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HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 11 years ago

woww...the way u brought this story from vry gloomy Madhu and RK to love birds..aaah loved it..

Such a sweet part..loved it dear...👏👏👏

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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful end Tashu Di!Thanks fr pm!I'm glad Celina accepted Madhubala & called Her Maa even before Rishbala's marriage!RK did justice to Madhubala by sending Sid behind bars!Pls can U write an epilouge fr dis?If yes den pls pm It to Me!Pls do write more on Rishbala & pm Me!

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

beautiful ending...glad that sid got punished...waiting for epilogue...

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SreeRK

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very beautiful ending😊

wish to read more of your writings

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Jyoraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was very nicely written story. But I wanted more of their after marriage parts. Please write aan epilogue.

Will be waiting for your next story.

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shasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

it's an awesome ending yaar...i want more of them with another child...plz give us an epilogue...

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