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hema

@froots93

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Am I late??

Itne saare pages ho gaye😕

coming to the update it was awesome!!

loved it..😃

I didn't get onething...y did u name it as heaven n hell?? 🤣

Edited by froots93 - 11 years ago

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Kitna spamming...😲 😆😆

By the way Ananya
VERY NICE DRABBLE!
Write soon!

Love u:*
Prachi

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Arohi

@.Peeves.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

You actually updated. I need to breathe first. 😳

res

Okay, I actually like your style however less you write. Dont climb on chane ke jhaad par now 🤢

"Here he was, standing four inches away from her"

4 inches ☺️ ☺️

Yes, hell it was, since he craved to touch her, to wipe the water from her face and wanted so hard to kiss her.

"Why should I Farzi? Are you already learning to control your anger around men? Seems like the grooming sessions are doing you some good,

Scared already Sanyukta? I thought maybe, just maybe you'll last three years, looks like I was wrong."

" she told him and left him there, searching for answers.

^^ So typical Randhir 😆

Talks something thinks something! 😆

My baccha is so confused these days :*

Dedication?? Will tell you later xP

Edited by FlawlessAshvik - 11 years ago

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

awww...Ananya thanks for the dedication...U know I love u...❤️
coming to the drabble!!
Gosh this was Hawt ...Sanyu soaked in water
Randhir definitely can't stop looking!!
aaahhh...Heaven or hell?
I'd say both together...coz them together are like clash of the titan!!!
Hawt and sizzling!!

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Have I resed before?

Maybe Maybe Not.

I know.

Moi is so sorry Mirror :'(

Such a late comment.

But you know naa...my horrendously busy schedule :(

Thanks for not Resing for me.

No really re :P

I feel lazy to unres and hardly have time anyway toh better you not :/

ANyways...this gallery.

No need to ask is a superb idea :*

Heaven And Hell?

I LOVE the name <3

I am done flattering you..

Tired of complimenting :'(

Let me just say this write up however short, this time i wont complain cause, was flawless :)

The emotions and thoughts penned beautifully.

A little sense of humour added to brighten ur updates always...Hats off girl!

Love you always,

Your Kutti <33

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whinyteen96

@whinyteen96

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Lovely!...Quite adequately depicted Randhir's inner turmoil 👍🏼...I must say, I am really drawn to the concept of drabbles...No matter the length, an eloquent piece of work can bring a smile to one's face 😉...Keep regaling us with your anecdotes! 😊

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

OMG THIS WAS SO BIG. You have real talent omfg I have tears in my eyes yes do you see my khushi ke mote mote ansun 🤔🤪

That aside (for now) this was abso-effing-lutely b r i l l i a n t. The whole theme is just genius. You know the scene where his hand automatically moved towards her to tuck away her hair ☺️ he doesn't even know it how tuned up his reflexes are to her nowadays. <3 I've got goosebumps reading this, I swear ☺️ It's short (heh 🥱), but crisp and precise and beautiful and I see your point in not stretching it out and making it loose? Gah 😛 Dedication

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For a minute, it felt like heaven until he realized, this was hell.

Yes, hell it was, since he craved to touch her, to wipe the water from her face and wanted so hard to kiss her.

After all, what was their relationship with some instigating from his side and some reaction from hers?

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blah.

@santiagosentyou

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

OMG THIS WAS SO BIG. You have real talent omfg I have tears in my eyes yes do you see my khushi ke mote mote ansun 🤔🤪
That aside (for now) this was abso-effing-lutely b r i l l i a n t. The whole theme is just genius. You know the scene where his hand automatically moved towards her to tuck away her hair ☺️ he doesn't even know it how tuned up his reflexes are to her nowadays. <3 I've got goosebumps reading this, I swear ☺️ It's short (heh 🥱), but crisp and precise and beautiful and I see your point in not stretching it out and making it loose? Gah 😛 Dedication

Fav lines <3

For a minute, it felt like heaven until he realized, this was hell.
Yes, hell it was, since he craved to touch her, to wipe the water from her face and wanted so hard to kiss her.
After all, what was their relationship with some instigating from his side and some reaction from hers?

Only replying to the dedication part now 😛

What exactly do you want in it? :P Anything but length. 😳