My first FF on Aashlok -Sirf MeriSirf Meri Aastha-LastPART uptd on pg8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have been itching to write this FF on Aashlok for quite some time now. Hope all of u like it. Please do comment whether u like it or not...

Sirf Meri...Sirf Meri Aastha

Part - 1

It has been 8 long months since Niranjan Agnihotri's true face was exposed to the entire family leaving all except Vinayak and Anjali shocked. The most surprising fact was Shlok could not open his mouth and just retired to his room. Niranjan could no longer stay in that house and he left them...promising himself that he would come back to teach all, all especially Aastha a lesson for exposing him.

And yes, it has been 8 long months since Aastha left Anjali mansion promising herself never to return to Shlok's life. All of them Anjali, Vinayak, Varad, Sojal and Shlok also tried their level best to bring her back...but no she had decided that she cannot bring herself to trust Shlok and hurt herself again.

At Kirloskar house also everybody was angry with Shlok for dragging Aastha out of his house for telling him about his dear baba's truth. Niranjan had interfered and showed his fake love for Aastha again making Shlok promise that he would never again hurt Aastha. Aastha decided to stay back only till NA is exposed bcoz she was worried for Anjali. But ever since that incident the relation between Shlok and Aastha changed drastically. They stayed in the same room but never even faced each other. They did not even speak to each other...and finally Aastha left after revealing Niranjan's truth to Shlok.

Present -

Aastha was in her room staring out of the window. She was in no hurry to dress as it was Sunday morning and she did not have to go to work. Kalindi entered her room with a cup of tea...

Kalindi : Good Morning beta ...chai peelo.

Aastha : Thanks aayi...mein thayyar hoke neeche aati hoon

Kalndi : Aastha , jo meine kal kaha , kya socha tune uss bare mein. Mujhe tera final decision aaj sunna hain. You cannot spoil your life like this. Yaa tho tume Shlok ko maaf karke wapas uske saath rehna hoga yaa tho divorce ke bare mein sochna hoga.

Aastha : Aayi pls jo thu bol rehi hain who donon options mere liye bahut mushkil hain.

Kalindi : Beta, mein jaanti hoon ki Shlok ne tumhe bahut hurt kiya hain. Lekin kitni baar mafi manga woh tumse. Pichle 8 maheenon se har din who tume phone kar raha hain. Tune ek baar bhi uska phone nahin udaya. Hum sab usse bahut gussa the...lekin beta woh bahut pashta raha hain. Hame lagta hain ki tujhe Shlok ko maaf kar deni chahiye aur aage badna chahiye.

Aastha : Aayi mein kitni baar kahoon aapse...mein Shlok se aaj bhi bahut pyaar karti hoon. Lekin ab uss par bharosa karne se mein bahut darthi hoon. Ek aur baar mein apna dil nahin tudwa sakti. Kal agar baba ki wajeh se Shlok ne mujhe ghar se nikala that ho kal shayad aayi ki wajeh se nikaal dega. Mein yeh nahin keh rahi hoon ki Shlok ko mujh par aankh bad karke bharosa karna chahiye. Lekin who ek baar tho soch sakte the ki Aastha baba ke bare mein jhoot kyun boloongi. Nahin aayi mein Shlok ke paas waapas nahin ja sakthi.

Kalindi : Tho theek hain Aastha. Hum tere liye divorce ka intezaam karne wale hain aur naya rishta bhi dekhne wale hain. Aur tujhe meri kasam, tu hamein nahin rokogi.

Aastha : Aayi...lekin mein...

Kalindi : Ek dum chup Aastha. Thu hamari ek lauti aulaat hain and hum tumhein aise apni zindagi barbaad nahin karne de sakthe...aur haan, yeh mera, tere baba aur ajju ka decision hain.

I am hurrying up a little bit here as I intend to complete this FF in maximum 3 chapters

In the next 2 months Aastha and Shlok got divorced. Kalindi started looking for proposals for Aastha when she met her old friend Devika. She was settled in US and had only one son, Karan who was a widower. Both decided to make Aastha and Karan meet each other . Devika and Karan came to Kirloskar house and Aastha and Karan were left alone to talk. After a long silence Karan decided to talk...

