Hamari Adhoori Kahani - a SanDhir FF

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A SANDHIR SHORT STORY

HAMARI ADHOORI KAHANI

He hated her, and she too hated him...

Her league and his league were spheres that did not touch...

He was hard, she was tender...

BUT...

She was loved, he was avoided...

And this made all the differences in their lives.

For Randhir and Sanyukta, there was not anything else which they hated more than each other. But, without their knowledge, their continuous bickering, anger and insults led them to be each other's greatest supports.

But suddenly, one fine day, things changed for him. Her every word mattered to him. Her ignorance towards him was driving him crazy. She was busy with her life and someone else's, but not his. She still continued to ignore him, despite the thousand times he helped her. Her thoughts and life seemed to focus on someone else's. Someone whom I would hate to mention, but will have to... Parth. Hearing that very name made Randhir's blood boil.

He needed her, but she ignored him...

He tried to grab her attention, but she was least bothered. He tried to talk to her, but she pretended that she was deaf. And now, he could do nothing but give up. And the distance between them increased. He ignored her the way she ignored him, but somewhere, deep down his heart, he was craving for her attention.

The distance between them never seemed to bother her. As she thought, it was good riddance to bad rubbish. It was like, he never existed in her world and she was happy without his continuous taunts and MCP attitude. She was happy... until another girl entered his life. When he first met her, he welcomed her as if his life depended on her. He hugged as if there is no tomorrow. They claimed to be best friends... but she didn't like it. Best friends huh? Even a small scratch in his so called "best friend's" hand seemed like a brutal cut to him. After a few days, she started missing him. She missed his cutting remarks, his every-ready helping hand, his taunts, his everything. She so badly wanted to talk to him, but he was so preoccupied with his best friend.

IS THIS SOMETHING MORE THAN HATRED?

WILL THIS DISTANCE CHANGE THE EQUATION BETWEEN THEM?

WILL THEY EVER REALIZE THAT THEY NEED EACH OTHER MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE?

Presenting to you, "HAMARI ADHOORI KAHANI", the story of two hearts destined to meet and to be together forever.

Do tell me whether I should continue this or not. Give your honest comments and don't forget to hit the like button. Open to criticisms and suggestions.

Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 11 years ago

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Randhir Singh Shekhawat - Param Singh


an arrogant, rude, proud and a misogynistic guy. Feels that all the girls are always dependent on guys for everything (there are exceptions to every rule). A genius, who is a solution to every problems. Has serious attitude problems. People either fear him or dislike him. But nobody sees the golden heart beneath its iron mask, except for one person. He has a dark past, which will be revealed in the story.

Sanyukta Aggarwal - Harshitha Gaur



a sweet, caring, sensible girl who is ready to face any challenge. Feels that a girl too can compete in men's world. An average girl who is full of spunk. Dislikes guys who undermine girls. Will do anything to prove her worth. Constantly clashes with Randhir.

Parth Kashyap - Ankit Gupta



a complete mystery. A kind of guy any girl would want. Someone who's too good to be true. The Mr. Perfect of FITE. More about him in the story.

Taani Kapoor - Vrinda Dawda



a sweet, bubbly girl who is full of life. The one exception to Randhir's rule. Randhir's best friend since childhood. The only person who understands Randhir and knows him A-Z. She is all Randhir has. Depending on the situation, she is his best-friend, sister, enemy, mentor and everything to him. They have an unbreakable bond. But, due to unavoidable circumstances, they were separated since they were 12 years old, but their friendship never died. More about her in the story.

NOTE: ALL THE OTHER CHARACTERS IN THE SERIAL ARE THE SAME. OTHER NEW CHARACTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED AS THE STORY UNFOLDS.

Edited by luvtaareyswaron - 11 years ago
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AUTHOR'S NOTE

Heyya people! Some of you in this forum might know me. For those of you who don't, I'm Niru, a die-hard fan of Randhir and SanDhir. The SS which I'm writing now is based on the present scenario. Anyone can read this SS at present, but as it progresses, it might turn mature, and then I might tag it (16+). This is my first try on SanDhir; hence I'm not sure whether it is up to the mark. And this story is not just about SanDhir and their love. It is also about the bond of friendship between Randhir and Taani and also Sanyukta and Taani. Do read and give your honest reviews. And don't forget to hit the like button. Happy reading.

Edited by luvtaareyswaron - 11 years ago
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Index
PROLOGUE - ABOVE
CHARACTER SKETCH - ABOVE
CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 5
Edited by luvtaareyswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I so loved d concept i imganated smthing like this ...its awesome i love d plot
Taani nd Randhir frnds awesome
I guess TaaRth (taani nd parth) will play major role to meet SanDhir...
Update soon nd do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK...
Oh god! i deleted my whle comment!!! ugh hate this browser!!!1
I LOVED your prologue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I mean seriously its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Believe me i wanted something like this to happen from the day the Sa-Rth hug happened.
I so wanted to see sanyu jealous too nd i love u so much for starting this.
believe me or not i was thnkng of the same thng- a girl entering RD's life, who is his best frnd and the girl who always came in my mind was Vrinda Dawda ( i love love love her!!!!!!!!!!!!😃 )
Kudos!!!!!!!!! for starting this.
Nd pls pm me when u update, thats not to say i wont be stalking this SS.
Your title Rocks!!!!
Pls pls pls update ASAP. will be eagerly waiting.
Cant wait to find out what happens next!!!!!😊
Love
Shreya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!👏😲I am in love with the prologue already so imagine what will happen to me when I read the story!😆
Jaldi likhna and do pm me😳
Loowwwvveee
Deeya😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting very intresting continue dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start
please do continue and PM me when you have updated, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love it!!
considering d current scenario in sadda haq i wud love to see a new girl in randhirs life who can b a true friend to him love him unconditionally and make sanyukta realise his value in her life...
waiting for your update!

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