And I am finally here with my comment :P
Sorry I am late but then you guys know how lazy and busy I get na.
Well to start off. the prologue was very interesting...the part I loved the most was vardhans intro and what he did. my vardhu is the real cupid between them not some stupid fevicol*angry*.
The intro was great as well. I love the name mirrormates 😉 if only a certain someone gave me a similar awesome name 🤣😈
Coming to the concept. I personally love such jungle mei mangle type stories. they always bring out the best in a couple. and change them in irrepairable ways. waiting for the same to happen to sandhir
the first chappy was nothing short of fabulous.!
I loved the way rd was singing and sanyu was getting infuriated. haha cute it was :P I like this rd much better than the sadu mcp . :P you penned down the entire scene so intelligently. the lake part. the animals coming there part. still rd went just for sanyu that was really beautiful to read.
And the last scene. ahem ahem irada kya hai haan? you chutkus on the mission to write something which crosses your age limit in your story? hmm...interesting...very interesting...
Oh and that getting wet scene was sheer genius the way u guys described it till the water droplets falling on him. the way he was ogling at her.
Awesome it was.
On the whole a real good read.
Great job guys
buttercup as always you make me proud :')
Ananya you are one heck of a writer you definitely deserve to write with OS OF THE WEEK winner :P =)) Am goanna stalk you and read more from you very soon :)
till then..tc...update soon...
love,
ari:)
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