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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 10

That was so sweet of Arnav to come back to her school to get her. Mother Superior is a lovely lady. Poor Arnav couldn't hide his feelings for Khushi from his Mother Superior. Khushi has also started to dream about Arnav. How sweet. But it made me sad when she gave herself a reality check. I felt bad for Arnav when he was introducing Mother Superior to Khushi and had to divulge the details of his past in public. His past is not a pleasant one to recall happily. It saddened me again when Mother Superior teased him and he reminded her that Khushi is already married. But I loved it that Mother Superior gave him assurance that all was not lost. Who is Aman by the way?

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 11

What The 😲 Abortion/miscarriage at the age of 17? I knew she was cheated by some man but didn't think it will be something like this. Aww my poor Khushi. I forgot everything else I read before that. It was really very nice of Tamarai to help such a girl. Any other person in her place would have looked at her, showed some pity and left her to die without bothering to help the poor girl.

Loved your version of the Diwali scene, the care they have for each other and how unconsciously they look out for each other wherever they go. Munisamy's story was very touching. He has learnt his lesson the hard way. The description of the place was very well written. I could easily visualize the beauty of the place. It was a nice but heartbreaking chapter. I am all sad now :(

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 12

Poor Arnav. He must be so frustrated at the moment knowing that Khushi's had a horrible past. He can't even go and ask Khushi about it. It was very thoughtful of Munisami to try and help Arnav find out more about Khushi. He knew how it feels to live without the person you love and he sure doesn't wish his sir to be away from his love. Khushi was very cute in this chapter. What is with Palani? How can he talk like this about the girl his wife considers as her daughter? This is unbelievable. Doesn't he feel anything for Khushi?

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 13

I seriously don't know whether I should be happy or sad. Happy that she was not raped or sad for what Palani and the doctors did to a girl of 17 years. It is sad but true that men like Palani do exist in our society who can do anything for a male child. Palani claims to love his wife but by doing this to Khushi, he has wronged Tamarai too. I love and respect Tamarai for taking care of Khushi when her husband was all set to leave her to die alone. Palani is a beast inside the body of a human being.

Arnav was very cute. He couldn't wait for Munysamy for 15 minutes. Loved their little Rabba Ve moment. The story is a slow paced one but each chapter surprises me. I can't really guess what is going to happen next. Loved the story so far. But who is Aman?

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: RizArshi
Chapter 13

I seriously don't know whether I should be happy or sad. Happy that she was not raped or sad for what Palani and the doctors did to a girl of 17 years. It is sad but true that men like Palani do exist in our society who can do anything for a male child. Palani claims to love his wife but by doing this to Khushi, he has wronged Tamarai too. I love and respect Tamarai for taking care of Khushi when her husband was all set to leave her to die alone. Palani is a beast inside the body of a human being.

Arnav was very cute. He couldn't wait for Munysamy for 15 minutes. Loved their little Rabba Ve moment. The story is a slow paced one but each chapter surprises me. I can't really guess what is going to happen next. Loved the story so far. But who is Aman?

So, you are done with the first thread. Super glad that you are enjoying the story line.

I know its really hard for a girl like Khushi to survive in the society, but hey what life without any obstacles. I always wanted to write about a strong and independent Khushi, who's not afraid of anything And I think, I am managing well..a little though!!

And Riz, you are a sweety pie...and a gem of a reader. Bless!

A comment for each chapter..? And girl I love your speculations and analysis too much! Cant wait for your comments..because story is getting too intense at this time and few of my readers are like, how can you do this lol.

Okay, I am not ruining your suspense..hopefully you will reach there very soon..

Muahs and Hugs!!

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mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wonderful story Ji.. My heart goes out to Khushi.. The girl had to go thru so much misery..🥺 But I love the strong and fighter Khushi..And now she has Arnav who loves her.. Im sure she feels the same for him.. Off to the next thread...

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