Karan : Aastha, I know that u can never forget Shlok and be a happy wife for me. Guess hum donon ki haalat ek jaisi hi hain. Mein bhi Maansi ko kabhi nahin bhool saktha aur naahin uski jagah apni zindagi mein kisi aur ko de saktha hoon.

Aastha stared at him shocked...

Aastha : To bhir tum yahaan mujhe dekhne ke liye???

Karan : Mom ki tabiyat har din bigadthi jaa rahi hain aur who zidd kar rahi thi. Mein agar shaadi karoonga tho sirf mom ke liye...

After a short silence

Karan : Aastha mujhe lagta hain hum donon ko shaadi kar leni chahiye...

Aastha was shocked.

Karan : Aaj nahin tho kal hamare parents hum donon ki shaadi kisise karvayenge. I am sure that we will and can understand each other well. Hum shaadi karenge lekin sirf apne ghar walon ke liye...hum sirf ache dosth ban kar rahenge...

It was the day before their wedding and Aastha was restless. She wanted to talk to Anjali very badly. She knew that everybody at Anjali mansion had come to know about her marriage. Shlok had also stopped calling her. Finally Aastha took her mobile and dialed Anjali's number.

Anjali : Aastha beta...

Aastha : Aayi aap kaise ho???

Anjali : mein theek hoon. Tu kaisi ho beta???

After a short silence,

Aastha : Aayi kal meri shaadi hain...aur do din mein mein Pune se jaa rahi hoon.

Anjali : Mein jaanti hoon Aastha. Hum sab chahte the ki tu wapas hamare paas aye. Lekin har koi Anjali Agnihotri ho nahin hain na. Tu jahan bhi jaogi khush rahogi...mera aashirwad hamesha tumhare saath hain...

Aastha clutched the phone and tried hard not to cry...Finally she disconnected the phone.

Anjali turned back to see a shocked Shlok behind her.

Shlok : Aayi kaun tha phone pe???

He knew who it was, but still he asked her.

Anjali : Aastha,kal uski shaadi hain aur woh do din mein US jaa rahi hain .

Aastha and Karan got married at a small ceremony at Kirloskar residence and finally the day came when they were leaving to US. They reached the airport and Karan went to take a trolley to keep the luggage. Aastha was standing outside the airport when she felt somebody staring at her. She turned back to see a teary eyed Shlok at a distance.

Shlok was looking at the mangalsutra around Aastha's neck. How he hated the sight of it. Kissi aur ke naam ka mangalsutra meri Aastha ke gale pein...

Karan : Aastha chalo...meine luggage rakh diya hain. Lets go inside.

Aastha : Haan aati hoon.

She turned back one last time to look at Shlok. Both just kept staring at each other with the same thoughts in their mind...shayad hum aakhri baar mil rehe hein...

Little did they know that fate had some other plans for them...


Please go to PAGE 5 for the second part

Please go to PAGE 8 for the last part

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charanyaaj thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start. Very touching story.
Astha marrying karan and shlok crying.
Continue soon and pm me
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OMG... Amazing start! CONTINUE SOON! FAST FAST!! 😆
A new writer... Yay!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: charanyaaj

Great start. Very touching story.
Astha marrying karan and shlok crying.
Continue soon and pm me


Thank u so much for liking . Will PM u Hopefully second part will be updated tomrrow😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Farah.

OMG... Amazing start! CONTINUE SOON! FAST FAST!! 😆

A new writer... Yay!


Thank u so much for liking my FF. Second part would be updated tomorrow hopefully...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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refreshing story...plz continue...update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start 👏
Sounds so interesting.
Do continue soon.
Plz do add me in your pm list. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilotus

refreshing story...plz continue...update soon

plz pm me


Thank u...sure will PM you once I update the second part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! Superb dear...
So emotional one 😭
Just loved it 😊
Eagerly waiting to read further!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mailanchi



Thank u so much for liking . Will PM u Hopefully second part will be updated tomrrow😊


ya waiting

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