[Current Track]SwaRon OS- Rest Shocked Love Rocked :D *Part 2 updtd* - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
read both parts and loved these.
finally intelligent swayam is back.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
amazing os sakshi🤗
loved d title-Rest Shoked love rocked
i so wished dat sumthing like dis would happen
dil ko taslli mili padh ke sacchi me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
very nice...thnx for d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome os dear...loved both d parts...
swayam and ruhi's part was nicely penned down...
loved d way swayam confessed his love in front of everyone...
flashback was nicely described...
overall just loved d os...it was simple and sweet.. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
This part was just amazing sakshi.
U portrayed swayam's emotions so beautifully.
My sensible n smart swayam is back only bcoz of u.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

You know the OS is kind of perfect!
And it felt so heart warming to see the intelligent and calm swayam back.
Both the chapters were great.
I really loved the way you portrayed swayam's feelings. You truly are a great writer.
Lovely OS.

Please ameeta ko jaake thode suggestions de do. Even better... please go and take her place. 😳
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
really Surprised with the 2nd unexpected part ... which was awsomly written 😛
swayam's reactions and expressions were described beatifully
KEEP IT UP :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Awesome os..
Nd d bst part is d title.
Luvd it.

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