os aaslok 2:break the love for me last 10/7/14

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey friends ...
as i said i will write a os on Aaslok based on your suggestion
so here i am to fulfill my promise
i got three different ideas from Aashes to dust...efinah36... &Arnaib...
dear all ideas are awesome so i am very confused at the moment
i decided to take all three ideas in one shot so please wait for me untill i update tonight
i can update anytime as usual in night so have some patience and give me your love and like
wish me good luck
and yes last but not least
the main point of my promise
the big round of clapping for
Aashes to dust...efinah36... &Arnaib...

hats off to you guys
'you silly girl '
part 1: page 3
part 2: page 20
last part : page 34
'break the love for me'
part 1: page 57
part 2 :page 63
part last :page 67
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You penned it down so fast!! Waiting...
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Looking forward to read next update...😛Thanku for pm...😃😳
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Nice can't wait to read your story
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definitely looking forward to read them the suggestions were awesome
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Originally posted by: lively_roshani

<font color="#cc0000" size="3">hey friends ...</font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3">as i said i will write a os on Aaslok based on your suggestion</font>
<font color="#cc0000" size="3">so here i am to fulfill my promise</font>
<font size="3">i got three different ideas from Aashes to dust...efinah36... &Arnaib...</font>
<font color="#003399" size="3">dear all ideas are awesome so i am very confused at the moment</font>
<font color="#003399" size="3">i decided to take all three ideas in one shot so please wait for me untill i update tonight</font>
<font color="#cc0099" size="4">i can update anytime as usual in night so have some patience and give me your love and like </font>
<font color="#cc0099" size="4">wish me good luck</font>
<font color="#ff0000" size="4">and yes last but not least</font>
<font color="#ff0000" size="4">the main point of my promise</font>
<font color="#ff0000" size="4">the big round of clapping for</font>
<font size="5">Aashes to dust...efinah36... &Arnaib...</font>

<font size="5">hats off to you guys</font>



Thank you dear. I'm speechless 😃 you like my idea, too
Can't wait 😉 thanks again Wow 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys i am feeling so sleepy so i just posting half part i will post the remaining part tomorrow till then enjoy this one

part 1


Aastha woke up and switched on the music player on full volume as usual. Her mother saw towards her father in irked tone but he gave back her a smirked look and again buried his head in newspaper.

"All are crazy in this home... daughter is crazy behind the stupid rock star and father is crazy behind the silly news..." she babbled when Aastha came and shouted

"don...nnn seee anyning tu himmm(don't say anything to him)" her words were as confusing as her because she had toothbrush in her mouth. Her father laughed on her cartoonish way while her mother stared her...

"first you go and brush... wash your face then come to me... today I will tell you what can I say or not..." She acted to scold her... she frowned in lazily and returned to her room where her craze her madness her Shlok Agnihotri was singing in his melodious and sexy voice...

Kai Din se lag raha

(I am feeling from some days)

Dill chupsa ho gya

(the heart became silent)

par wo reh na saka bin kahey

(but it could not be without saying)

Kai din se lag raha

dill chupsa ho gya

par wo reh na saka bin kahey

Minate dill ne mere kahin bar ki hai

(my heart begged many times)

tab jake maine uska mana hai kaha

(after then I agreed for his request)

tera hua...

(its yours...)

Dill jo mera tha wo tera ho gya

(the heart which was mine now became yours)

Tera huaa ...

She lost again in her dreamland with the song and imagined herself in his arms. She was being shy and happy in her dream when suddenly she felt that someone hit her back. She came back and saw her mother furious behind her. the song was finished and her mother stopped the player.

"look Aastha you are not child anymore... today I invite the boy for your match so make sure if you will do any nonsense thing then I will kill you..." she warned her as always because she always did stupid things to avoid the proposals but this time her mother thought that she will not let her to do anything stupid to foil her plan.

*****...********

She was in her classroom when her best friend Gauri came and saw her sad mood.

"What happened to you now..." She asked curiously as she knew that only one thing could make her sad if someone scold her about her passion for Shlok the rock star.

"When will my mother understand my true feeling that I love only Shlok...? I cannot even imagine anyone else on his place.

"You are silly Aastha so stupid... You know that it will not possible even in your dreams..." Gauri mocked on her when she saw her with killer look.

"Ok ok don't look at me like this... I said truth only... You silly girl you are running behind the mirage... you always rote the name of the Rock star but do you feel that he don't even have time to give a look to gals like you..." she tried to make her understand

"but I know him very well na he is so good...I just need one chance to meet him then I will show you all that my love is true for him..." she said excitedly. She always became excited on his name.

*************...**********

"Aastha meet Rehaan ..." Aastha mother introduced her to the handsome guy. She just gave a plain smile and showed him no lift board. Her mother gave her killer look on her stupidity.

"Aastha why not you show rehaan to your room like this you both will gel well..." her mother forced her to take him along with her while she herself became busy with his parents. Aastha unwontedly took him in her room. Her room was filled with Shlok's pictures and big size posters. Rehaan was amazed to see all that. He was nice guy... he started to talk first as he saw her playing with her stole corner carelessly.

"So you like Rockstars..." he asked when she stared him

"I don't like rock stars... I love Shlok..." she said in prickling tone. He smiled on her childish act.

"Ok so you love Shlok... I love Lady gaga..." he mocked her when she looked him in fury

"You took it wrong... I love him madly and I don't want to even marry with anyone else..." she muttered in anger while he laughed wholeheartedly on her words.

She looked him fierce eyes "why are you laughing like I cracked a joke..." she pissed off when he tried to control his laugh after seeing her red face in anger.

"ok ok I am serious now but does he know about your love I mean you are in so much love so the guy should know about that na..." he again made fun of her. When she innocently replied

"I know that ... I just need one chance to meet him and after that I will tell him about all my love..." she said determined tone while he just smiled on that silly girl. He liked her instantly.

He saw her straight face and tried to pacify her "don't you want to know what I am doing?"

"I don't need that as I don't intend to marry you..." she replied in attitude. He was smiling on her childish manner.

"But you need a chance to meet to your Rock star" he asked when she saw him in questioning way

"Hi myself Rehaan bakshi... Your Rock star's public relation officer I mean PRO... I am the one who working on building his image..." he smiled while Aastha saw him aloof.

She tried to speak after so much trying "you what... That's means you can meet him directly..." she was stunned and surprised.

"Yes ..." he replied in calm manner. He was enjoying her situation

"It means you can also touch his hand..." she again asked silly question

"Yes dear... But you silly girl tell me if you want to meet him..." he asked and smiled

"Yeah I am dying to meet him please... please..please just once I want to meet him..." she held his hands in excitement. He was so enjoying her tactics.

"Ok I will take you along with me but first you have to be my friend... may I call you my friend..." he raised his hand towards her

She held that quickly and said in joy

"Yes ..."

Edited by lively_roshani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love this concept dear its really unique concept I love this ff in ur write up.its very interesting.enjoyed it very much😃

Edited by raji_ashloksfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so sweet
But roshini! ! Serious are you feeling sleepy?? That too now??
Ohhh please! ! Wake up and update the next part..
And shlok is a rock star! ! Um drooling now!!
Aastha's character sounds cool! !
Loved it so much
Edited by Meilliures - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Roshani...loved it ❤️
Very interesting and unique concept...shlok as a rockstar and Astha as his fan!! 😃😳
And Rehan seems like a very nice guy.
Excited to read more 😃
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago

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