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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Raj-

awesome!!!
blanket scene was amazing!!!

confession bahut khoob tha!!
brilliant writing!!!
ty for the pm.



Welcome Raj di.!
Thankyou fr cmmnt !😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: try2149

Wow, superb chapter.

Finally swaron confessed their love but didn't say those magical words to each other.
Eagerly waiting for next chapter.



Thanks a lot fr the comment Neha!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DD_Tannufan

haye .. my caring swayam ..
loved it sakshi ...
👏



Thankyou so muchh di!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -spongy-


Finally i finished reading this.
Beautiful story guys. A great mix of suspense and romance.
I am loving the way SWARON are characterized. They both are poles apart yet so similar.
The way the story is moving 👏

The way you unfolded the past and the emotions.. 👏
Beautifully penned down.
The confession was beautiful. Waiting for them to take another step forward.
Love this story

Thanks for the PM. Update soon and do PM me.
Will try my best to read the further updates.

PS. late feedback.. Studies!



Aw...thnks for the long comment!
Welcome yaar!
Will PM you !

thnku so much😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nancynnv

I like the title
I like the poster
N I definitely love the story
Sam n shine where very cute part
Swayam's feeling were deep n appropriate
In all nice ss
Waiting for the last part eagerly !



Thankyou so much nancy!!!
Glad you read this !😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks to the ones who liked the update! 😳

Next post is last chapter!😳
-Sakshi.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Previous Chapter

Presenting the 9th Chapter of the SS. [Last Chapter]
***

Chapter 9

STOP THE SONG IMMEDIATELY. When indicated then only ON it.


Swayam- Sharon...let's visit our place?
Sharon- Yeahhh...but wait...
Swayam- Now what?
Sharon opened the cupboard and took out his "flute"
Swayam- Yeh..tumhare paas?
Sharon- Aap wo sab chodiye na...but chaliye abhi...

Both hand in hand walked on the road and reached the PARK... they sat on the bench.

Sharon- Swayam... mein apke saath...no no...mere Sam ke saath yahan aayi hun, aisa lag rha hai..jaise firse wahi time aa gaya hai...
Swayam- Hmm.wo first meet, hamara masti karna aur tumhara GAANA...

Sharon's smile vanished, Swayam saw that..he made her face him...
Swayam- Kya hua?
Sharon- Nahii...wo sab ab past ban gaya hai...
Swayam- I want to hear you sing...
Sharon- No Swayam...mein nahi gaati aur na hi ga paungi...actually sab kuch meine chhod diya hai...
Swayam- Tum...aisa kyun par?
Sharon- These small small things...I mean yeh to bohot badi baat thi... they made me miss our talks, miss everything related to you, made me miss you more and more...and also it made me fall for you like eternity!

Her vision blurred as her eyes allowed water drops to form... but before they could fall...Swayam wiped them and cupped her face...

...ON THE SONG...
It is Zindagi Pyaar Ka Geet Hai...

He just planted a kiss on her forehead...
Swayam- Sharon...
Sharon- Agar aisa hai na Swayam to kya aap Baasuri bajaoge??

Swayam left her face...she grabbed his hand...

Sharon- I want my SAM wala SWAYAM...
He looked at her...silent tears were flowing down his eyes...with a smile also...
Swayam- Then...SHINE-SHARON..I need...

She smiled...she handled him the flute...
Sharon- With me...?
Swayam- Our song!

Sharon nodded and sighed... he put the flute near his lips...and eyed Sharon...
She took a deep breath and Swayam started...

(Zindagi Pyaar Ka Geet Hai
Ise Har Dil Ko Gaana Padega) * 2
Sharon joyfully started the song...she felt refreshed...
Swayam looked at her... he blinked her eyes once showing that it's all beautiful...
Both kept staring at each other... she sat close to him... holding him by his arms...
And rested her head on it...

