VIRIKA FF:It,s All About Love. PART 13 UPDATED (page 15) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
nice description
luved it
aww viren and jeevika together
yayy
cant wait
hats off
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
I CAN GIVE UPDATE ON FRIDAY BUT I AM DISSAPPOINTED WITH COMMENTS.IF YOU ARE NOT COMMENTING BECAUSE I AM NOT UPDATING EARLY THAN THERE IS SOME CAUSE I AM BUSY IN MY STUDIES AND DONT GET TIME TO SIT ON COMPUTER WHENEVER I GET TIME I GIVE UPDATE I WILL TRY NOT TO TAKE MUCH TIME NEXT TIME BUT THIS T6IME PLZ FORGIVE ME.ABOUT PM I WILL TRY TO GIVE TODAY.
THANKU
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
VIRIKA FF:Its All About Love
PART :12

Till now the story goes like this
viren and jeevika are married.but virat,manvi and their family noticed the cold behaviour of them with echother and concluded that they have a big fight.virat,manvi made plans for their union but failed.they talked with their friends and tried to know what happened between them and bring them closer but no one know what had happened.now virat,manvi insisted viren,jeevika to tell their problem and now both are telling about their clg life.
in clg till now what happened is that jai,kash like eachother but didnt express and they dnt know about their feelings.jai,kash,raina,lucky,viren,jeevika are best friends.they eat together sit togther and do study together.raina had crush on viren and lucky feel something for jeevika.

Now they had cme back from home after enjoying these three holidays with family.jeevika viren enjoyed with their siblings and jai,kash spent these holidays thinking about eachother both had realized their love for eachother cos in these holidays they missed eachother a lot and decided that they cant live without each other.
today their clg start ahain and everyone had hurry t reach clg early and all came to clg at almost same time with different of few minutes.they met each other lke they were on holidays forever.jai n kash were blushing seeing eachother knowing their feelings for each other.and jeevika,viren noticed it.
they had their monthy tests in a week and they were sitting in cafe table with shakes talking about monthly tests.

Ja:bhai sab baatein choro ye to batao exams ki prepration kasi ha
R:bilkul nahi ha
k:hai but thod or karna baki ha
L:meri to tujhe pata ha kasi hogi mein to bas Rab ka nam le kar sab karta hoon
V:yar mujhe to bohot...
jai couldnt let him speak and answered on his behalf
JA:tujhse nhi poocha maine.har exam ke liye preprtion hoti hai tabhi to first aata ha
V:iss bar nhi ha yar three chapters mainse mujhe ek chapter math ka bilkul nahi ata thats hell difficut
ja:tu har bar aesehi khta ha phrtop bhi karta ha
k:tum hmesha first aate ho viren
l:han har test har assignment har exam mein first aata ha schooltime se
k:phir to iss time tough competition ha
v:kyun
k:kyunke jeevika same viren jaisi hai har saal school,clg mein top karti ha
l,ja:sach
je:ya any doubt
r:phir to maza ayega dehenge top kon sa toper karta ha
je:viren kyunke mera physics ka half chapter rehta ha jo mujhse kabhi nahi hota
k:viren bhi same situation mein ha
ja:wah yar kya baat ha maza ajayega ab to
all laugh and went for class

Four days passed and three days were left for their tests they had prep holidays and they study in their rooms.
in boys hostel
viren was lost in doing sum of his math problem and jai was playing angry birds on laptop viren got irritted of the noise and sat on bed and cloosed the lid of laptop
v:jai mujhe tujhse baat karni ha
ja:mujhe bhi pehle tu bata
v:jai tu muhe bata tu ek do din se kuch parhai pe dehan nahi de raha matlab teri itni tyari ha test ki
ja:viren dekh yar mujhe hona fail hi hona ha to parhke kya faida
v:aese kyun bol raha ha
ja:yar jabse pyar hua ha parhai mein man nahi lagta
v:maine tujhe pehle din bola theke parhaimeinserious rehna magar tu
ja:are ab pyar hogya to meri kya ghalti ha
viren was drinking coffee
v:dekh jai mein mazak mein mood mein nahi hoon tujhe or pyar
he gave a small laugh
ja:i am serious viren i love her truly madly
v:good good
ja:krle mazak viren jitna mazak karna ha karle mein to ja rha hoon usse batane
viren cough and spill the coffee jai gave him water
v:jai dekh tu apne bhi exam kharab kar raha ha uske bhi ek bar tests khatam hone de to karlena jo marzi
ja:nahi maine man bana lia ha i am going to tell her now or agar to appreciate nahi karsakta to discourage bhi mat kar
v:accha ja jo chahe kar good luck
he hug him
v:tujhe pata ha vo log kahan hain
ja:cafe probably
v:hmm
jai went viren decide to go also so he also went to cafeteria

