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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome SS :)
Read both the chapters in one go :)
Loved the way Swayam and Sharon were trying to undertand each other :)
As they say silence speaks a lot :)
Great work :)
Update sooon :)
PM me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Previous Chapter

Presenting the 3rd Chapter of the SS.
***

Chapter 3

Swayam called...

Shweta- Haan Swayam...
Swayam- Maa...Dadi ko keh do ki Sharon unse aaj nahi milne aa payegi...bohot kaam hai...
Shweta- Thik hai...aur haan, tum wahi uske saath rukna...
Swayam- Haan, usko ghar chhodte hue aunga...
Shweta- Ohkay, bye...
***

It was 9 now...
Swayam-Sharon, you had your Lunch?
Sharon- Yeah...
Swayam- What about dinner?
Sharon- Umm..don't know actually...n vaise bhi I am not hungry!
Swayam- Okay, then...
***
After the tiring work, they reached Sharon's Mansion...
Swayam- Aur kitna kaam bacha hai?
Sharon- Pura week aisehi jayega... aur late bhi ho sakta hai...
Swayam- Oh, okay..bye..
Sharon- Are..aap andar to aaiye...
Swayam- Sharon, sorry but...ghar par bhi...
Sharon- Acha..okay...bye, take care...
Swayam- Hmm...
***

Dadi was inside his room only...he met Shweta and Rishi and then went to his Room.
He came inside and hugged Dadi...

Dadi- Itna late...
Swayam- Sharon ke saath tha...usko bohot kam tha...
Dadi- Aur tum kya kar rahe the?
Swayam- Laptop pe documants check kiye...kal ka thoda kaam hi kar liya...
Dadi- Ab Sharon ka aur kaam bacha hai kya?
Swayam- Yeah...almost a week...
Dadi- Umm...Swayam, tum hi use ghar chhod diya karo beta, kaafi raat ho jati hai...
Swayam- Ji Dadi...mein soch hi raha tha...
Dadi- Acha...bechari Sharon, mujhse to yeh kaam suna nahi jaata...
Swayam- Hmm...Wo kar legi...
Dadi- Par phir bhi...
Swayam- Dinner???
Dadi- Ohh...fresh hoke aajao...
***

Sharon- Maa...aap Dinner pack kar diya karo na...Office se aane mein late ho jayega.
Rekha- Thik hai, but tum zyada tension mat lena...ye aadat chhodo ab..
Sharon- Haan baba... thik hai.

Sharon went to sleep... and just then her phone rang...Sharon told her to pick up the call... Rekha did...
Swayam- Hello..Sharon...
Rekha- Swayam! Mein Rekha...
Swayam- Ohh...aap..namaste...
Rekha- Namaste, wo so rahi hai...ruko use jaga deti hun...
Swayam- Nahi Aunti, bas itna keh dijiye ki kal se wo mere saath hi Office chale... mein use lene aajaunga and fir chhod bhi dunga...
Rekha- Okay beta, mein keh dungi...
Swayam- Ji...
***

This continued... Swayam and Sharon used to come together... it used to be always that they reached home around 11... Swayam at times used to help her in the work... (Rare) Today was Saturday... which is Official OFF...but they came...
Swayam came to her Office; he went inside the Cabin...and bid her "HY", sat on the chair in front...
Sharon- Hey Swayam...meine yeh socha ki aaj kaam pura kar deti hun...
Swayam- Wo Employee ka bhi? Tum to Sunday bhi work karne wali thi na?
Sharon- Umm... mein try karti hun...sab aaj ho jaye...
Swayam- Fine then...

Sharon nodded... and continued with her work... He kept staring at her..., her work, her concentration... he opened his laptop and started checking Mails.

Hours passed... Sharon literally held her forehead...and squeezed it...which was noticed by Swayam!
Swayam- What happened? Tum thik ho?
Sharon- Yeah...thoda headache hai...
Swayam- You had some food??
Sharon- N...no...
Swayam- Then have it...go...
Sharon- Mujhe bhuk nahi hai, I am fine...
Swayam (little loud)- I said GO... Sharon...
Sharon- Ohh...okay, you?
Swayam- I had it already!