Zindagi Ghum Ka Sagar Bhi Hai
Has Ke Us Paar Jaana Padega
Sharon smiled wide while singing... he kept looking at her...
He felt so glad seeing her enjoying!
He then concentrated on his flute playing... she gave a flying kiss...
Sharon- Bohot acha lag raha hai...Swayam...
He just nodded happily...

(Jiska Jitna Ho Aachal Yahan Par
Usko Saugaat Utni Milegi) *2
She stood up from the bench... and dragged Swayam also...
Swayam nodded a NO... She pouted... So Swayam agreed...
Sharon just showed him tounge as teasing...and ran...
Swayam didn't run behind but he just smiled while playing it...
Sharon chirped... she was feeling so lively... Swayam closed his eyes for a second...

Phool Jeevan Mein Gar Na Khilen To
Kaaton Se Bhi Nibhaana Padega
Sharon roamed through the park... but didn't found any flower...
Then Swayam found a Rose Bud... and she saw it.and plucked it... inturn got hurt coz of thorns...

Zindagi Pyaar Ka Geet Hai
Ise Har Dil Ko Gaana Padega
Swayam's tensed face... he was about to stop playing the flute but she stopped him...
She caressed the small bud and put it into her hairs...

She made some antique poses...and stood infront of him putting her hands on her waist..
Swayam's eyes widened...
She chuckled at this... she was enjoying this...
Sharon- Kaisi lag rahi hun? Bohot buri na???
Swayam nodded a NO...
Sharon burst out laughing... She sat on the ground and so did Swayam...

(Hai Agar Door Manzil To Kya
Raasta Bhi Hai Mushkil To Kya) *2
Sharon stretched her arms... and lay down on the green grass...
Sharon *thoughts*- I am so happy... itni khushi mujhe kabhi nahi hui... I promise aise hi life mein Happiness bhar dungi... chahe kuch bhi ho... will never leave my family... Swayam ko khud se door kabhi nahi hone dungi... kabhi nahi...
Here Swayam looked at her... he coughed for a sec which broke Sharon's trance...
He asked her what through his eyes... Sharon shrugged her shoulders...

Raat Taaron Bhari Na Mile To
Dil Ka Deepak Jalaana Padega
A tear drop rolled down her eyes... she wiped it...
She with Swayam's leg support got up...and sat beside him...
He gave a heart-touching smile to her...

Zindagi Pyaar Ka Geet Hai
Ise Har Dil Ko Gaana Padega
Swayam *thoughts*- It's Love Sharon...thanks for making me fall in love with you...once again
For both of them this was kind of blessing... they loved each other so much... Still the confession was yet not done...

Sharon- Swayam...I I just want to live this moment for infinity... Kaash abhi ka yeh moment kabhi khatam hi na ho!
Yeh humare life ka sabse best moment hoga...haina...
Swayam removed the flute... and sighed...but replied too...
Swayam- Hmm...sabse best...
Sharon was in AWE...she showed a fake angry face... immediately said...
Sharon- Huh...how could you stop?? Are no speaking...aap flute bajao...ye nahi rukna chahiye... Aap baad mein reply kar dena...
Mujhe abhi sirf flute sunao...jaldi jaldi...
Swayam *chuckled*- Are baba..okay...
He put the flute back close to his lips...and sang the music...
She showed a thumbs up...

(Zindagi Ek Paheli Bhi Hai
Sukh Dukh Ki Saheli Bhi Hai) *2
Sharon made Swayam stand...and also she did that...
The moment when they got separated and now they met flashed across her mind...
Swayam understood her... he came infront of her...
She held his forearm... Swayam saw that... she was just looking at him...
He left one hand from flute and squeezed her hand a little which was on his...
Swayam gave "NO" indication...as he knew how Sharon must be feeling...

Zindagi Ek Vachan Bhi To Hai
Jise Sabko Nibhaana Padega
Sharon moved ahead...leaving his hand... he stopped her...
She turned back, taking her palm in his palm and put it on his heart...
She smiled at this...

