An Arshi OS : Made In Heaven. Updated.

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

i unresed on page 1 😎

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

That was a beautiful OS Hetal!

Mints must be out of the world to get a story written for her.

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hetal Di.. 🤗
Loved this isstory... 😳 wonderfully written..

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shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

edited comment on page 3...:)

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Mints23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hettadi... thank you for this lovely dedication! It was a very sweet tale of travel and love... that was meant to be. But I must admit, ki after reading the rest of the OS's with my name in it... I was like why is Uthra in this story instead of me?? Par koi nahi... finally she makes her grand debut in Arhi FF's!! Thank me later Viji!! 😉

Loved the description of the three places Hetal, lovely description of a perfect holiday. Loved Arnav's parents who want hime to live life to the fullest before getting bogged down with the responsibilities. Loved the equation they shared as a family... his mom, dad and his elder sister. 😃

And finally the tom-boy Uthra makes her grand entry... Arnav's best buddy to be married. Barcelona is on my plans for travel as my hubby is a FCB fan... some day I shall go there to meet this Uthra. Finally Arnav meets Khushi and she is quite forward in asking him out again... loving it. ❤️

And then we come to know that she has drawn a graffiti of Arnav playing music and he had drawn a sketch of Khushi... Seriously, some matches are definitely made in heaven. Loved how they realize that they were meant for each other and danced in Uhtra's sangeet with abandon... marking a new phase in their lives... 😳

This is for you Hettadi... 🤗

Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago

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Tanya Ranjan

@tanyaranjan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

cute😊👏

nice😊👏

lovely😊👏

superb😊👏

os😊👏

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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

AREY WAO KYA BAAT HAI!!! 👏👏👏

That was such a heart warming OS!! Reading it early morning gave me so much of much needed freshness! 😳

I loved the description given to ASR by you 😳 That was just icing on a cake ⭐️ I have heard Kerala is a beautiful place also people there are beautiful. 😳 Arnav drew his 'Beauty'' in that beauty filled place. Wah Wah..!! Nice comparison!! 👏

And the way you've described the lake side, Arey Wao!! I wish I could also go to that place!

My My!! What did Scientist do? 😲 Poor Arnav 🤢 She told he was interested in Boys? 😲 Hello Hi Bye Bye! 😆

I Love Love Love Love graffiti!! ❤️ And am in love with this Khushi. Wish I could do it too!! 😳

Ending was a simple romantic one! 😳 I love these couple dances in FF's 😳

It was a unique one shot! ⭐️ Awesome Divyahet! (What does that mean? 😆)

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Aaliya Sobti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Am back to give a detailed commentwa from first again! 😆 I was in a hurry to go! Emergency 😉😆😉

So, As i told I loved the way you described Arnav, in the perfect fan-girlish style. 😉 I saw the drool! 😛 The Traveling part reminded me of 'Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani' though the motive was completely different here. But that's film that I will not forget for another lifetime, if I have one😛 😳 Arnav Singh Raizada is having his much needed future vacation before-hand 👏 Which also fortunately or unfortunately gave a part of his 'Soul' 😳 Marvelous! 👏

Then comes, the parents of our Hero. I love this part, i am just quoting the sentence as it's stored in ma butterfly wala brain 😆

'His father also knew his son would follow his footsteps'

I always want to be a son and be n ideal son just as all father's wish. Unfortunately, I am a daughter. But never mind, that gives more advantage too. 😆 This quote also shows, that just like his father, he too would have a 'Rani Sahiba' for himself. The love that his father has for his mother is in the genes of ASR, which is a very good sign for a happy married life. 😉

And the bond between each and every member was 'Mind-blowing' 😳 I love how his father, didn't want his 'Rani Sahiba' to blame him later for her son's imprisonment with AR 😆 A characteristic of every mother.😳

'You want to marry a firangi girl?' made me 🤣 Oh come on Mrs. Raizada Arnav is only for Khushi 😉 Lol..The firangi girl is very naughty! 😆 She almost made him the G thing 😆

Coming to your description of the surrounding, as I told It was fabulous. I love describing the nature and also read stuffs that describes nature. because nature is something that plays a key role when an individual is sad 😳 I am being too 'Human' 😆 I have leart that name somewhere 'Kottayam'...where where? mmm...Oh yeah History! 😆

girls drooling over him, ah? Girls or the Girl writing it? 😉 That hobby was his perfect yar. Sketching is something that gives me 'naught' 😆 But I Love sketching. I see this ASR is a foodie. 😛 Which is awesome. 😆

'What the' and 'Unbelievable' is something that makes a fiction perfect. Without these words it's a big fat zero to all the ArShi fictions. *No Offense* 😳

Perfect entry of the dream girl 😉 Graffiti her profession, is it? 😕 And that makes me jealous. Perfect pair, they've been linked unknowingly and also sketching makes them link knowingly 👏 That's a perfect thought. 👍🏼

'Ek aur Love Story' 😆👏 The simple romantic way of ending an OS. Awesome! ⭐️

P.S: Done with the lengthy comment Shuddprem 😆 Bata! *Waves hand*