Sharon stood up and took out her tiffin and was having it... Swayam looked at her file on which she was working... he read those documents... he thought of helping her...so that her work load get a little less... He started completing the documents and whatever he could do... Sharon just smiled looking at the sight.
She got up and went to him...
Sharon- Aap rehne dijiye, I'll do it...I had my Dinner.
Swayam- Umm..Sharon, you do some other work, I know this matter as Dad discussed it with me also... This Sharma's deal I am also in knowledge... So you go through other, isse kaam bhi jaldi khatam ho jayega.
Sjaron- Ohkay...

Both started working, they dedication, concentration towards the work... everything was amazing, no talking, they worked as if they were some strangers... not the WOULD BE COUPLE... They only exchanged suggestions if felt like.

Sharon was now smiling... a satisfactory emotion could be seen on her face... Swayam also was at the end of the work.
***

It was 2:30am...
Swayam atood up and kept the w=files on a side and went to wash his face...
Meanwhile Sharon sighed! Even her work finished. She packed her stuff...and turned around...
Here Swayam was coming towards the bag, when Sharon ran and hugged him in excitement... for a second Swayam got a shock... he didn't hug her back...

Sharon- Yippie!! Full work done...So happy...Thanks to you...Sw...
She was about to speak his name when she realized what happened... she immediately left him...and shifted a little back.

Sharon (stammering)- Wo..Aap...M...I, I am S...Sorry... mein wo excite...Sor...
Swayam- Leave...it...its ok...okay.

Sharon just shifted a side, took her bag and went out... He was still amazed... he also went out after taking his stuff!
Both sat in the Car, the situation was awkward... not even a word did they spoke. They reached her home... she mouthed a Thank You; he just gave a light smile. She went towards the door...with a soft blush covering her cheeks, while he drove to his Home.
***

Swayam ignored what happened, he left that matter then and there only, he didn't wanted to exceed that much and create a mess... but here Sharon was in some other world!
She was sitting in front of the mirror...
Sharon *to herself*- Sharon! Yeh kya tha, tera reaction??? Itni excitement mein aa gayi ki hug hi kar liya? Wo bhi aise person ko jiske baare mein tu ab bhi confuse rehti hai ki uski feelings and all? Sharon, unhe kitna ajeeb laga hoga, aur to ayr Car mein kuch baat bhi nahi ki aur blush! Seriously now! You were blushing!!! Means kya sach mein? Is it something? Shayad tu unhe LIKE karne lagi hai... abhi LOVE? No...pehle unko samjh to le...fir sochna... but tu finally??? Tu...ufff!!!

She at that time was smiling looking at herself... She picked her cell...and called him...Why? She also was unknown!
Swayam received the call...he was in half sleep...

Swayam- Hello...
Sharon- Hello, wo...aap...I mean..Sorry...
Swayam- Sorry? Kisliye?
Sharon *in mind*- Yeh bhul gaye?? Huh?
Sharon- Wo abhi 3:30am aapko disturb kiya...
Swayam- Haan, bolo...?
Sharon- Wo...umm haan, kal Office nahi jaa rahi hun mein...
Swayam- I know that... kal ka kaam to aaj hi pura ho gaya na...so ab thodi na jayenge...
Sharon- H..hhan... mujhe laga aap bhul na jaye... Ok Good night.
Swayam- Hmm...Good night.

Swayam cut the call and slept...
Sharon banged her head...with her cell...
Sharon- Ouch! Meine bina soche samjhe unhe call kiya aur kuch bhi baat karli... Wo kya sochenge, unhe disturb kar diya neend se! Damn! Sharon!
***

Sharon woke up at 11... In the whole working life this was the first time she was so late..! And the reason, she was hell tired!

Sharon- Maa...
Rekha- Haan...finally uth gayi!
Sharon- Aaj Dadi se milne jaane wali hun...pura week ho gaya nahi mili...
Rekha- Ohkay thik hai...shaam ko jaana...
Sharon- Yup! Unko surprise dungi, aap batana mat...
Rekha smiled, nodded and left...
***

Dadi was sitting in her Room, reading newspaper. Dadi sensed someone coming inside... she tilted her head little to see who was there.
Dadi- Sharon! Beta...
Sharon- Haan mein hun...