In cafeteria lucky,raina,kash,jeevika were sitting jai came
ja:kash can i talk to you for a minute plz
k:ya sure
she went with jai
je:raina tumhe nahi lagta kash change hogyi ha
r:matlab
je:i mean har wakt jai ki baatein uske saath ghoomna phirna imean i know she like him but we are also her friends
l:han jeevika maine bhi note kia
r:vo note nhi kia jo maine note kia ha
je,l:kya
r:she love jai
j:no no there nothing like that agar hota to vo mujhe zarur batati
just then viren came
v:mujhe kash ka nahi pata lekin jai love her or vo kash ko yehi batane gaya ha
l,je,r:what
v:ya maine to mana kia lekin vo nahi mana or kaha ke aaj hi batayega
r:thts cool lets go and watch them
v,je,l:hawww
r:what its happening first time in our group lets see na
v:raina they neede privacy thats why went alone na
je:or kya varna hamare saamne bhi to baat kar sakte they
just then they saw jai,kash coming they got silent and sat when th came jeevika noticed tears in kash eyes she immediatly hug her
j:kya hua kash tum theek ho ro kyn rahi ho kya hua bolo na kash jai ne kya kaha ha?
kash breaking hug and holding her hand said
k:jeevika let me say na he love me jeevika jai love me too i a so happy
kash hug her again but jeevika was lost in her own world andkash noticed it
k:kya soch rahi ho jeevika
je:nothing
k:dont worry jeevika to kya hua agar mein relation mein hoon i will be your best friend forever
je:i know it kash
jai hug viren and told him the same
l:ab to pary banti ha
v.je,r:yayyy
jai,kash bought burgers,fries and drinks and they did party


Just the bell rang and except viren all went for class he was upset because of something he went to ground and sat on bench with hands on face jeevika saw him and came to him and sat beside him
j:what happened
v:nothing
j:you can tell me viren
v:jeevika actually mujhe maths ka 3rd chapter nahi aata thats really important or agar muhe position lani hai to vo chapter nahi chor sakta or vo chapter hamare group mein ksi ko nhi aata mujhe samajh mn nhi aa rha ha kya karun
j:thats not a single problem viren tumne mujse kabhi pooch hi nhi that chapter is my favourite i know it by heart i can help you in tht
viren immediately gave a big wide smile jeevika smiled seeing his smile and admired him in her mind
v:sach
j:ofcourse viren what are friends for i will help you
v:jeevika agar tumhe kabhi bhi koi problem aaye to plz mujhse zarur poochna hope i can help
j:actually problem ha
v:tell me
j:1st chapter of physics thats so difficult mein itna try karta hoon hota hi nahi ha
v:deal then mein tumhe vo chapter karva dunga thats ne of my favourite
j:but viren after three days our tests
v:no problem hm ek kam karte hain kal shaam ko 5 o clock cafeteria mein milte hain
j:not five four o clock jitna early ho utna better ha
v:ok then kal milte hain bye
j:bye
viren ran to the hostel jeevika smiled
j:he looked to good when he smiled he was so happy that i am helping him but neverin my life i hve helped a boy why i feel good when he shared his problem with me and wanted help and why i agreed
jeevika wondered.the answer to her question was because she had started liking viren but she didnt know

Next day was tiring all were lost in their books while viren and jeevika were getting ready to meet and help eachother jeevika wore a pink frock and churridar and viren wore a white t shirt withblue jeans(sooo hooot).

jai asked a sum from viren and he start telling him and when he reached cafe jeevika was already sitting on the chair with her favourite strawberry milkhake viren look at her from top to bottom and the word came from his mouth"PRINCESS"viren was loking at her fr the first time in such clothes cs mostly in clg she wore jeans,frocks or skirts and she was looking damn beautiful in that pink dress viren was lost admiring him and was not taking eyes away from her jeevika noticed viren
j in mind:OMG viren is looking super damn HOT in this dress oh God mein parhai mein kaise concentrate aroon wait am i mad mein kya sch rahi hoon mn yhn prhne aati hoon bas
she stoodup and came to viren and wave her hand in front of his eyes
j:viren were are you lost
v:oops sorry jeevika you are looking so very beautifull
j:thanks
v:wese achanak ye kapre
j:han vo hostel mein to mein yhi phnti hoon i feel better in them v to bas clg mn
v:wse jeevika you look tooo goood in this outfit
j:thnx ab vo karein jiske liye aye hain
v inmind:hope so mein vo kam kar payun.mere samne ek itni khubsurat princess bethi ho or meinparhi aye bhagwan aesa kyun kar rhe ho mere saath
j:viren
v:han han chalo

