SwaRon SS- Pyaar Ka Geet...Dilon Ne Phir Gayaa. 16/4 Ch-9Pg38 LastChap - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
amazing start sakshi😊
Liked the intro
Swayam's past seems to have something in store to read ahead which interest me more
update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Replying to everyone who commented.
But first..Thank you those who LIKED the update...

@Sammy- Thankyou so much yaar! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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@prateek- Glad you liked it..thanks fr cmmnt...😃

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Will try to update asap.!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: -Suni-

lovely updt dear...


Thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First time you r cmmnting on my work...n thn also 2 words cmmnt...!
Btw thanks...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sakshibshah



First time you r cmmnting on my work...n thn also 2 words cmmnt...!
Btw thanks...:)


hmm Btw i am commenting on ur work for the second time 😛 I promise next chapter par bada wala karungi, today is promise day u knw :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Awesome update
Loved the convo between Swaron the way they cleared things
Swayam n his dadi bonding was well penned
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Awesome update

Loved the convo between Swaron the way they cleared things
Swayam n his dadi bonding was well penned


Thanks a lot Sans...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Previous Chapter

Presenting the 2nd Chapter of the SS.
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Chapter 2

In Sharon- Maa... aur kitna tayaar karogi???

Rekha- Are tumhari SAGAI hai...
Sharon- Apko pata hai na mujhe simple rehna zyada pasand hai...
Rekha- Acha thik hai... and haan Shaadi ke din tum kuch bologi nahi mujhe...
Sharon- Maa!! Us din to mein khud...

Rekha gave a light chuckle which made Sharon go pink pink...
***


...Ring Ceremony...

Sharon was sitting...was little nervous... She was wearing a beautiful Net Green Lehenga...with a broad black velvet border... in which stones were studded...and golden work... and a narrow black border above it... The blouse was Black with heavy neck design and net sleeves... The chunri was orangish pink coloured...with stars knitted...and a green-black border with stones...
Even Swayam was looking stunning... with Dark Green Sherwani, on which shining pearls were attached..., and Golden Chudidar...and Golden Dupatta of which one side was at front and other back encircling his neck...

Both stood in front of each other... As said Swayam held her hands, he gave a look to her Dadi and she smiled... he then placed the ring into her finger.
This short Swayam-Dadi was noticed by Sharon... She then softly slid the ring into his finger...
Everyone clapped for them... After the blessing session got over... both the families sat in the Drawing.

Swayam took Dadi into her Room...
Dadi- Swayam! Mujhe tumse aur Sharon se kuch baat karna hai...
Swayam- Thik hai mein abhi bulata hun use...
***

Sharon touched Dadi's feet... She blessed her... Both sat on the bed in front of her...

Dadi- Swayam, Sharon...tumlog samjhdar ho gaye ho... phir bhi kahungi... kabhi ek dure ka saath mat chhodna...
She took Swayam n Sharon's hand and then put Sharon's hand on Swayam's and lightly squeezed it.

Dadi- Yeh sirf naam ki rasm nahi hoti hai... mujhe lagta hai tumllog ise samjhte ho...
Sharon- Dadi...apko fikr karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai... mein inke saath rahungi aur apne rishte ko bandh kar rakhungi.
Dadi- Swayam, tum kuch nahi kahoge??
Swayam- Mein har koshish karunga ki meri wajah se kabhi Sharon ko dukh na pohoche... aur use khush rakhunga...
Dadi- Bilkul beta...

Swayam had tears... he also wasn't getting why they appeared! Sharon was actually confused... one day she sees a Swayam for whom family and relation are secondary and the other day she finds a Swayam totally different!
Swayam hugged her Dadi...and she took Sharon also in her arms... Sharon was just seeing Swayam, his closed eyes... and a content smile played on her lips...

Swayam excused himself...
Swayam- Achha...mujhe bahar ka kaam dekhna hai...aap log baatein karo...
Dadi- Thik hai...jao tum...

