OS: Woh Dekhne Mein Kaisa Seedha Saadha Lagta

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Woh Dekhne Mein Kaisa Seedha Saadha Lagta

She couldn't believe he had the guts to praise one of his ex-flames from college in front of his own wife. How dare he? Who gave him the right to talk about some stupid girl named Sona who was head over heals with this idiot. Who would fall in love with his Raavan Kumar anyway, thought a fuming Ishita.

"Kya hua itna irritate kyun ho rahi ho?" asked an innocent looking Raman.

He was having too much fun with this.. the moment he realized Ishita was trying to make him jealous by mentioning Subbu, he thought why not? Two could play at this game. He purposely made up a story with a girl named Sonali Kotnis who was actually a character in one of the books he was reading lately. He smirked to himself, this jhansi ki rani was the most gullible person he had ever met. She didn't even realize he was talking about her this whole time.

"Excuse me, main irritate nahin ho rahi hoon.. haan yeh baat aur hai ki tum mujhe irritate kar rahe ho, so please save me the drama and kindly shut up!" replied a not so happy Ishita.

"Offo Ishita.. tumhe toh jhoot bolna bhi nahin aata.. at least itna time mere saath spend karne ke baad itna to seekh leti!" Raman shook his head.

The woman couldn't even lie properly. Clearly this whole fake story of Sona was thoroughly affecting her how could he miss another chance, and so he continued.

"You do realize you're over reacting too much.. mere aur Sona ke beech mein aisa kuch nahin tha.. I told you na I was too shy to make a move with any girl let alone her!" he said.

"Acha? Agar kuch tha nahin then why are you gushing about her? I've had enough of this Sona.. I bet she's not even pretty and you're just exaggerating!" she replied while looking the other way.

"Oh Ishita, now don't be so mean.. if you want I can show you a picture of her." He replied coyly.

"WHAT?! You still have a picture of her? How dare you?! Do you have any shame? You're married yet you still roam around carrying a picture of her!" yelled Ishita.

This was the limit how could he possibly have a picture of one of his old crushes it was against the 'Girl Code' did he not understand? Stupid Raavan Kumar.. he should have played Mogambo in Mr. India instead he would've done justice to it with his villainous traits!

"What do you mean? I used to be mad about her.. of course I'm going to save a picture of her in fact its in my bedroom.. come I'll show you!" he grabbed her hand dragged her to the room.. this was going to be too much fun, he thought.

"Are you out of your mind? Leave me.. I don't care about your stupid Sona she can go to hell!" Ishita replied while trying to yank her hand of his.

"Ishita.. stop being so jealous I'm telling you, she's gorgeous one of the most beautiful girl I've met my entire life, I'm not even joking" Raman added fuel to the fire as they entered their bedroom.

"Ugh. I don't care how gorgeous, pretty or beautiful she is.. how dare you keep a picture of her and that too in your room, you must be the ONLY husband on this planet who still is mad over a college crush"

"Ishita just close your eyes trust me.. you'll agree with my as well" Raman said as he closed her yes with his hands and lead her to the side of the bed.

"Oh please.. agree with you my foot Raavan Kumar" Ishita mumbled.

She still couldn't believe she was doing this, how could this Raavan Kumar have the guts to show her a picture of Sona - Ishita didn't care how pretty that girl was, she was going to kill her if she ever came back in her Raavan Kumar's life.

"Okay you can open your eyes now" Said Raman, while standing behind Ishita.

She opened her eyes only to find herself and Raman in front of the mirror by their bed. For a second she didn't know why the hell she was looking at herself.. she looked towards Raman in the mirror, raising her eyebrows.

"Umm.. why are we standing in front of the mirror Raman?"

"You wanted to see a picture of Sona right? Well I don't necessarily have a picture of her.. but I do have a reflection and she's standing right in front of me" he whispered in to her ears.

It took Ishita a few seconds to realize what he meant. This man was talking about her all along.. Sona was just a facade! Pleasantly surprised would be an understatement for Ishita.. she was blushing and grinning ear to ear as she looked at Raman through the mirror.

"Sonali was just an excuse.. the real sona is standing in front of me and I know no matter what she'll stay with me through all my thick and thins. Thanks for being there Ishita whenever I needed you the most.. you can guarantee that I will be there for you as well.. always!" Raman said as he looked at both their reflections in the mirror.

Ishita couldn't help but smile and had tears of joy as she looked at Raman.. no matter how simple he looked there was still a mischievous child behind him who played pranks. But behind that child was a man of wisdom and a golden heart, she knew he would always be there as a friend, as a husband.. and maybe even a lover.

