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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yourcwriting skills are so...what to say?Something like water...you write anything and you just automatically capture the mood n soul of it...I loved this piece...Sharon's fears werr so beautifully potrayed and Swayam'love...I somehow really dont know what to say...this OS is something which can be ONLY felt...Khoobsurat 😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Yourcwriting skills are so...what to say?Something like water...you write anything and you just automatically capture the mood n soul of it...I loved this piece...Sharon's fears werr so beautifully potrayed and Swayam'love...I somehow really dont know what to say...this OS is something which can be ONLY felt...Khoobsurat 😊

I know I write anything, but was that a compliment?

Yeah! I know its like attempting anything.. but couldn't help. Initially it was to be a very cry-baby wala OS but when I started it ended up like this.. Its like I cant handle too much of emotional turmoil.

And thanks, at least someone commented :)

But that Khoobsurat was enough to make me go SwaRonish 😳

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow...this one was like so different from the previous os...and truly khoobsurat...

Loved the care and love swayam shows for sharon...

The way he wants her to recover...beautifully penned...👏

Continue writing would love to read more of your works...

Thanks for the pm😊

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neha

@swaron933

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

amazing os dear

loved it to the core

swayam's concern ,care and love for sharon was superbbb

thanx for the pm

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

I know I write anything, but was that a compliment?

Yeah! I know its like attempting anything.. but couldn't help. Initially it was to be a very cry-baby wala OS but when I started it ended up like this.. Its like I cant handle too much of emotional turmoil.

And thanks, at least someone commented :)

But that Khoobsurat was enough to make me go SwaRonish 😳

Ummm..i could not understand how you took my 'Anything'but i meant Like you pour water in any shape of vessel and it adjust itself to it n n so is your write ups give you any emotion and you are Bang on! 😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Ummm..i could not understand how you took my 'Anything'but i meant Like you pour water in any shape of vessel and it adjust itself to it n n so is your write ups give you any emotion and you are Bang on! 😊

I was just kidding. But thanks. Thats a huge compliment. Really means a lot. Thanks a ton :)

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@Slayerkajal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing os...
Sharon's fear and swayam's love and care for her was just khoobsurat...loved it...specially that one line before last pera...
Thanks for the pm