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Ashlok OS-Eternal Love






Astha met shlok over the internet...and they starting talking for about a week and then stopped...

After her exams ended she again talked with him...and this kept on going for next two months...

They started understanding each other better with time ...and one day shlok confessed his love to her...

Astha was confused to say anything...as she was fearful that what if that whole thing turned out to be fake...she didn't want to lose a friend in shlok...

She asked him to meet her if he really loves her...and he agreed ...

After two weeks they both met at the decided place...

And the moment astha saw her she fell in love with shlok...but she hide her feelings until she was satisfied that he is not playing with her emotions and is serious about her...

They kept on meeting for sometime...and finally one day astha confessed her love for shlok...that day he felt himself to be the luckiest man...

And after dating for sometime shlok proposed her...and she at once accepted his proposal...

It was their luck that their fathers turned out to be office friends...

Soon they got engaged and like every happy couple they enjoyed their time before wedding ...planning a lot for their new life together...

Eight months passed ..it was their wedding day...astha in her bridal dress was waiting for him in mandap but there was no news from his side...and after a wait of many hours ...varad shlok's brother came to inform astha and her family that last night shlok's car met with an accident ...and he is no more now...

Astha at first denied but with time she accepted this bitter truth of her life that her shlok is no more in her life...the same shlok who promised her that he will never leave her alone...


"I will love you like the desert burns along the sun when they are together,
and when you will be gone,
just like every one else,
I will cry for you like the snow that melts at the first hint of summer...
and hoping that you'll be back
I will miss you like the clouds lose themselves when it rains..."



Shlok's family always considered her as their daughter and she always cared for them like her own family...even though there son was no more ...

Her family tried to convince her for marriage but she refused saying that she only belongs to shlok...and no one can take his place in her life and that she will spend every single moment of her life for shlok's dreams and his family...

Jo na mil sakey, wohi bewafa
Ye bardee ajeeb si baat hey
Jo chala gaya mujhe chord ker
Wohi ajj tak merey saath hey


Almost it took her two years to complete shlok's dream of making a children hospital...she named the hospital on shlok's name...

Her love for shlok was growing more with time even he was not in her life ... but his memories were enough for her to pass her whole life...


Wo na a sakey hum muntazir
Ye khalish kahan thi wisal mein
Meri justajoo ko khabar nahi
Na vo din rahey, na vo raath rahi
Jo chaala gaya mujhe chord ker
Wohi ajj tak merey saath hey




She was happy fulfilling every dream of him ...but time didn't permitted much as she suffered from blood cancer after three years of shlok's death...

Though her and shlok's parents were worried for her...but she was satisfied and contended that finally she will meet his shlok soon...what if they didn't meet here but they will unite in heaven...


Ye karam hey uss ka, jaffa nahi
"Woh judda bhi reh key kareeb hey"
Wohi aankh hey merey rooh baroo
Ussi haath mein merra haath hey
Jo chaala gaya mujhe chord ker
Wohi ajj tak merey saath hey



And after wait of few months the day came she was waiting for...the day when she met his shlok ...

"She was smiling as she imagined herself as one more star in the sea of millions''...




Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey am first hipeee...😃

Edited by raji_ashloksfan - 11 years ago
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Omggg wow😭 I'm an emotional wreck😭 that was just wow, sooo heart-touching❤️ the way you wrote it, no doubt touched a lot of hearts! It was wonderful meerab👏👏
One part I really liked: "I will love you like the desert burns along the sun when they are together,
and when you will be gone,
just like every one else,
I will cry for you like the snow that melts at the first hint of summer...
and hoping that you'll be back
I will miss you like the clouds lose themselves when it rains..."
soo beaitiful meerab, I'm lost for words! Just keep up the great effort😃Love you❤️🤗
Edited by ...Ayesha... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Meera awesome os as always .Though i hate sad I, I like this.But next time happy ending ha .Thanks for the wonderful os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dat was so heart touching
loved it
awesome
thanks for dis story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: raji_ashloksfan

Meera awesome os as always .Though i hate sad I, I like this.But next time happy ending ha .Thanks for the wonderful os

congrats u r first sweety ...and thanks dear for liking it...i know its very sad but its based on a true lovestory😭😭😭😭😭...i was in a sad mood so wrote this one today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Meerab...it was so sad 😒 And the fact that it is a true story just makes it all the more tragic 😭😭 Honestly my eyes welled up with tears while reading it 😭😭 I can perfectly understand why you were feeling low after you wrote it. It was really heart-touching love story. And the verses you used in between made it even more emotional. It was beautifully written 👏

Just one question I wud like to ask, out of curiosity, do you personally know the person who went through this tragedy or you have simply heard about it from third person?
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww...

so sad... 😭
Edited by Anusha16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooop woop before you all😈

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