The End

OKAYY. Guilty as charged. YES, I am one of those chuppi rustams who writes one shots! 😆 It has been a longgg time thought since I've written. I used to write on Prem&Heer and Arnav&Khushi so those of you who remember me.. well done. 😆 I'd like to dedicate this particular one shot to one of my really really close and best friend on this forum - Nikki! 😳Because of her I was able to open my maun vrat 😆 she's the one who inspired me to actually become active again on a forum. So NIKKOO my TSS! This one's for you yaara I really hope you liked it! 😳

Along with her I would like to dedicate this to ALLL my wonderful BGD's RB, Shivs, Nina, Pri and Sia! I LOVE YOU GUYS SOO FREAKING MUCH! I honestly would be a bhatakti aatma if I hadn't found you all here! Seriously you guys are the reason why I come to this forum.. oh and of course Ishra duhh :P 😆 Hopefully you guys liked this even though it's crap since I've been sooo out of it, its been literally two years since I've written anything! :P Please ignore the cheese-fest toward the end of the OS I know Ishra aren't in that lovey-dovey phase yet but in my OS they are :P so deal with it ya'll 😆

Anyway, would love to see some likes and comments from you guys! Any sort of suggestion/criticism is welcomed! 😃

PS. Haven't proof read it soo.. ignore grammar/typos :P 😆

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Nikki_Titli thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg 😲

res🥳..

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OMFGGG u and OS?😲😲😲😲 -->my first reaction

then i saw the title n end note...my reaction-->🥳🥳🥳🥳

after readin the os..my reaction---> ...

My ROCKSTAR TSS...My GB..omg omg u were SO BLOODY PERFECT...!! i din knew u write os before...bt omg HW WONDERFULLY U WROTE...i could crystal clear imagine evry scene infront of my eyes..!!! BB karte yeh scene for real toh aur chaar chaand lag jaate..!!

nywz comin back to ur OS...omgg i LOVED LOVED the ending part..!! i felt he ws goin to show ishita's pic in the room...bt din thought u were actually gonna recreate tht MIRROR SCENE of my most fav film...DDLJ.....!! omg thts EPIC PERFECT...u knw i hv alwz wanted such mirror scene in show too..!! n hw epic beautifully u shwd tht..!! ishu se zyada i ws super happy n blushin imaginin the scene...😆😉...

10 on 10 for this OS frm u...and am NOT exaggaretin...!! n u knw tht well too..!!i

nw to ur dedication...aww...lik i told u offlate i saw ppl dedicatin their os/vm/posts to me...i found them very sweet..!! bt dedication frm u TOP THE LIST for obvious reasons..!! i'm most closest with u among all my YHM frnz...so ur dedication made me epic happy n made me feel extra spl...love u lots n lots my TSS...thts all i can manage to say...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗...

waitin for more n more stories frm u nw...n u BETTER write them..😉😉...

I'm ending my post with a song for ur OS wala IshRa..!!

Hum Mein Tum Mein Kuch Toh Hai...Kuch Nahin Hai Kya...😆😉
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res..OMG A STORY BY U...DAMM LEMME READ WILL BE BACK...
shit..A dedication too..damm honored
🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by luvsagar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it! It was beautifully written, hope you will kindly continue to write more Os. 😳 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omg 😲

res🥳..

--EDITED--


OMFGGG u and OS?😲 -->my first reaction LOLOL Yeah I knew I would shock you guys! Mission accomplished! 😉 🤣

then i saw the title n end note...my reaction-->🥳 WOOHOO

after readin the os..my reaction---> ... Aww haii making me blush and all! 😳😆

My ROCKSTAR TSS...My GB..omg omg u were SO BLOODY PERFECT...!! i din knew u write os before...bt omg HW WONDERFULLY U WROTE...i could crystal clear imagine evry scene infront of my eyes..!!! BB karte yeh scene for real toh aur chaar chaand lag jaate..!! AWW MY BABYYY! That is one of the most SWEETEST compliments I've EVER gotten yaar.. that's truly sooo freaking nice of you Nikkooo! <3333 I'm glad you could imagine all the scenes really well :D hehe AND YESS! Iss scene mein definitely chaar chaand lag jaate if it were BB! 😉 koi nahin abhi to time hai.. hoga hoga aage jaake! 😆

nywz comin back to ur OS...omgg i LOVED LOVED the ending part..!! i felt he ws goin to show ishita's pic in the room...bt din thought u were actually gonna recreate tht MIRROR SCENE of my most fav film...DDLJ.....!! omg thts EPIC PERFECT...u knw i hv alwz wanted such mirror scene in show too..!! n hw epic beautifully u shwd tht..!! ishu se zyada i ws super happy n blushin imaginin the scene...😆😉... LOL YES YES. I had to keep the Shahrukh element in there yaar after all I'm an SRK fan, you are an SRK fan, KP is and so is DT.. and so are Ishra! ;) SRK ka mention toh banta hai boss! 😉😆 again, I'm SOO glad you liked it yaar! :D haha yeah I really do hope they have this scene in the show.. it'll be a sone pe suhaaga! 😳