Sharon smiled at him and he went out...
Dadi- Sharon... mujhe bataogi tum Swayam ke aankhon mein aasun dekh kar hairan kyun ho gayi?
Sharon- Wo..baat yeh hai ki, unko meine do din mein itna hi jaana ki unke liye rishto aur emotions se zyada important Kaam hai..but abhi jo dekha...
Dadi- Achha...Swayam ne kaha hoga na ki kaam uske liye zaruri hai na ki family, haina?
Sharon- Haan wahi...
Dadi- Tumne abhi use jaana hi kitn hai..wo badal gaya hai...wo kisi ko apni mann ki baat nahi kehta, kabhi uske aakhon mein paani nahi aata... aur aaj...
Sharon- Aaj unke aankhon mein paani apke saamne tha... apse bohot pyaar karte hai na??
Dadi- Haan...wo to hai...par saaln pehle Swayam aisa tha hi nahi...
Sharon- To fir ab wo aise kyun hai??
Dadi- Umm...nahi aaj nahi bataungi...mein chahti hun kit um roz milne aao mujhse...ek bahaana bhi hho jayega..milne ka...
Sharon (smiled) - Thik hai Dadi...Office khatm hote hi aa jaya karungi apse milne...
Dadi- Ye hui na baat...! :P
Sharon laughed and she hugged Dadi...
***

Raiprakash family left the Mansion after Dinner...
Swayam went to the Room... He changed himself in his boxers. Rishi knocked the door...
Swayam- Aajaiye...
Rishi came inside...
Swayam- Ji Papa...
Rishi- Mein bas itna kehne aaya tha kit um ab Office nahi ja rahe ho Shaadi tak...
Swayam- Kya!! Aisa kyun par?
Rishi- Tumhari Shaadi hai...time hi kitna hai...sirf 2 weeks...
Swayam- 2 Weeks! Dad! Sirf! Sirf 2 weeks!!
Rishi- Haan..abhi phone aaya Sharon ke yahan se... panditji ne yahi din bataya...kyunki uske baad fir muhorat bohot late ka hai...aur unko 2 week se koi problem bhi nahi hai.
Swayam- Okay! But mein is week Office jaunga...important deal hai... fir next week I won't...
Rishi- Chalo thik hai...
Rishi went...Swayam also went to sleep.
***
Shekhawats n Raiprakashs were Business Parterners. The Company Name Itself was "Shekhawats n Raiprakashs Company"!
Where Swayam handled the whole management of 1st Branch and Sharon looked after the Accounts as she was a CA, she was in 2nd Branch.
***

Sharon woke up early and after taking bath and changing into Formal Dress.. she went into the kitchen... She thought of making "Gajar ka halwa" for Swayam's Family...
[Remember Dadi asked her to come home everyday]

Sharon- Agar mein Office ke baad le jaungi to pura maza kharab ho jayega.. aisa karti hun Office jaane se pehle de dungi ye and Office ke baad milne jaungi...

From behind her mother came smiling...
Rekjha- Ohoo, abhi se impress karne ki tyaari ho rahi hai...
Sharon- Are nahi Maa...apko bataya than a Dadi ka pyaar wala Order...
Rekha- Wo to hoga hi...umm..kya wo..haan..Pari hai...Dad kehte kehte hai na "Jo Sabke Jeevan Ko Roshni Se Bhar Degi"
Sharon looked at her with pleading eyes... Renuka understood...
Sharon- Maa...please...ye Roshini related word!! Mein chahti hun in sab ko avoid karna aur aap...
Rekha- Sorry Sharon! Mein bhul gayi this ach mein... acha chalo tum bahar jao mein pack karti hun tiffin...

Sharon left her work and went to her room...
***

Swayam was ready for Office and was having breakfast... his whole family was there...A minute after the Door bell Rang! The Servant went and opened the door... It was Sharon... Shweta saw her and went to her...
Shweta- Sharon..tum yahan...are aao na andar...
Sharon- Nahi..aunti wo mein apko Gajar ka Halwa dene aayi thi...fir Office se laut te waqt milne aaungi...
Shweta- Kitne lucky hai hum, ki subah subah tumhare haath ka sweet khane ko mila...chalo andar aao to...

