T2: Adhuri Kahani (Part 60 & epilogue: page 94) 16/8

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Hey all,

I am very pleased with the reception for my story and the trust that you all are placing me.Its already a dream come true.

Thank you so much for your time and reviews.

@Sneha: all your doubts and fears answered very soon. Keep up

@Zu: thanks a lot dear.You last line made me very very happy. New part coming soon.

@Laila: glad that you loved the banner. You got Shaina's task? lets see how close you were to it.

@Atu: thanks buddy. you are greedy. Channel aise todi na shuffle hogi!! remote control tho mere hath me hai.😆

@Shreya: thanks a lot buddy. Masa coming soon and more of twists awaiting in queue.

@kreyas : thanks

@neeraja: dont be angry with zaid, he is just doing his job. kya karu?? meri cops sab bohot ache hai. kahi nazar na lage unhe.

@nikita @godly affection: thanks a lot

@bhavna: your trust is giving me the happiness as equivalent to winning best seller position.

Same goes to you Zu and Vidya chechi.

@vidya: Zaid handsome wale good villain. 😉 ab soothing scenes kam hogi dea. i am sure you know it too.

@Farheen: Adhuri kahani or not.. to know that... padthe hi rahiye 😆😆

@sweetchily: u got it right dear. thanks a lot.

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@prachi: negative vibes? wait and see how it will be.thanks a lot

@little doll @areesha @anu @harsha: thanks

@yas @rizwana: thanks a lot for following and lovely reviews.

@Shyamal aunty: I understand that it was Roshni's talk that made Zaid more curious. But I cant blame her state of mind. she can be a doc and all, but still she is a simple lady caught in between her first love who have a dual face too. By treatment all are not meaning the antibiotics or shock. Masa and even Sam who thinks in a simple line of thoughts, just want their Shaleen back. For them Arjun is a monster inside their naive Sha, and they just want him back at any cost.

I hope the upcoming parts will be also coming upto your expectation.

@naina: thanks

Scroll down for update.

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Nice one ... interesting .👏.. shaleen ko kab pata chalega Arjun ke bare me ..😲. continue soon 👍🏼

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Oh-ho..So they've started the commando mission against Arjun...what an idea my 10G-GM! sleeping pills in milk...na Arjun bahar aayega..aur na kuch karega..
moreover Masa declaired Sha will stay with Sam..so Zaid gonna have nothing suspiscious about Sha..nice planning...

But A-R..& Z-N meet...the girls trid to handl it..but Z-N are now thinking in a different way?!But still they are pondering onto Sha!

Karan-shaina...nice move dear...now Shina gonna have instructions from Arjun through that library facilities?!
You've twisted it well...& I'm loving it!

Keep writing..

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

😉 Reserving

Editing...

So Masa and Sam have decided to come out in the open with Shaleen's condition and let the chips fall where they may 🤔 Hmmm...I wonder at the wisdom of appealing to the conscience of an unknown law enforcement officer and placing trust and the life of their beloved Shaleen in his hands.

Zaid may be convinced but how will he in turn convince the people who will take over once his work is done.He, after all, is just the first of the cogs of the complicated maze that is the Indian Criminal Justice system.

If I were in Masa's place I would put myself on a 24 hour watch on my boy up until Sam's wedding. After that I'd flee with him to some country who recognizes his affliction and have advanced medical methods to deal with it. She is the Queen of a huge business empire and would have access to the best of medical care for her son. Once cured he could then be eased back into his old life before Arjun took complete control.

Really worried for both Arjun and Shaleen. Let's see what your diabolic mind has in store for both these poor mites and your scared readers😆

I am amazed at the vivid description of what each character feels. The confusion, bewilderment, pain and fear actually rubs on me too. Very well written👏

P.S: So Sam finally settled on his wedding Sherwani Reminded of the time when my brother nearly broke my leg by dragging me and my sisters all over Chennai looking for the perfect wedding attire

Waiting for the next one! 😃

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Awesome update...

Good that Masa came...handling Shaleen/Arjun would be easier.

Roshni and Aisha managed to tell that much to Zaid and Naina. I am sure that Zaid would find out soon but drugging Shaleen to prevent Arjun from going out was a twisted technique to stop Arjun but will Arjun keep silent?

cont soon

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

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A big clap for the amazing new banner. Reflects the essence of your story👏 Perfectly conceptualized

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

"A new beginning... Karan." is there a possibility that Arjun is sensing his end?

Baaki ki detail baad mein.

P.S:Noodles factory open karo Kk.

Mummy!!! mere baal

Sharm karo KK itna confuse to lollipop bhi nahi karti hai

Kisne kaha I trust u?NEVER😆

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Wow di...

Mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm..

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Everybody is worried for Sha as Zaid is now one step more close to him, so they have now decided to go with the flow, they have given hints to Zaid and Naina about it, lets see if they solve the puzzles.
Shaina and Karan's meeting, both have a common link, Arjun.
What was in the letter that Arjun has sent for Shaina?What work has he assigned her? and why did he sent her to the library?
Great update.
Loved it..<3