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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyy allšŸ¤—

This my first fiction on Ashlok or of any otheršŸ˜†

Here is the prologue...if you people like it will continue😃As yet I havent decided whether it will be a two shots or three or whatšŸ˜›because I tend to keep writing😳

So depends on the response😊


He stood outside the private room in the City hospital.
Heartbroken and helplessness written over his face...he was an atheist. Yet, he
had prayed that day! Bappa I believe in her belief of Your existence, Please.


He had lost hope...after 2mths..when suddenly his prayers were
answered.


He felt a a hand caress his back. With a smile. "Ayi" I Cant
bear to live..witho..without her.He sobbed even harder. "Beta Shlok, She smiled. With Tears in her eyes..."she
is awake and out of danger now Shlok!!" she answered...thanking Bappa as she
did!


A hearty thanks to all my friends on IF.. Specially the writersā­ļøI left writing after high school..but U people inspired me to begin ek baar phiršŸ˜Ž

Special thanks to my namesake stalker..those of you who know heršŸ˜‰who planted this seed in my mind😳

Waiting for your precious comments😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Aisha,
this is really nice and it's nice to know that things are well between Shlok and Anjali, can't wait to read the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Hi Aisha,

this is really nice and it's nice to know that things are well between Shlok and Anjali, can't wait to read the story

Thanx RayšŸ¤—I need lots of encouragement😃 I m confused...Should I make it an OS SS what?! šŸ˜•
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Thanx RayšŸ¤—I need lots of encouragement😃 I m confused...Should I make it an OS SS what?! šŸ˜•

your welcome sweety šŸ¤—
well if you ask me I think SS since I love reading stories of Ashlok for me the longer they are the bette
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pinkoo Pinkoo 🤣

ah, I loved it!

update soon nahi toh I'll throw aloo! seriously! 🤣

awesome :|
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

your welcome sweety šŸ¤—

well if you ask me I think SS since I love reading stories of Ashlok for me the longer they are the bette

Okay will think, cz I sometimes go on writtingšŸ˜† Thanks!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG awesomee begin yaaar doo continue :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

OMG awesomee begin yaaar doo continue :D

Thanx Siham..need the encouragement😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue is very intrstng.. Y dint u write before yr??
😳
plz do continue and make it a ss..
😊

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