New SanDhir FF: Thorns of the Rose. Author's Note - pg 66. pls see.

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Hey guys okay , This is for my best friend (who is not a member of IF) who wants me write something on SanDhir which is mysterious and passionate and humorous but scary at the same time , so here I present to you:
THORNS OF THE ROSE



PROLOGUE:




Randhir stood there still , motionless as he saw the house burning down bits by bits. His life , his dreams , his family , everything was snatched away from him and he had taken an oath to destroy the person who was behind this. The fire in the house depicted his anger , his hatred towards that person who had taken away everything from him. He knew he would never ever get his life back , but he will take his revenge , from HER.


He sensed that someone was walking up to him. And he knew who it was. "Did you find any trace of avantika?" randhir asked his collegue.


"No. Not yet. But don''t worry , she is trained enough and can manage..." before the man could complete , he felt randhir jerking him angrily.


"Parth where is she? I want her safe. In my arms. I can't lose her. She is my only family! She is my best friend and I cannot imagine my life without her!" he cried out.


Parth hugged him. "I know randhir , don't worry , she will be fine!" they broke the hug and parth looked the house which was once "Agarwal Mansion".


"You burnt down the house randhir why?" he asked. But to his shock he saw randhir staring at a photo which was crumpled in his fists just a few minutes ago. He looked at the photo and was shocked.


"Isn't this..."


"Yes , It's Sanyukta Agarwal , the reason behind the lose of my family , the one behind Avantika's grandparent's murder and also the one who was behind my accident 2 months ago!" randhir gritted his teeth.


"I am gonna destroy you Sanyukta Agarwal. I am gonna hunt you down and I will make sure that I will be the one who will be standing next to you during your prosecution and will be hanging you!" he uttered , his body shaking with anger as the two undercover agents look up at the "house of flames" being turned into ashes.


"Love is strange isn't it?" parth smiled sadly.


"Parth if there is a situation where i'll have to choose between my responsibilities as an officer and love , I am gonna choose my responsibility because love is just not worth it anymore!" randhir whispered. Parth sighed and looked here and there.
Just then , their assistant approached them.


"sir , we tracked down avantika ma'am's whereabouts!" he said and went away followed by parth.


Randhir stood there , looking at the house and then at the picture.


"Get ready Ms. Agarwal because Randhir Singh Shekhawat is coming for you!" he gritted his teeth and crumpled the picture in his fists again and ran towards parth.


Little did he know that the person whom he hates so much will be the person whom he wouldn't be able to live without!


Index:

prologue - up
PART 1 - PG 5
PART 2 - PG 9
PART 3 - PG 14
PART 4 - PG 20
PART 5 - PG 27
PART 6 - PG 35
PART 7 - PG 41
PART 8A - PG 49
PART 8B - PG 56


A/N: Okay so this was the prologue. Do tell me if you liked it then I shall continue or this will be an OS. I know im not a good writer but please don't be harsh on me okay!😭 Do hit the "like" button and leave a comment! It really encourages me! Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yippee I'm d first to comment ... 🥳
BTW amazing concept waiting 4 d story 2 unfold...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyarocks

Yippee I'm d first to comment ... 🥳
BTW amazing concept waiting 4 d story 2 unfold...



aww...sure thing sweety! Thank you for liking it!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey..!!!
zoya...kamini...u call this stuff rubbish...? if i was beside u i would hv hit u! 🤣
this is so beautifully written that i am in love with it even before it strts..!!! hw did u manage to do that babes..!!
but gosh girl i love ur bestie for askin u to write this...coz u seem to be amazing in this genre..i always tot u were best at Sadistic works...but u prove me wrong..ur update was so lovely and mysterious.. that i am awaiting an update and a Sad me wont let u live happily!!!
regards
safrena
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: forevermine

hey..!!!

zoya...kamini...u call this stuff rubbish...? if i was beside u i would hv hit u! 🤣
this is so beautifully written that i am in love with it even before it strts..!!! hw did u manage to do that babes..!!
but gosh girl i love ur bestie for askin u to write this...coz u seem to be amazing in this genre..i always tot u were best at Sadistic works...but u prove me wrong..ur update was so lovely and mysterious.. that i am awaiting an update and a Sad me wont let u live happily!!!
regards
safrena



hey bhagwan...mujhe laga tu so gayi...mujhe nahi tu jagi huyi hai...yeh itna bhi acha nahi hai aur meri jo best friend hai na , she literally blackmailed me to write this...i used write this story in our zero-periods in our school aur usko aaj mil gaya aur mujhe dhamki di...ek taraf woh hai aur dusri taraf tum... 🤣 main kitni popular bangayi... 🤣



thanks for liking it...by the way! 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it.. waiting for your next update!!
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Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn

I loved it.. waiting for your next update!!



thank you so much dear!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeh Dekho ! Phir dost kehti ho ..
You wrote an FF and didn't pm me .

I'm res- ing for now , I'll unres abhi only after reading .


UNRES .
The story is intriguing .
This is such a new concept , loved the entire idea .
Hmm undercover coos , just guessing Zoya is your friend's name Avantika ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

Yeh Dekho ! Phir dost kehti ho ..
You wrote an FF and didn't pm me .

I'm res- ing for now , I'll unres abhi only after reading .


UNRES .
The story is intriguing .
This is such a new concept , loved the entire idea .
Hmm undercover coos , just guessing Zoya is your friend's name Avantika ?



Yeah...her name is avantika!😆

tumhe kaise pata?😲


sorry couldn't pm u...i was about to do so...😛

thanks for liking it!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kmaini...!!!!! i was awake...stilll am...kyon u wanted to post when i am nt arround...? hawww!!!!! kitni kamini hai tu..!!!! haan haan number 1 fan jo hooon teri...!!!! u dont even PM me..har bar i hv to stalk u..!!!! moi UNHAPPY!!!!

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