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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 great going!!!!waise in reporters ke baare mein jo ajay aur boxer sochte hain,that's what i think too!!sis,u write soooooo well,look at it,aap,reshma itni amazing fanfics likhte ho ki bas mazaa aa jata hai!they're so good ki i can actually imagine those scenes!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks Sonal........ Thank you so much for your encouragement 😊
Edited by maha_prakrti - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
great going kritika.bahut acha laga padh ke.its just a mind blowing piece of work 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Inside the ward boy's changing room………………

A cell phone rang. Everyone looked around to see who's it was. It was the inspector's. The inspector attended the call.

Inspector: Haan Dinesh… bolo
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Inspector: Hmm…….. Nahi…. Ek minute……

The inspector looked at Dipika and asked……….

Inspector:Madam, back up force aa gaye hain. Lekin hospital ke bahar crowd ke wajah se andar nahi aa sake hain. Thodi door khade hain…….. Unhe force se andar aanaa hoga………
Dipika: Nahi…….. Ab tak to vo ward boy bhi pakda nahi gaya hai……. Agar vo andar aane ki koshish karte to reporters unhe nahi chodenge………

The inspector nodded.

Inspector:To……….
Dipika:Unhe hospital se paanch minute doori par kaheen wait karne ke liye kahiye. Jab unki zaroorat hogi bula lenge.

The inspector nodded and conveyed this over the phone. He disconnected the call and looked back at Dipika.

Inspector:Madam….. bahut der ho gayi………..
Dipika:(looking tensed) Haan inspector. Main bhi yahi soch rahi hoon. Kahin vo ward boy bach na nikal gaya ho……… Varna us Kamaar ko pakadna mushkil ho jayega…. Pata nahi Ajay aur Boxer kya kar rahe hain…………?

First Floor Landing………………

Shyam ran down the stairs as fast as he could. Boxer and Ajay ran covered the steps two at a time and followed him.

Shyam came to the ground floor and breathing heavily looked around where to escape. The front door was closed with reporters outside, so he took off towards the back corridor. His sudden appearance and disappearance caused the people in the area to look around.

Now, of course the reporters were here for news so immediately tried to capture the inside scenes. But alas, the glass doors were covered by ward boys and watchmen, so they couldn't exactly note the happening.

They had even tried to get into the hospital through other ways but all were locked and guarded by some or the other hospital staff. They were instructed not to leave their place, untill they were instructed to do so.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ground Floor…………..

Ajay and Boxer came down and looked around. They just saw a white uniform disappearing fast, behind at the back corridor. They immediately ran that way. Looking left and right they saw Shyam running left of the corridor.

Ajay:Oye……… Rook………. Varna goli chala doonga……..

Ajay immediately took out his gun and aimed at Shyam. He had no intention of shooting him, it was just for threatening. If circumstances insisted, he would shoot to stop him only.

Shyam looked one second behind, but continued running.

Inside the ward boy changing room……………..

Dipika: Kya………

Everyone inside the room looked towards the room door. The goons tied up also looked at each other. They had heard a commotion outside. Immediately the inspector went to look outside followed by Dipika and Neha. Shotgun started out from his place, but in time Dipika looked behind……

Dipika: Shotgun, tum yaheen rehna…….. Inko bachane ka chaal ho sakta hai.

Saying this she immediately went outside.Shotgun looked at the goons, nodded and stayed back.

Outside the ward boy changing room……………..

Bang……………..

Shyam had hit with someone coming out from a room. Both the hitter and the hit were stunned and fell back.

Hearing all the commotion a crowd had again started to form outside the room.

Ajay and Boxer came to Shyam and caught him before he could stabilize himself. Shyam was surely unlucky and our Special Squad team fortunate.

After a moment's of silence, Finally everyone looked to see what had happened.

Shyam had collided with the Inspector coming out of the room. The inspector had collided and backed off towards the door. He hit Neha and inturn Neha hit Dipika and everyone stumbled. But in time Neha caught the door handle and steadied herself, and Dipika also.

At last………………. When everyone had steadied themselves and calmed down………..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Outside the ward boy changing room……………..

Dipika came outside and looked at Ajay and Boxer.

Dipika:Kya hua………. Aur ye……..(looking at the ward boy they had caught, knowing the answer but wanting to confirm)
Boxer:Ye sahib zaade hain Shyam……..