She came inside and sat beside her.
Dadi- Kaisi ho?
Sharon- Achhi hun, aap?
Dadi- Mein bhi achhi hun...
Sharon- Bahar koi dikha nahi, koi nahi hai kya?
Dadi- Swayam thoda Dad ke saath kaam se gaya hai...
Sharon (bit her lips)- Ohh... Acha dadi, aap bataiye na Swayam pehle kaise the, wo hum sagai ke din baat kar rahe the... aapne bola ki aap bataogi.
Dadi- Sharon bohot baate aisi ho gayi ki wo akele mein hi rehne laga...pehle hasi mazak, logon ke saath ghulna milna...ab aisa nahi hai...
Sharon- Kya hua unko???
Dadi- Mein tunhe nahi bataungi beta... kyunki mein chahti hun Swayam khud tumhe yeh bataye...
Sharon- Par kya wo?
Dadi- Mein use jaanti hun wo jab tumse baate share karna khud chahega to wo batayega aur tumpar bhi mujhe bharosa hai ki tum ise kar paogi. Yani wo tum par vishwas karne lagega...
Sharon- Dadi, mein kuch puchu?
Dadi- Haan pucho na?
Sharon- Swayam apse har baat share karte hai na?
Dadi- Haan Sharon...par ab mein chahti hun ki wo sab tumse share kare... apne aap ko tumhare saamne khole...
Sharon- Swayam ko dekh ke mujhe nahi laga ki wo pehle itne open the...
Dadi- Usne apni koi baat Shweta ya Rishi ko tak nah batayi hai...
Sharon- Sachh mein???
Dadi- Haan, Shweta ko samjh aata hai ki Swayam ab akele rehne laga hai...khoya sa...
Sharon- Haan... mujhe laga jab Humara rishta juda tab Maa ne kaha ki wo Swayam ko jaanti hai par Aunti... thoda hesitate karne lagi...
Dadi- Mein jaanti hun na Shweta ko kitna bura lagta hai...
Sharon- To kya aap Aunti ko...
Dadi- Nahi... mein Swayam ki baate apne tak hi rakhti hun, chahti hun bataun par Swayam ko aur hurt nahi dekh sakti usne kasam di thi ki kisi ko kuch na bataye...
Sharon- Ohh... Swayam kitna change ho gaye hai, mein samjh sakti hun...
Da Haan...yeh baat to sahi hai, zarur wo badal gaya hai par kabhi usne wo rishta tutne nahi diya...
Sharon- Kaisa rishta?
***
NOTE BELOW
Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Sorry for delay...I was stuck with my boards! Thanks everyone for liking n commenting!

Now about the chap...How was it Bad? Worst? Or much more?? 😲
Do tell in your comments... Eagerly waiting for them [Likes n comments/criticism ]!😊
Sorry for any grammatical mistake.😛

PM Account: -SwaRonWorksPm-
PS- Length of the chapters will be around the same as above.
Luv,
Sakshi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Wow its amazing Sakshi 👏 😳 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Great update :)
It was amazing :)
Loved it :)
I want to read some Swaron romance :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
I had read 2 chapters before but i realise only now dat i din comment. .
Sorry for dat. .
Well now i shall comment on all 3. .
Dis one was outstanding. .
It is a very different n gripping story. .
Looks like a suspense story 😆
mystery would open wit coming chapters. .
N its becoming more gripping n interesting wit each chapter. .
Am loving it. . Getting deeply involved in d story. .
I simply luv dadi. . Her character well written well thought. .
All 3 chapters very well presented. .
Great going. .
It would be amazing to see how d trust is builded in their relationship n how dey get to know each other more n more. .
Excited to read further. .
U have stopped at a cliff hanger now 😔
Update soon. .
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
nice one.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
aswom update dear...

kha roka apne behna...

plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well done sakshi...
swaron working together, lovely...
bt just work, no romance,,
give some romantic scenes in next update...
swayam has secrets, bt sharon will came to know them soon..
update soon..
thanks 4 d pm

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