Arhi FF: ~Painful Love~ Chapter one (page 17)

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Hi all, my name is Simran.
I have not written for over a year and i certainly have not updated any of my stories that i have written previously. So those of you who do know me, please forgive me😆
I started reading few ffs earlier and I was kind of inspired to write again. Motivated indeed I was...
So this new idea just popped in my head and I decided to put it down on the paper. Do let me know how this prologue is and whether I should continue or not. And also do check the note at the bottom regarding pms and what not.😳

PAINFUL LOVE

PROLOGUE


Why was life so unfair to her? Did she not have the right to
be happy? Just when she thought things could not get worse, her life became
like an old hag whose mission was to put her down and ruin her life by pushing her much deeper in the black hole of pure
agony and sorrow with no way out what so ever.

He had pushed her away, without listening to her.Without giving her the chance to explain.

Khushi Kumari Gupta had no more tears in her to shed. She
just could not bring herself to cry anymore for some reason. She could not bring herself to function mentally and physically.She jolted out of her thoughts as she heard the train approaching from far.
Finally getting herself to move, she picked up her suitcase and waited as the
train slowed down and then stopped in front of her. Only a few people came out
as she stepped in and sat herself down in her set, clutching her bag as if her
life depended on it.

She was leaving...finally. She was leaving her family, her
in-laws, and the man she had once loved. As the train moved forward, so did her
life and she promised herself she would not be coming back to her past, instead
she was moving towards her future, where hopefully a new life would be waiting
for her, bringing her a better future. She was leaving the fake marriage
behind, and she did not give a damn about the six month marriage contract
anymore. Her past did not matter to her anymore and her feelings definitely did
not matter anymore. She was leaving Delhi forever...

But Devi Maiyaa had something else in store for her dear Khushi of course...

"Arnav..." Khushi whispered as the dark fields passed her eyesight
while the train sped forward...

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I hope you all like this and do like and also comment if you want me to continue. Do note i have not written for over a year, so forgive me for any mistakes and what not!

NOTE: Buddy me for pms please. As of now, I am accepting all requests and over time i will be filtering my friend-list and removing those who do not read my work at all. I don't want to put in the extra effort to pm those who choose not to read my things, No hard feelings

Thanks everyone

-Simran😳


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-HoneyBoo- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!
Future chapter links would be posted here
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Hi...
Sounds interesting...
Will be waiting for it 😊

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I think I remember you! You're Simran who was friends with that other Simran! Right? Or am I completely off. Let me know either way lol.
Idk if you remember me though, Ashiqui? Yeah I was MIA for a while up until recently too!
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Originally posted by: london_doll

I think I remember you! You're Simran who was friends with that other Simran! Right? Or am I completely off. Let me know either way lol.

Idk if you remember me though, Ashiqui? Yeah I was MIA for a while up until recently too!


Yep! I was friends with the other simran. Purplekid was her username!
Haha im not sure but i may have read any of your stories if you had any!
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Wow! Sounds really interesting!

I really can't wait to read this one!

Thanks for the pm! :)
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This is fabulous! I love FFs about the contract marriage! It was my favorite track in the serial!
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Hey after a long time.
Interesting v concept.
Do continue.
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I hate men who abuse their wives physically and mentally
Arnav is going to get lot of hate from me
interesting prologue continue soon
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physical abuse by arnav is smthng new... interesting start

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