FF:Dancing Beauty, Pg-30 Updated {16/05}

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Disclaimer: I do not in any way own anything related to kasamh se. But i do own this story. This story is purely fiction, its nothing but my mind's imagination.

Warning: Not for kids under 18 !! Mature theme, Violence, use of profanity and some adult scenes in the future parts. (Read ONLY if you can handle these things and are allowed to read this stuff)

Part 1 (pg 3), Part 2A (pg 4) Part 2B (pg 7), Part 2C (pg 9), Part 3A (pg 12), Part 3B (pg 14), Part 4A (pg 17), Part 4B (pg 18), Part 5A (pg 20), Part 5B (pg 21),Part 5C (pg 22), Part 6 (pg 23), Part 7 (pg 24), Part 8 (pg 26),Part 9 (pg 28), Part 10 (pg 30)

The Dancing Beauty
**Preview**

The music grew louder as she started dancing, her body moving to the rhythm capturing men with her moves, her voice giving life to music while she entranced the men with her angelic voice, her beautiful face and stunning body. Every man in the room was intoxicated with her voice, her dance, her beauty and Jai Walia was one of them, he no longer knew why he was in there, or who he had come to meet all his thoughts were on her, the one who seemed to have captured his attention. He sat there for three long hours just watching her moves, listening to her singing, observing the way she dealt with the men, the way she gave the girls to the men, the way she walked, the way her lips moved when she sang or when she talked, her voice was of an angel and her singing was like an enchantment which had him "The Jai Walia" in trance. His body tightened instantly as he watched her moving with the music. His desire for this woman evident as he gazed at her with eyes filled with want.


PS: Please do let me know if you all would like for me to continue this fanfic. If this fanfic is similar to any other fanfic then please do know that it is coincidence .
Any suggestions and comments are welcomed, but please keep in mind that i am posting one of my writings for the first time so please go easy on me

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mb101 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome FF, great start! Please continue soon,




Maro 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ME SECOND!!!!

FIRST THE WORST, SECOND THE BEST 😆

GREAT ff, (SO FAR) 😃

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.... 👏

Edited by afg4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start.
liked it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start,loved it.looking forward to the next part. 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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So Bani is a bar dancer I'm assuming. the theme seems interesting continue soon. Oh and don't worry I'm 20, I can read this.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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completely amazin!!..hope the FF is bout JB romance.. 😳 ...pleeeeez post a part everyday 😳 ..update asap 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was a great start, quite different I must say 😛 .
For the title just my suggestion, how does "THE DANCING BEAUTY" sound.
Pls do continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dancing Queen comes to mind, you like the song... 🤣anyways I'm assuming she's a singer at a nightclub of sorts... jeez Jai are you branching out into more lucratives markets and forget to issue us a memo? Nice, do continue.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi,

Great start, please continue.....I hope the singer is Bani and not Pia.

Nikita

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