Zindagi Pyaar Ka Geet Hai
Ise Har Dil Ko Gaana Padega
Sharon also convered the hands with his left one... she just sighed...
Swayam had tears in his eyes...which Sharon noticed... she came close to him...

Zindagi Ghum Ka Sagar Bhi Hai
Has Ke Us Paar Jaana Padega
She just crashed into his chest... Hugging him tight...
He wrapped his hands around her... leaving the flute... and both shed silent tears...

***
For long time they stood like this...in each others embrace... Then after breaking the hug gently... Both wiped each others tears and then sat on the bench close to each other...

He kept the flute on his lap and both looked at each other...
Sharon- Wasn't that refreshing?
Swayam- Yeahh... Sharon... After so many years!
Sharon- I wanted that moment to never end...

She took his hands and kissed on back... he held those hands and squeezed them taking them near to his heart...
And then gave a warm smile to her... they moved closer... but Sharon just blushed... he whisperd in her ears...

Swayam- Sharon...chalo hum Ice-cream parlor chalte hai...aur baarish ka mausam bhi hai...
Sharon- Hmm...Chaliye...

Swayam smiled seeing her so nervous when he came close ot her..
They both stood up and reached the parlor walking hand in hand...

Sharon- Butterscotch?
Swayam- No...chocolate !
Sharon- 2 Chocolate then!

The man gave them cones and they both left the place... When Sharon was about to have it, she sensed a drop hitting her head... she looked up... And that was it... Cloud started to rain... as in It started raining.

Sharon (excited)- Swayam! Baarish! Ice-creamm!!!!

She immediately held his arm to which Swayam chuckled...
Swayam- Let's go there...

He said pointing towards a lane side, As it was Wednesday and the shops remained closed of that area of this day! And it was also roofed so they had enough space for standing...safe.
They hurriedly reached there... no single person was around there...

Sharon- Hum dono akele hi hai...
Swayam- Hmm...aaj shops close rehti hai na...
Sharon (pouting)- Meri ice-cream...puri gayi!
Swayam- See this!
Sharon- OMG! Aapne abhi tak kholi hi nahi...cheater...

She hit him playfully on arms...Swayam laughed and opened the cover... She snatched the ice-cream and started having it in a sweet-kiddish manner.. Swayam was just adoring her...admiring her beauty... she forwarded it to Swayam also...he also had bites...
And finally it came to an end...

Swayam- Yeh kya kiya Sharon!!
Sharon (shocked)- Kya??
Swayam- Look at your Saaree and tumhara face bhi thoda creamy ho gaya hai!
Sharon saw her Saaree...and made an annoyed face..!
Sharon- Aww...all because ye bearish...meri Saariii...
Swayam- Tumhara face bhi...
Sharon- Aap please clean kar do face pe kaha laga hai...

Swayam moved close to her...she just hung down her face... He then angled her face up and she gulped...Sharon slowly gazed from down to up...and then was looking straight into his eyes... Swayam with his thumb removed the cream near her lips... This sent chills run down her... She held her breath in... He observed the effect which was on her just because of him...

Sharon- Sww...Swayamm...wo...thank...s...ab mein..khud kar..lun..lungi...

And she moved his hand away gently and turned to the other side... Swayam just held her hands...and she too held his palm...

Sharon- Baarish bhi band ho gayi...hai...ghar chalte hai..ii
Swayam just nodded...

Without another word...they walked the way to their home... no one spoke at all... Sharon was just blushing due to the fact that their hands were now intertwined with each other...
They entered the house, Dadi saw them walking together, their expression showed their love... She understood that all was fine between them...
Dadi *in mind*- Mre dono bachhe humesha khush rahe, inke beech pyaar har din badhta rahe...

***

In their Room,
Sharon stood near the bed... Swayam locked it and then came to her...
He moved bit close to her and then held her shoulders... she faced him...his one hand gently rubbed her neck horizontally from side and moved through her hairs... She rested her one hand on his chest and the other one was clutching her own saaree... her eyes got fixed into his chocolaty brown ones and he moved his hand (which was on her shoulder) tracing along her arm till her palm which was clutching her saaree, he made her open her fist and held it tightly... He placed kisses on her hand... She breathed high...
They were inches apart now... both could easily hear the heart-beats which were fast!