She held her hand and both made their way to dining.
Dadi- Sharon..are waah...aao baitho...
Sharon- Dadi..mein sham ko aungi...abhi late ho raha hai...
Dadi- Acha...Swayam bhi Office ke liye nikal raha hai..wo tumhe chhod dega...Jao Swayam..
Swayam- Haan..Wait a minute...

He after his meal..got up, washed hands... took his bag and Laptop andboth sat in his Car...
Sharon came by Car so she told the Driver to take it home...

In his Car...he sat on Driver's seat and Sharon to his right...
She, today, was quiet... she was lost in some world...of thoughts..., some "specific words/ lines" grabbed her mind and she was in their trance...


"You Can Make Anyone's Life Shine"

"You Are a Shining Star"

"Jo Sabke Jeevan Mein Roshni Bhar Degi"

Yes! Swayam noticed her...she was loking outside resting her head on window's corner... he found that weird... but didn't spoke... he switched ON the FM... This didn't work!

Swayam- Sharon...
She flinched a bit and looked at him...
Sharon- Hmm..y..yeah...
Swayam- You okay with Songs??
Sharon- I Lo... uh...I am okay!
Swayam (confused)- Ohh..okay...

She once again turned to the side... feeling the nature's creations... Swayam after a while stopped the car...
They reached her office... Swayam tapped her shoulder...

Swayam- Your Office..
Sharon- Ohh... thanks..
Swayam- I'll be there...at 8...
Sharon- Yeah...

She turned around and made her way inside the Office gate... And Swayam to his destination...

Swayam- Aaj Sharon kuch alag lag rahi thi... lost si... hgar aayi thi tab bhi na zyada bola, na smile and Car mein...ise Songs pasand hai bhi ya nahi? Kuch samjha nahi bolte bolte ruk gayi... umm hoga kuch... but overall... koi problem nahi hai mujhe usse...Am Okay with her ..shayad fir bhi..I ca...phew!

He let go off his thoughts and started his work!
***

In Sharon's office...
She was busy attending a VIP, after he left... She took her Laptop and was searching some important documents when a person knocked She called that person IN ... she was an employee.

Sharon- Yes Rina...
Rina- Mam!!! Can I get leave for two days?
Sharon- Firstly, Calm down! Then btao kya hua?
Rina- Mam, my husband got a severe heart attack... and the neighbors informed me...
Sharon- Ohh..okay..you go...don't worry okay? And if you need more leave you are free...
Rina- Thankyou so much Mam..!
She left..

Sharon- What to do now?? Dad's work! The Accounts... and now Rina's work...jo ki mujhe hi karna padega...
And morepver Dadi se milna tha..!! Ohh..Shittt!!! Ab??!!

She in frustration shook her head and in worry placed her hand on head... After minutes, she sighed...and continued her work...
***

It was 8:10, Swayam reached her Office... Most of the employees and other already left, few were leaving who wished him and he reciprocated... He went inside and searched for her Cabin...
He found it and knocked!

Sharon- Who's there... come in please...
He came inside, she was busy with her work.
Swayam- Sharon, it's me..Swayam...
She immediately looked up...
Sharon- Ohh...aap...
Swayam- Aren't you leaving??
Sharon- It's just that...for this week I am overloaded with work! Will have to do Dad's work, my Accounts and also handle one employee's work as she's on urgent leave...
Swayam- A Week!!
Sharon- I am sorry...and please aap Dadi ko keh dijiye ki mein unse milna nahi aa paungi aaj...
Swayam- No worry..Dadi samajh jayengi...I'll call now...

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NOTE ON NEXT PAGE


Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Sorry Sorry Sorry for delay...In this SS,...Swayam's Dadi will shown close to SwaRon n also plays a major role...
Now about the chap...How was it Bad? Worst? Or much more?? 😲
Do tell in your comments...😊
Sorry for any grammatical mistake.😛

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PS- Length of the chapters will be around the same as above.
Luv,
Sakshi.
Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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