedicate to you . I wish with all my heart that you stay blessed hamesha πŸ˜ƒ

I never heard this song before and I couldn't stop myself from singing from the time I heard it. The lyrics are awesome and such a touching gesture by you ❀️ I loved the song, the lyrics and your blessing to me πŸ€— hamesha 😊
I know you have told me to not say sorry for late birthday wishes and now a late birthday gift but still I feel sorry .. so I am sorry 😳 and bucket full of thanks for ayat .. for giving me this song link
. By the way sk .. do tell me first para parh k kon yaad ata hai πŸ˜† and also this is not funny Os ... just in case you are expecting a funny one .. sorry 😳 but that is all i could think of when i started to type about you πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ


Thankyou Aayat for the song link πŸ€—

Sorry mat bolo Lolwa You had exams and that is really important for your future.

I expected a funny OS or atleast a funny ending to it πŸ˜‰


Wearing a purple frock, she was sitting on stairs . Her arms encircling her knees . A golden wrist watch looking more elegant around her wrist . Her eyes shimmering , her hair held in a lose pony tail , a bright smile adoring her already beautiful face . Her smile ,he thought .
Oh my god! Purple dress, gold watch, hands around knees... I was like 😲 😲
You are an awesome writer πŸ‘ Just by seeing a picture of me, you described me beautifully ❀️
Arnav swayed his thumb over his phone display picture .No matter how much stressed and tired he was, whenever he looked at her smiling face all his fatigue would vanish . The same reason for which he had her picture as his phone screen display . Khushi , his love - his smiley that is how he addressed her.

'' your smile is infectious khushi '' arnav said , still lost in her picture .
Arnav is lucky to have Khushi as his wife πŸ˜‰ He really loves her smile ☺️

Tomorrow was khushi s birthday and he was struck in his never ending business deals and meetings . He had never hated his work like he was doing at the moment . Every year , he was the first one to wish khushi .But this year, as it was her first birthday after their marriage , he wanted to make her birthday the most special and the most memorable one . He had made all the preparations for her surprise birthday party , he had done everything himself, which in his knowledge khushi loved and was sure that his smiley would be very happy seeing all the surprises that he had planned .

Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you, SMILEY πŸ˜‰
Happy Birthday to you ..
bar bar ye din aye
bar bar ye dill gaye ..


Arnav wanted to surprise Khushi, he is so sweet..did everything for her but business is stopping him.. aaww..he is a sweetheart ❀️
Lolwa.. I am your smiley and you are mine πŸ€—
Every thing was going smooth and perfect until he had to leave for an urgent meeting in Itlay . H e would have refused to go if it were not that important . There had been some legal issues in AR branch in Itlay and his presence was required there . He thought of taking khushi along with him but khushi' s visa issues did not let him . He was angry . He was frustrated and upset because of the sudden changes in plan . The hours he had spent in thinking and preparing for her birthday seemed futile now . He wanted to wish khushi , and to be with her on her special day . He winded up all his work in just one day , attending back to back meetings so that he may return to khushi on time . All the time during his journey back to India there was only one thing on his mind - khushi . He was getting restless with each passing second .


Beqaraar hoke daaman, thaam lun main kiska
Beqaraar hoke daaman, thaam lun main kiska
Kya misaal dun main teri, naam lun main kiska
Nahin, nahin, aisa haseen, koyi nahin hai
Jis pe ye nazar ruk jaaye, be-misaal jo keh laaye
Tu jiye hazaaron saal, ye meri hai aarzoo

The description of Arnav's thoughts about her birthday and the way he is held up at work are superb ⭐️ πŸ‘
The lyrics of the song and the story are in perfect harmony πŸ‘πŸΌ


Khushi looked at her golden wrist watch again , the same watch which he had gifted her last year on her birthday . She remembered how lovingly he had tied it on her wrist .
I can imagine myself here ☺️
She had always worn it since then . He had always been the reason of her smile .She felt lucky to have her arnav ji in her life . She knew he would always do anything and everything possible to make her happy , to keep her happy .
I loved this part Embarrassed ❀️
And today was no different . He had arranged a surprise party for her . She was pleasantly surprised to see all their college friends and family members gathered to wish her . Every thing from decorations to the menu was of her choice . She loved the way he did things for her . But where was he ? Is this also his plan to come last and surprise me ? but does he not know i wanted him to wish me first ? where are you arnav ji ? when will you reach ?
khushi thought looking at her watch once again . it was the time to cut cake . Everyone knew khushi was missing arnav , it was written all over her face . She never wanted to celebrate her first post-marriage birthday without him . For the first time in life she did not feel like celebrating her day. All these celebrations meant nothing for her without him . She did not cut the cake but the ordered the house helps to serve the guests with dinner .
She was now steadily looking her watch , when a friend of hers gifted her a bouquet. Her face lit up as she saw the flowers which reminded her of him again .She was trying hard to not spill tears when the blowing winds announced her , his presence around . She looked around only to see arnav standing there .

auron ki tarha kuchh main bhi, tohfa leke aata
Main teri haseen mehfil mein, phool leke aata
Jinhe kaha usse chaaha, phoolo ki zaroorat
Jo bahar khud keh laaye, har kali ka dil dhadhkaaye
Tu jiye hazaaron saal, ye meri hai aarzoo
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you, Smiley
Happy Birthday to you

I could see Khushi waiting for Arnav infront of me and trying not to shed tears out of her eyesπŸ˜’

Arnav had planned to reach before midnight but the delay in flight was not helping him to do so . He wanted to be the first one to wish her . I can ' t even send her a text message . DAMMIT ! This flight ! He however managed to reach on the same day . The moment he entered he saw khushi receiving flowers and noticed how her eyes lit up and then how her expressions changed and her eyes became moist . He exactly knew how she was feeling and what she was thinking .
Arnav knows each and everything about her
He moved closer to her that is when she turned to his direction and he saw what he wanted a bright happy face of his smiley . Her smile was indeed infectious .Phoolo Ne Chaman Se Tujhako, Hai Salaam Bhejaa...Phoolo Ne Chaman Se Tujhako, Hai Salaam Bhejaa Taaro Ne Gagan Se Tujhako Ye Paiyaam Bhejaa
, he sang as looking into her eyes making her eyes go wide with surprise . Duaa Hai ...
Khudaa Kare.. Ai Shokh Tujhako
he continued now moving towards her in slow steps . ..Chaand Ki Umar Lag JaayeAaye To Qayaamat Aaye Tu Jiye Hazaaron Saal, Yeh Meri Hai Aarazu he sang again now standing very close to her . Khushi was grinning with excitement and happiness . She threw her arms around him hugging him tight . She knew he would come no matter what . He held embraced her and then cupping her face kissing one cheek said Happy Birthday To You KHUSHI repeating the action on her other cheek he said again Happy Birthday smiley .

He sang for her ❀️ I adored each and every line of the story, its awesome ⭐️
Thats a very sweet, romantic OS Lolwa I could feel the story and its intensity, I see a good writer in the making here ⭐️
Seriously you have to post your OSes in the main forum Lolwa 😊

p.s excuse for the typos 😳
p.p.s it took me 1 and half hour or so to type this and equal amount of time to stop from adding my monologues and to edit them from it πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



Thankyou so much Lolwa for this wonderful OS as my birthday gift πŸ€—




Edited by Skiran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayeee! This thread is bootifull πŸ˜†

Happy Birthday Kiranwa 😳

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