Bloody hell, I can't believe this. I hate this stupid thing. I wrote kitna saara sab kuch and it didn't post and now I'm cranky and annoyed. 😡
Anyway, here we go:
Drabble #1:
Uuufff! Love the title, and what an amazing start! 'For a few minutes it felt like heaven until he realised it was hell' - Ahhh, Randhir's recent state of mind! 'Paas aana bhi hai, door jaana bhi hai!' Love the way he can't help but taunt her, just the way she can't help but retort back! And his thoughts obviously go haywire when he's with her! 😉
And I love the ending. I told you, I'm a sucker for emphatic endings and boy, was this one or what?! 'What will you get?' - because clearly, he wants the thing he can't have! Her. Amazingly penned. Loved it! 😃
Drabble #2:
I can't believe it. She wrote a coded message for him too?! But of course he's still his cocky self and he knows what language the code is in. Because he's Randhir Singh Shekhawat! But clearly, it wasn't what he was expecting! 'Zor ka jhatka hayye zoron se laga! Haan laga!' 😆
Loved how you made her go down on her knees and propose. I love how they don't do things conventionally - like how they can't help but taunt or tease after they've just confessed their love for one another! And oooh! Bold Sanyukta! Wanna see this! 😃 'Maybe I do Randhir, maybe I do!' - Hayye Randhir's lovelorn look! And she left him like that, staring. OOOFFF! Loved it! Beautiful finish again! 😃
Drabble #3:
BWAHAHHAHAH, loved this one! I can't believe that of all people, Randhir Singh Shekhawat isn't paying attention in class. And he's rank #1! And ohooo! She's his girlfriend now! Kya baat hai! And yet, she doesn't cave in! After everything that he's tried! From talking, to writing notes to texting! The next thing you know, he'd have poked her! 😆 Kitne besharam hai dono! Padhai ke alawa pata nai kya kar rahe honge! 😆😉
He got told off by Vardhan?! BWAHHAHAHAHA! The one and only! I loved the 'Jiggy is my girlfriend or you are?' I can imagine this happening. Loved it! And awww, he confessed to being stunned after she kissed him! Hayye loverboy! 😆
Drabble #4:
I don't know why you didn't like it! I LOVED IT!!! Their constant jabs and taunts and teasing remarks at one another despite being together is what I love the most. And of course, Randhir is still jealous of Parth, even though Arpita has entered the scene! I love how possessive he is that he has to hold her waist! Aaj kal yahi toh kar raha hai yeh banda! 'I don't want anyone else with you but me!'
AND THE END! Oh the end! Totally apt to the title! 'Marry me Sanyukta Agarwal!' 'I will Randhir, but first lets get Parth and Arpita married' - only hours later did she realise what she had agreed to! BWAHHAHAH loved it! I love how they aren't mushy and yet the love just shines through! Love the end, again! 😃
Drabble #5:
Aaahh, she saved his life. TWICE! Woah. She's a stuntwoman and he's the actor. Very AU but I liked it just the same! I love how she can get him so flustered, unsettled, simply by just being there in his proximity!
The END - Friends reference - BEST part of the entire drabble. Loved it to bits! 😃
Drabble #6:
Randhir, and drunk. And who better than Sanyukta to take care of him, when she's at her crabbiest and crankiest? She pushed him off the stool! BWAHAHHAHAH, and ofcourse he fell on top of her! 😉
And the last bit was just so simple and yet so effective! 'Because I do Sanyukta. I do care' - ISHHH! What's with him saying things like these and turning us all into mush?! 😆
Drabble #7:
Very AU, but extremely beautifully penned. And I love the play on words you've used 'a breath of salty air' - ahh, such amazingness. Such effective little sentences and yet, they say SO much! I once again, love the ending 'after all, she was seldom lost' -UFFF lovely! 😃You have a wonderful way with endings. I'm a sucker for those, like I told you! 😃
And now, how on Earth do you manage to write such wonderful pieces that last barely half a page and yet, convey every single emotion that you want it to?! Sheesh, I can never do that and that's something that I truly admire here! It's so beautifully penned - all the crazy bizarro ideas, written in a way that they just stand out!
Beautiful! And kudos ladki! :D
-Raina
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