They start stdying and in between steal gances of each other viren was not tired of dmiring jeevika he sometime stare at her when she get busy in solving the sum he felt something un natural which he never felt with any girl same with jeevika she was aware of him staring at her and she didnt know why but she liked when he look at her so she stayed quiet and will look at her chocolate brown eyes when he solve the sum and smile wildly to jeevikafor her help.they felt hungry and ate pastries.viren helped jeevika n jeevika helped viren and both were thankful to eachother now it was 6:30
v:sach jeevika tumne itna easy bana dia iss chapter ko mere liye thnku sooo much
j:and what u did viren u showed me trickshow can i make this chapter easy han thanku so much for that or ab hamein chalna chahiye
v:ruko jeevika ek minute
j:kya hua viren
v:vo umm umm mein keh raha tha ke agar umm umm tum mere saath matlb hum yahan umm walk karein thodi si?
jeevika got shocked and silently bend her head down.
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I could have updated in morning ad i wrote the whole part but by mistake i cleared it all and my mood was sooo bad but i thought to give update for three of my frieds who follow my story "sweet aayushi",sumayyah1",arshiasushma"
i only updated for you guyz you like my story nd expresses your views and i really love you for this
so how was it do tell me like every time i hope theres some virika but in next few parts you are going to have more and more ofvirikajust keep liking and waiting

one more thing nexti will give update on pg 15 after very first comment so plzshare my story i cant be regular till my exams but after exams everyday i will talk to you all i will reply to you all and i will try posting pics to which i am trying but unable to do so if someone can tell me in detail i will be very greatefull you can tell me in inbox in details plz anyone helllppp.

PRECAP:
monthly tests
holidays
result
and surpriseee
but to know what is the surprise wait and like
i will add another thin now and you have to answer that in every update i willask you a question in the end and you all have to answer that question so question from this update is"WILL JEEVIKA SAY YES TO VIREN FOR WALK?"


Edited by Farihangel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
yipeee u updated
and that too sooo long
awesome dear
just loved it
awww i m dreaming
thats really fantastic
virika falling for eachother
eeekkksss...
i loved it
jeevika is definitely a PRINCESS
and viren is her PRINCE
just loved every bit
they helping eachother
too awesome
the eye-lock
it took my heart away
superbly awesome
and plz plz plz dear continue soon
this time
i am really eager to know whats wrong between them
plz continue soon
thanks for this update

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
awesome update ya
totally
liked whole update
contiune soon
amazing
superb
fantastic

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
HI EVERYONE
I want to tell you guys something i got my date sheet for exams and my exams starts from 2nd of may and will end on 19th may.i have a week to study and have no time for sitting on computer.but yesterday i got time in night and i would have given the update but by seeing the response i got really upset and disappointed that i didnt update.just 4 comments and 5 likes i spare time from my studies and give update in night wasting my sleep but i am no getting good response nd now i am thinking why i am writing this story?if no one likes it than tell me after clearing their missunderstanding i will stop this FF.but i tell you i ad written this ff in my diaries and 5 diaries are filled now previous year when i had summer holidays i had writen this ff in my dairy and now i dont wanted to tell you but i had written till their kids are bornand now i was writing their life with their kids and theirs lot more behind this.if n one wants to read this ff than tell me i will stop writing.
another thing if i get enough comments till page15 than i can update before exams or i will update after exams after almost a month now its upto you guyz if anyone want update soon than tell me before friday.
and plz read the note on the story in the end.i had asked something and no one had nswered it so plz give responseto me so i can give update early.

THANKYOU
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
hi dear its just a thing that u dont PM to anyone about ur update.no one is able to know that u have updated ur story!!thgats the main reason u dont get enough response on ur story!!!plz i request u dont discontiue it just make everyone know that u have updated ur story!!
u know even i didn't know about this note too i just came here and i was checking so i came to know that u have written a note.PLZ PLZ DONT DISCONTIUE IT.YOUE STORY IS AMAZING AND U R DOING A GR8 JOB.

just tell evryone about ur story!!!only few members know this!i can help u in this thing plz repy me or scrap me .i can promote ur story to my friends.

thanks...
~love aayushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
HI EVERYONE
Now my exams had started and i cant give update till 16th of may.i wanted to update in night but i was so so so sleepy as i had woken early so now you all will have to wait till 16th than i will give update regularly,will give pm and reply to your responses and i wilol try to post the pics too.till then plz be pateint and dont fortget my story.

thanku
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
will wait till then :)
all the best!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
HELLO EVERYONE
My exams are over and i am free.
i will update today INSHALLAH and i promise i will send pms
i will reply to everyone and i will read everyone"s story
thanks everyone for the pms i will read all of them
i will now not dissappoint you all.i will surely give update today noon or night
and i can give update everyday but for that i need likes and comments

thanku for waiting.ii will give a looong update
enjoy

thanks

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