10 on 10 for this OS frm u...and am NOT exaggaretin...!! n u knw tht well too..!!i HAII ITNI ACHI RATING?! OMGG I've never felt this happy even after seeing my exam grades! :D Haiii dil khush kardiya tune meri TSS! MUAHH LABH YOU BABYYY! 🤗

nw to ur dedication...aww...lik i told u offlate i saw ppl dedicatin their os/vm/posts to me...i found them very sweet..!! bt dedication frm u TOP THE LIST for obvious reasons..!! i'm most closest with u among all my YHM frnz...so ur dedication made me epic happy n made me feel extra spl...love u lots n lots my TSS...thts all i can manage to say...🤗... UFFF HAII! Dil khushi karna toh ko tumse seekhe yaaraa! Seriously this comment of yours as TRULY brought a HUGE HUGE smile on my face and I am so so sooo happy that my dedication means a lot to you! But you deserve it yaara cuz you're such a wonderful friend to me <3 I love you sooo much Nikkoo! :* 🤗🤗🤗 Itna pyaar bhi kam padega I wish I could hug you in person yaar! 🤗

waitin for more n more stories frm u nw...n u BETTER write them..😉😉... haha gotchu baby girl..after exams are over then toh get ready for OS ki baarish from me! 😉😆

I'm ending my post with a song for ur OS wala IshRa..!!

Hum Mein Tum Mein Kuch Toh Hai...Kuch Nahin Hai Kya...😆😉
Aur kuch hojaye toh.. kuch yakeen hai kya? 😉


AHHH NIKOOO! Thank you thank you sooo much for the lovely and heartfelt comment yaara! Love you sooo much! Just like Ishu labhs calling Raman Shahrukh Khan! 😉🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CharmGal

I loved it! It was beautifully written, hope you will kindly continue to write more Os. 😳 😊


Aww thank you soo much! That's so sweet of you! haha yeah I'll try my best to write more for sure! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited.
Omg Garima. I never knew you write OS.😲
I must say tumne meri dil ki tamannah OS bana ke likha hai.😆 Seriously. When I read the spoilers the first thing that came to my mind was something like this.😳
Amazing OS Garima.🤗 "LAABH"(🤣) the DDLJ element in it.😳
Do write more.🤗
Edited by -Srkfan4ever- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Garima dear after watching such a sweet n cute n funny epi I get to read an equally sweet fiction. Thank u. I love it. As for Nikki she is roaming on forum encouraging every one to write on IshRa😆 But I am happy. I posted here only thanks to her contagious enthusiasm. 😳Great job Titli. 👍🏼
I am waiting for Monday to see Ishita's face when she realizes that Raman was just fooling her.
Ishu is so so cute I must say n Raman so naughty around her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Garima dear after watching such a sweet n cute n funny epi I get to read an equally sweet fiction. Thank u. I love it. As for Nikki she is roaming on forum encouraging every one to write on IshRa😆 But I am happy. I posted here only thanks to her contagious enthusiasm. 😳Great job Titli. 👍🏼

I am waiting for Monday to see Ishita's face when she realizes that Raman was just fooling her.
Ishu is so so cute I must say n Raman so naughty around her.



oh hello...i din go n say to evryone..only few ppl including U...baaki mujhe khudh pata nahi tha hw n when did i inspire them..!!

evn GB i had NO IDEA she evn writes OS...bt omg she PERFECTLY writes...nw i will be after her jst lik i'm aftr u for OS...😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli



oh hello...i din go n say to evryone..only few ppl including U...baaki mujhe khudh pata nahi tha hw n when did i inspire them..!!

evn GB i had NO IDEA she evn writes OS...bt omg she PERFECTLY writes...nw i will be after her jst lik i'm aftr u for OS...😆😉


I told u ur enthusiasm n craziness for these two r ultra contagious.😆
I am not complaining though coz I love reading fictions so I am having a field day!!😃

Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago

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