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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--

Boredom tales, ne? Seriously?? *scratches head* The title is so striking but as far as I know SanDhir and boredom are infinite light years apart... Haha, thanks :P

Eekkss!! This is so cool and awesome as well.. Thank you :D
Ugh! I don't what I should conclude but the first para clearly states the demerits of being genius... Mom must read this one.. Your mom knows about this? :O
Eh? Sanyukta confessed that she was less intelligent than Randhir! Did I read that right?? *rubs her eyes* Yes xD Karna padta hai :P
Gosh! That chit! It was so suggestive. Damn girl you made me blush so deeply. Uh! I must say I like this naughty avatar of Randhir. It suits him right. Love you loads for this (ahem I mean sisterly love, keep your mind at bay sweetie) I tend to do that a lot. 😆 My mind is always at bay. :3
Did you just make Randhir blush and made Sanyukta tease him?? Yes xD
You and your drabbles are completely unpredictable, a unique quality which only you possess. Means a lot <33
Your imagination and art of moulding characters in unexpection way is what I admire the most about you. Aww, thanks :')
I know that you know it pretty well but still I would love to say that you are one of the most brilliant and magnificent writer in this forum. Kuch bhi haan. xD
The drabble soothed my agonized heart. The SHQ episodes these days are tormenting my soul and drabbles like this is what I need to calm myself down. AWWW BARFIII.
The drabble was radiantly flawless. See I don't even have words left to describe my feelings. There are words like 'awful, boring, crappy' still left 😆
Now do update it soon... It's not a request but a plead. Okay :P
Ugh! I'm really sorry for not commenting earlier and being such a lazy ass. I know you might have loaded a gun and are ready to blow my head up...but...wait before you shoot me...c'mmon let me run first would ya? *runs and hides away* Yeah yeah xD

--With love
Kajal

Breathe in, breathe out. Breathe in , breatne out. Umm gussa shant hua??? Your comment is longer than my drabble, of course shant hua 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank youu <3
Means a lot :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Desperate times call for desperate measures Randhir," he said, fishing out his mobile from his pocket. He quickly texted Sanyukta and kept his mobile back in.
^What was that, Anu? Didn't get a word!

Adored the rest of the drabble! How do you do this, Anu? :*
It was adorable and not cheesy at the same time! And I loved that so much! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Earlier than expected just because SOMEONE told me to. 😳 Psht. 50 bhi reach nahi hua. :( But, here it goes.
Also, Tanya, Jhanvi and Aishu's are pending. :P

Strange Proposals

"Don't worry Arpita. Why fear when Randhir's here?" he told her. "Randhir's here, there's everything to fear," Sanyukta retorted. As Arpita shot her a pointed look, she said, "Exactly, we'll take care of it."

Arpita left them to their sources, and went to make plans of her own.

"I have a fool-proof plan. You don't even have to help me with it Randhir," she said. "You have a plan? You've already thought about it? I knew I chose the right person to be my girlfriend," he said, pulling her close by her waist.

She removed his hand and said, "Don't get your hopes up Randhir. You probably won't like this plan but I was thinking of proposing to Parth just to get him to say that he loves Arpita too much to even think about me in any way other than a friend."

"And if he accepts the proposal? Then what? You'll act as his girlfriend? I'm really sorry Farzi but I can't see you with any guy other than myself," he told her.

He pulled her close once again and whispered in her ear, sending chills down her spine. "Sanyukta, please understand," he whispered, his voice husky.

"Randhir, please let me do this. You don't even need to feel jealous after it's all over," she pleaded, trying to convince him.

"Only on one condition Sanyukta," he told her.

"Okay, what is it?" Sanyukta asked him, hoping it wasn't too hard to fulfill.

"You'll have to agree to marry me Sanyukta Agarwal," he said, removing a ring from his front pocket.

"I will Randhir, but let's arrange Parth and Arpita's marriage first, shall we?" she told him and started working on the plan.

Only hours later did she realize what she had agreed to.

This is the most disappointing of the lot for me. :| URGH, I'm bad with romance. :/

Love,
Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

res

fastest. edit. ever. 😳

WE NEED A FIC ON THIS PLEASE! The storyline would be so awesome. 😛

Sanyukta dialogue 🤣🤣 Miss. Agarwal, allow me to point out the number of times RSS here has been playing Main Hoon Na wala SRK for you 😳

OMFG SANYUKTA REALLY 🤣🤣 Randhir, what a way to propose a girl Specially a romantically thickheaded girl like her 🥱 You gotta write a small tiny snippet of her reaction when she realizes what he said 🤣

He had a ring

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan


"You'll have to agree to marry me Sanyukta Agarwal," he said, removing a ring from his front pocket.

"I will Randhir, but let's arrange Parth and Arpita's marriage first, shall we?"


🤣

Should I blush first or laugh like a nutter? I'm confused 😳🤔

Edited by themockingblue. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This gurl! hmph!

RES***
______________________

UNRES***
Here Comes The SOMEONE!!

He pulls by her waist? *cringes*
He whispers with that husk in his voice? *Freezes*

These two were pretty *ahem*

All in All I loved it! Did I tell you I forgot about the Theme? =P
STML is pretty embarrassing at times! I had to read the Last phrase to recapitulate the theme! =P

You aren't bad at the Romance Business Buddy, just too lazy to write more than 200 words! But It is adorable!

Love You
Iptisha! (Burning)


Mentioning the name is better than being called by different Names! =P
Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
YOU WERE STALKING? 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

*edited

err! You're so perfect partner! I'm damn so proud of you

how can anyone be so good at the age of just 14😳 I do seriously love your writing ishtyle😎 it's just so different from others n that makes you an exceptional writer! yo!

I loved the way you presented everything n esp the title :| kya baat hai kameeni, I guess, I even can't write such an amazing story even when I'll be 140!(zinda rahi toh🤣

URGH, I'm bad with romance. :/ <hahah, this line makes me laugh!

Anyways, kameeni, you rock like anything

*loads of galiyaan*
Your inno partner 🤣

PS: I pressed the like button(sare jagah pe) 🤣
Edited by ARIANA_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

YOU WERE STALKING? 🤣


I don't need stalking 😎
Sautan, thank you!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: themockingblue.


I don't need stalking 😎
Sautan, thank you!! 🤗


Why am I being thanked?😕
Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago

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