Dipika nodded………

Neha stared at him angrily and started to some front to show her anger on him, but Dipika stopped her in time.

Dipika:(to Ajay and Boxer) Ise andar leke aanaa………

Saying this she dragged Neha inside. Ajay and Boxer followed with the goon.

The crowd were trying to press around the room.

Inspector:(stopping the crowd)Kya ho raha hai yahan? Chalo chalo, apna apna kaam karo. Koi yahan nahi rookega varna use arrest kar diya jayega.

Hearing this the crowd immediately dipersed. The inspector waited outside till the last person had disapeared from sight and went inside. He came inside and locked the door behind him.

Inside the ward boy changing room ……….

Dipika and Neha were inside near the window. Dipika was rubbing her hand knee caps, where she had hit the door. Neha was twisting her wrist, looks like she sprained it while trying to steady herself.

Ajay and Boxer followed with Shyam and pushed him to chair. Just as he sat down, he saw that the two goons were caught. He was surprised and shocked. But he now became scared.Ajay looked around and found a rope used to tie sacks. He took it and tied Shyam's hands and legs.

Then he got up to look at Neha…………. Seeing her rubbing her wrist, he became concerned and went to her………………

Ajay: (taking her wrist, worried) Kya…… Kya hua………. ?(her wrist was a bit swollen)
Neha:(smiling at seeing him so worried about her) Kuch nahi Ajay. Jab vo takkar hua, to darwaze se lag gaya.
Ajay:Oh……(getting angry) Ye sab us……. Shyam……..

Saying this he started to have a go at Shyam. But Neha stopped him……..

Neha:(in a voice which she knew Ajay cannot override) Ajay……… (Ajay looked at her angrily) Please ab nahi………

Ajay immediately calmed down and took her hand to massage it. Neha just ruffled his hair and smiled. He cares so much for her.

Dipika was just a silent observer of all that was happening. She saw Neha and just smiled.

Then she went upto Shyam to have a good look at him. Then she looked at Boxer and nodded. Dipika then stepped back to her position and leaned against the window, to watch the interrogation.

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Posted: 18 years ago
wah wah..kritika ji aap bhi bahut he hit writer hai. 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
mujkhe aap ki story bahut he pasand aaye.kafi suspence creat hota ja raha hai.kafi maza aa raha.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks Smrit. Glad you like it.............. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Inside the ward boy's changing room……….

The inspector had by now come inside and went upto Shyam. Boxer and the inspector stood side by side to Shyam.

Inspector:(lifting Shyam's face with his stick, surprised) Tum…….. tum ho Shyam ……?

Shyam didn't reply. But just hung his head down.

Boxer:(holding Shyam's chin and taking his face close to his) Dekho…… chup rehke kuch nahi hoga. Tumhe pata hai ki, hume pata hai ki, tum kis keliye kaam karte ho. Lekin vo kya hai, hume khud culprit ke muh se unki kahaani sunana pasand karte hain. To…………

Shyam looked up and seeing Boxer's face got scared even more. He took a look around and knew he was caught. There was no escape route or anything.

Just then a cell phone rang. It was Dipika's……………

Dipika saw the number and immediately attended the call……….

Dipika:Cathy… kya hua…….Any problem……….?

Hearing Cathy's name, everyone turned around immediately. Was there any problem…….?! Aryan……..??

…………………………….

Dipika:Oh…(relaxing) Nahi……… Hum ground floor par hi hain. Yahan Aryan ko maarne ki saazish me, pata chala hai ki koi ward boy ka haath hai. Use pakdne ki koshish me ye commotion hua…

The others also relaxed knowing that nothing was the problem.

……………………………….
Dipika:Vo…… Shyam naam hai uska…….
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Dipika:(in a consoling tone) Comon Cathy…….. Isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai.
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Dipika:Haan(looking at Shyam) Use hi interrogate karne wale hain.
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Dipika:Kya…… cheh baje……..(looking at her watch)But Cathy we can't afford that.
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Dipika:To phir……
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Dipika: Oh……. Cathy thanks a lot. Please jo ho sake karna.
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Dipika:Thanks.Main tumse baad me aake sab kuch explain karti hoon. Ab interrogation chal raha hai…….
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Dipika:Ok…… bye.

Dipika cut the phone and looked at everyone. Then she indicated to Boxer to continue.
Edited by maha_prakrti - 18 years ago

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