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Posted: 11 years ago
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Don't scream it seems to me that I want to keep writing , so poor u



Life , stranger than dreams,
Light and darkness are two seams
They move together,
As sides of the same coin
Darkness, sinks your soul ,
Leaves you shattered to the core ,
Courage helps you find the door, ,
Rays of the morning sun ,
Tremblingly, touch your heart ,
A new spring to start ,
A flower to bloom ,
A bird to fly ,
The laughter of the Peacock ,
A thought takes wing
And makes your heart sing ,
And the world is yours to win



Yes friends with courage and fortitude the world is really yours to win

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Don't scream it seems to me that I want to keep writing , so poor u ( Not at all DOC we are really lucky , Hats off to u DOC keep writing )🤗


Life , stranger than dreams, (What a start Doc )⭐️
Light and darkness are two seams
They move together,
As sides of the same coin ( 100%correct Doc , used few words but a bigger meaning Doc👏
Darkness, sinks your soul ,
Leaves you shattered to the core ,
Courage helps you find the door, ,
Rays of the morning sun ,(Wow Doc just WOW ) 👏
Tremblingly, touch your heart ,
A new spring to start ,
A flower to bloom ,
A bird to fly ,
The laughter of the Peacock ,
A thought takes wing
And makes your heart sing ,
And the world is yours to win ( Round Applause Doc seems like reading a chap of life even ur poem is short and sweet )👏

Take a Bow Doc


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my Doc the poetess

Yes night and day .. That's the cycle of life but to keep prodding along is the key

doc you reminded me of one of my fave songs

Una Paloma Blanca I am just a bird in the sky
Nothing can take my freedom away
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Doc I feel you have an ace / trump card up your sleeve ...

You are an accomplished writer

Please do write an OS on ashni would be great to read your take on them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa17

Doc I feel you have an ace / trump card up your sleeve ...

You are an accomplished writer

Please do write an OS on ashni would be great to read your take on them


100% correct Deepa each and every word of the poem got meaning , she is a greater writer 👏😊🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Where o where is the poetess ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa17

Where o where is the poetess ?


Deeps dear poetess😆😆 Never ever read much poetry only Khalil Gibran , am a down to earth doctor , but too many things have happened , maybe this urge to write is because of that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Don't scream it seems to me that I want to keep writing , so poor u ( Not at all DOC we are really lucky , Hats off to u DOC keep writing )🤗


Life , stranger than dreams, (What a start Doc )⭐️
Light and darkness are two seams
They move together,
As sides of the same coin ( 100%correct Doc , used few words but a bigger meaning Doc👏
Darkness, sinks your soul ,
Leaves you shattered to the core ,
Courage helps you find the door, ,
Rays of the morning sun ,(Wow Doc just WOW ) 👏
Tremblingly, touch your heart ,
A new spring to start ,
A flower to bloom ,
A bird to fly ,
The laughter of the Peacock ,
A thought takes wing
And makes your heart sing ,
And the world is yours to win ( Round Applause Doc seems like reading a chap of life even ur poem is short and sweet )👏

Take a Bow Doc




Thank u Ariya u really are good for me , don't know what to say Thank you graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bc123456


Deeps dear poetess😆😆 Never ever read much poetry only Khalil Gibran , am a down to earth doctor , but too many things have happened , maybe this urge to write is because of that


Chale ne ka Naam zindagi hain Doc .. You have a great talent ... It got the impetus it needed ... Difficult sometimes in life to accept certain things.. But that's life

Keep them coming .. Speaking on behalf of all others we are loving them.. 🤗

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