Swayam- Sharon...I Love You very much...
She just closed her eyes...absorbing the words...she so craved for...
Sharon- I Love You too...I just Love you too...

Their breaths slowly vanished as he placed his lips on her delicate ones... She was loosing herself... she gave in... and responded back with equal intensity! It turned out to be a passionate one... he entered her mouth... their tongue moved in sync... Later... due to lack of oxygen their broke apart... he looked at her...she was pink...

Swayam- Will you be mine today... it's the night which is all awaited...

Sharon slightly nodded...and turned crimson... she crashed into his chest... he lovingly hugged her back... and then scooped up in arms, she was in the same position... he just placed her on the bed...he leaned on her... and started kissing her from top... his hands reached her Saree... she took a deep breath... and gently placed her hand at the back of his head as allowing him to make them "one".
Swayam understood her...and switched off the lights.

Love finally developed between them as in life, Love is an important part, it's something everyone craves for!

Sam n Shine once again fell in the Song of Love... as Swayam n Sharon...now their heart started beating as one as in "
Pyaar Ka Geet... Dilon Ne Phir Gaya"
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DO NOT IGNORE THE NOTE BELOW, IT'S FOR YOU ALL😳
Edited by sakshibshah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
How was the Chap? Bad? Boring? Worse?😕
Reviews bhi dena... but read the below content plzz...😳

The last chapter of the SS... ahh...
Thankyou so so muchhh guysss for giving this SS a chance and encouraging me by your comments and likes! Never did I felt that I did a wrong decision writing this SS and taking up this concept. 😊

This story gave me different kind of encouragement...it was something I will cherish it forever. The comments I got were overwhelming! I am just speechless ! 🤗

The love you showered by each passing update just made me write n write for you all. This SS somewhere made me grow up as a writer... all thanks to YOU guys! 😃

It's a wonderful feeling to complete a write up so fast just because you all eagerly waited for updates and I couldn't afford to make you all wait.😛

Thanks a lot.🤗

Will be waiting for the reviews for the last chapter!
May be I irked you all by adding songs in the update! If youa ll ever felt boring , I apologize !

Love you each n every one. Be it Silent reader, be it regular, irregular, be the one who scrapped me, be it any! You all are close to my heart! Just very very special. 😭 I'll miss this SS...dont know why but it's really close..may be because I personally am addicted to songs n music ! 😳

Thankyou guys! Ending this SS with happy tears! ❤️
PS- This post is my 4100 th post! 😆⭐️
Lots n lots of Love.
Sakshi.
Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
my res

unres...

yapieee me first...

nd very nic update..

everything was perfect...

i personally loved this song..

do write more..

nd i also miss dis ss

nothing more to say..

ur aswom writter sis..

p.s:- plz update KC
Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly am sorry i din comment on each part individually but i read each part on d day u updated itself. .
Par now am commenting. .

Dis is for sure one of ur best works Sakshi..
N it also is one of my most favourite ones. .
I would surely love to read dis again n again. .
Hats off to u for thinkin a concept like dis n den pulling it off so so well. .
U have just proved to be a brilliant writer n have only become better n better wit each update. .
I just loved d twists u gave so d story swaron as sam n shine came like a shocker to me. .
D way u portrayed all emotions so perfectly was commendable. .
I also loved how u showed sharon.s efforts n her pain after swayam knowing d truth. .
D way u wrote their patch up was superb again. .
N d final n last part was again bang on. .
D song how u described it lovely. .
U gave it a perfect ending n totally justified d title. .
It was such a pleasure reading dis one. .
Its one of ur finest works. .
I really look forward to reading more write ups from u. .

Ps: 900 posts to go for becoming a rockerz😆
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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