Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan(Th 1); NOTE, Pg 151 - Page 92

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

ab aap postman bhi ban gayi😆

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Nice update Aarti.😊

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hmm.. me too want to go for saree shopping in Chennai..😳❤️

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

amazing part loved ashni moments spent on the beach

Originally posted by: sss97

Wow. The update is super awesome. Loved the way u write.

Thank you very much Swathi. 😊

I love Sam seriously its him who gets the Ashni together.

Yes, he has turned out to be very important.

And Nidhi's breakdown n Ashu reconciling her were very nice. Sam sitting quitely beside her shows us how dogs too love us so faithfully.

Thanks for getting that line. EVen I think dogs are very good at picking up our moods.

The update is really awesome. Want to see when Ashutosh confesses actually waiting for it...

Hmmm...

Originally posted by: swati62

I agree totally wish there were more Saturdays in a week. Loved the update.

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Arti absolutely stunning update - loved it so very much. Your writing is a wonderful treat to read. The way you are shaping the story is truly fabulous 👏.

Thank you very much Veena. Its equally exhilarating to hear such words from you. 😃

I had not reviewed for the last two chapters - the bonding on Marina beach with Sam and the last update were also beautifully narrated. But this one is by far your best.

That's alright, I assumed you were busy. But very happy to have you back. 😳 And I do feel honored when you say this is my best one. Thank you

Ashu so sure of his love for her wanting to confess all about himself becoz the fear of losing her is tearing him up. The way he watches her every action on the beach, even the minutest detail about her looks and her watch strap - he has slowly but surely fallen for her and she too is in the same state. Liked the way you have taken the story forward with Ashni in a comfortable time zone.

After his experience with Armaan, who can blame him? 😆 But yes, he has not become attuned, yet the fact that he is still holding off has kept them a little distant as well. And when love has to break some barriers it does take time to develop, so its the same here.

Their tranquil moments on the beach with the four legged wonder adding to their company and Nidhi suddenly feeling self conscious of her wet state, Ashu offering his jacket - wonderful portrayal.

Yes, she feels shy but at the same time she feels close enough to stay in his company. 😳

And then suddenly the phone call, Nidhi breaking down and Ashu offering her the solace and support - their first touch so natural without both of them actually realising it.

Its something that they will think of later, albeit in their own ways.

But the best part of this update was their email convo and Ashu wanting her badly to come out of her sad state offering her an outing and both realising it later as their first date.

Well, he is sensitive and caring. And he loves her enough, has seen her break down that he does not want her to be alone. 😃 But at the same time he is being careful enough to not expose his feelings.

Your narration with Nidhi's frenzied state before she spots Ashu's car near her gate is top class. Brilliant update - just loved it.

Thank you, I enjoyed writing that. In fact I had a smile on my face when I wrote it. 😆

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Hello Aarti...managed to read now...thank you for this Sunday gift..😊

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Dearest Aarti and readers of MKL...